[Report This]Date: January 02 2010 1:01 PM Title: Introduction and beginnings
AWESOME.......................
I love micro civilization stories and this one takes the cake BIG time. Hope you finish this. Sequel or something.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2008 8:45 PM Title: The Devistation of Lesley
Another excellent story. It's hard to orient yourself in the city because of all of the shoes, but it's not really important either. I'd like to see you continue this one, or maybe a sequel?
Date: April 13 2007 2:26 AM Title: The Devistation of Lesley
cool, love the description of all the destruction. Maybe some barefoot action next time? :)
Date: April 09 2007 10:46 AM Title: The Devistation of Lesley
I loved the way this chapter ended, very powerful. Keep it going.
Date: April 06 2007 8:14 PM Title: Lesly Ventures In to Lauren's closet
Cool new story, I like the description of the little city as well, and the fact that Leslie is a lot bigger than her sister. It makes her seem more menacing
[Report This]Date: April 06 2007 5:51 PM Title: Introduction and beginnings
Please continue--this is a great story
[Report This]Date: April 06 2007 11:43 AM Title: Lesly Ventures In to Lauren's closet
I really digged the descrptions of laurenville and peek into there lifestyle. This is fantastic.
[Report This]Date: April 05 2007 8:02 PM Title: Introduction and beginnings
I have always liked these micro civilization stories. Good job thus far someguy.