[Report This]Date: June 29 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like the story but one question, what's wrong with this guy.
Author's Response:
Haha, good question! I assume a traumatic childhood/life. Or perhaps he just always wakes on the wrong side of the bed.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow you really know how to manipulate your readers emotions. Onia was so sweet and innovent at the start like a loyal puppy and Peric was abusing her. At first I was rooting for him to get his come uppance. But then when Onia said she liked him I was rooting for their new relationship. I was worried her personality was going to change when she grew and she converted to a omnivore, but she did want to take care of Peric even in her tummy. Hopefully when it warms up she will realize she just needs to puke again to get him out.
Author's Response:
Yes, let's hope so. I'll probably have to do a sequel to one (or both) of the Fyth stories at some point.
Thanks for the review!
Date: March 23 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
While waiting for the next YouTube chapter, I've been wanting to read more of your stuff, so I went and read all your stories but the French one. I have to say I really liked all of them. I tried reading the continuation that other guy did if Luna, but I couldn't make it more than halfway through the first chapter, the characters just didn't feel the same. But I liked the Fyth stories especially. It's a super interesting concept, a world where the giantesses are the subjugated ones. But other than that, I like your stories because they're all mostly gentle, worlds in which tinies are either respected or protected and treated with care. Can't wait for the next YouTube chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm taking a little break from YouTube. I'll get back to it, but I just need a bit of time.
I published a premium story on Deviant Art (spookytaco7.deviantart.com). Feel free to check that out if you want.
Also, if you want the non-French version of Splinter's Edge, you can get it here: tinyurl.com/npbfgzu
It's quite long so it will keep you reading while you wait for YouTube. ;)
[Report This]Date: November 13 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story. The characters are well developed and we can get a sense of the inner turmoil brewing. Again, keep up the excellent writing.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Pretty good overall but I can tell you REALLY wanted to squeeze this into 5 chapters. Peric's character suddenly felt alot different after chapter 3 out of left field. Onia didn't really have much of a character other that she's really dumb. The ending I will say was pretty well executed, i'll give you that! Anyway, as you can tell I did like Farmhand better but that's okay, this story was also really good!
One little universe inconsistency I found was that in this story Fyth blood is clearly green, but in the other while we don't get much blood we do get that scene where what his face hits Alani. There we get this line: "I nodded, glancing at the whip, its tip now tinged with red." So are there different types of Fyths or is this just a small error?
Anyway I hope you decide to revisit this universe, preferrably the Farmhand characters but that's just me! Thanks for writting this for us, good luck with whatever you have planned next!
Author's Response:
Excellent points, geeman! This is the first story I've ever attempted to fit in a length limit and you picked up on some of the negative consequences. I think characters undergoing change is a big part of any story, however I can see how Peric's felt a bit too fast.
Great catch on the color of Fyth blood. You really surprised me on that one. It could be explained by their diet (Alani eating Rouean vs Onia eating vegetation). Regardless, I'll need to think of some way to handle it when I write a third story in the universe.
I'm just amazed you remembered that. I should've re-read my original story before posting this one. I read the 'cliffs notes' version, but it wasn't sufficient.
Thanks for the honest feedback!
Date: November 09 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy hell. This was fucking amazing. Damn it, ST, I wish I could write like you. If I could, maybe people would actually contribute to CoG like I ask lol
But seriously, bravo. No one out of character, and an ambiguous ending that let's everyone believe what they wish without feeling like a slap in the face. *high fives*
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment, Silent-One! I like a small cast of characters when writing because it allows me to make each more distinct and memorable. Same with reading epic fantasy. I sometimes find myself skimming over chapters until I reach the character I like.
As for the ambiguous ending, it just kinda happened that way. Originally, I'd intended it to be a tragedy ending in Peric's death. But, he just refused to die, and Onia was gentle to a fault like most Fyths. So, I left it open ended-ish, with a positive spin. One day I see myself writing a sequel to a Fyth story.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa, Spooky, ...that was incredible! I've never quite experienced anything like that! Vore usually repulses me, ...but, being a Fyth it seemed so much more acceptable. The thought of her previous owner perishing inside her stomach;after he found the skull, was a terrifying image to deal with, but, considering that he must have lost it, and went crazy in there, Peric seemed to deal with it in a more relaxed way, ...focusing on more positive images, and imagining things to pass the time away, ...I'm hoping that she eventually expelled him from her warm belly and the two of them are still carrying on together...
Onia do very GOOD! Fascinating Tale, Spooky! Loved It! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thanks, midnight! I'm usually not a fan of vore either. In researching this, I discovered a new word: endosomatophilia. Amazing how there's a name for every fetish.
As for the previous owner going crazy, it's hard to know. I left it somewhat open ended. Peric mentioned that had her stomach been smaller (had she not evolved) he likely would've been unable to survive in there for long. So maybe Tomas went crazy, or maybe he simply drowned or died through some other method.
Date: November 07 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Didn't expect Persic to stick up Onia's ass but given the context , it kind of makes sense since they see Fyths as cattle. Did I read that correctly, they eat Fyth poop? Its kale or something like that.
I honestly didn't expect to see this type of scene in a story of yours. I did like the backstory provided of Persic and Onia, seems they both were abandoned. I do hope he treats Onia better towards the end of this, she deserves it.
Author's Response:
Yes, you read correctly. Fyth poop has, for better or worse, the same name as the vegetable kale in this world. It's edible and tastes like tofu.
As for treating Onia better, let's hope he's turned over a new leaf. We'll see soon. Thanks for reviewing, Nostory!
Date: November 07 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm not sure how you're gonna be able to do anything meaningful with this story in just two more chapters but I'm looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
I cheated. The chapters get longer. :)
Date: November 07 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy fuck, you seem to enjoy writing the Fyth(pl.?) suffering, what with both Farmhand and this. I kinda just want to give Onia a hug, because it pains my little heart to have someone suffer for something they're not doing intentionally, someone who doesn't even know what they did wrong but knows what anger from others means.
Still, though, more great work from one of my favorite writers on the site.
Author's Response:
I agree. I even had to remove the 'gentle' tag, which I rarely ever do. Peric was more cruel than what I'd expected. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
L O L ! I nearly cracked a rib reading this! ;`) So flipping funny!
So elegantly written, so perfectly exemplified - 'POOP!' Yes, I said, 'POOP!'
Shit, Man, ...goog thing it didn't stink, huh? Would have killed him for sure! Ha Ha!
I'm starting to wish that I had a Fyth of my own, ...I'd tell her to carry me around all of the time. She would have to bath more frequently, though, and maybe wear a thong bikini, too. But, yeah, ...I could dig it!
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad you found it funny. And I agree, a Fyth would be awesome. I'd treat her a lot better than Peric, that's for sure.
Date: November 06 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Farmhand was my favorite of your stories. Even tho we didn't exactly return to those characters this universe itself is interesting enough to keep my attention!
Author's Response:
Thanks geeman! Hopefully you enjoy this story.
Date: November 05 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
What? Stop being mean!!!
Author's Response:
That's what I was saying when I was reading about Joy and Brittany. :)
Date: November 05 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't like the guy , the Fyth tend to get sympathy from me, its sad they're basically slaves. So large but unable to fight back, utterly subservient. I hope things get better, for the both of them.
Author's Response:
I don't like him much either. Hopefully he changes as the story progresses or Onia finds a way to deal with him. Thanks for the review, Nostory.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
In the chapter end notes, did you mean to say 'Five' chapters? Instead of 'fyve' ? Ha!
This is really pretty cool, Spooky. The 'Other-worldly' aspect of this place is very interesting, ...I seemed to find it a slightly humorous, at first; the thought of a giantess being persuaded by this miniature humanoid-type creature. The tree names are pretty cool. And, the fact that her blood is green, too. It's easy to imagine what's taking place, even from the standpoint of an alien...
I started to take it more seriously after the 'Punishment scene' I could get into this as a much long story, ...Or, is this just testing the waters to see if people react to it?
I like it. But, It seems like a lot of work to create such an elaborate tale, and then make it so short? (Only Fyve chapters)
Author's Response:
Lol, I noticed my first 'Fyth' story was five chapters so decided to stick with the length of 'fyve' ;)
Since I have a tendency to not finish stories, it forces me to complete the story in five chapters. Plus I made it a series, the Fyth universe so to speak. Each short story contributes to building out the universe, so extra detail I add doesn't get wasted. They can be read independently, but they're also doing a bit of world building.
Thanks for the first review!