Hi hi ^^

Yu is pure love! I fear she will make it more difficult for me to choose a favorite now since I was already having enough trouble. I liked doppels a lot already but this girl was just totally adorable.

Though, lots of mystery surrounds her. I can't conclude too much from the current chapter but it does seem like a really tragic past. Also, I wonder why she's helping Abby. Maybe she looks like her previous mate or something similar? Or maybe she's allied with Eve in some way. I suppose it should be really important since she's going through a lot for the tiny. Did she have some plan in case Abby didn't allow her to get her energy...? It's also uncertain for me if the other girls know about her.

Also, very interesting and mysterious way for her to collect energy. I wonder if Yu was just with her eyes closed or maybe took a different form...? Also from I can gather I think she vored Abby in some way to extract even her saliva or something similar to that.

On that note, is she really healed? I hope she's not just transforming and fooling Abby into believing she is indeed alright now...

Anyway, interesting chapter. Really does makes me want to know more about Yu in different ways. Though I also wonder what's going on on Ebon's side.. Whichever you're doing next, I'm sure it'll be interesting too.

As for the secrets, I don't know. Feels a bit frustrating not being able to guess some stuff in a bit. Though, if related to the imgur, maybe "..."? You might understand if so.

See ya~

The weekend is here and that means free time!

Cute act between the twins, Casey and Abby. Nice to have more background about Amy, I wonder when we'll get to hear what happened that night since that info seems quite limited. Also, who would have thought that Amy wasn't on the dumb side and actually was pretty intelligent for her species standard lol.

I didn't expect Ebon here at all, to be honest. It was a nice action scene, is pretty cool that Casey now was more useful when facing off the dragon, hopefully, she's not too hurt... Same with the twins, they had quite nice moments to shine on this one. Though, Ebon keeps showing she's a beast. Hope Emma gets better soon...

Now, I wonder if Eve knows Abby is safe. Ebon's health might depend on that. Also, what measures will take the vampire about Ebon. The option to kill her is there of course and she should be really mad right now but she knows that would upset her little Abby. Maybe she'll hurt her to a point she can move? Shrinking her doesn't really seem to be an option but I have to say it would be funny to have a tiny Ebon, maybe being captive by Poppy.

About the next girl, I'm unsure about her species but her powers seem pretty cool. I feel a bit frustrated that I forgot about her previous appearance in chapter 8... For the one in chapter 13, I have to agree that it might be when Abby was saved from the flames. I wouldn't have noticed if I didn't read your comments though. Eager to see what happens to her.

Also, very cute how Casey kept calling Abby her storeen.

See ya~

I'm early-ish on this one =P

I have a bit of fear for birds, so having an enormous harpy in front of me could be terrifying, I have to agree with Abby on that...

Well, Amy is a really cute girl. Though, I can see why she would be difficult to write. Seems like she got a nice start with Abby, compared to some of the other girls, even if the teen was scared of her at the start and a bit later on.

Also, Abby still lets her curiosity take priority when choosing what to do, though I can't blame her. I'm also curious about how Najia got ahold of Amy's egg.

And well, nice scare got Abby there, it was pretty well written. Good thing she noticed what was going on quick enough. However, I do feel a bit bad for her dress, hope Eve isn't really too upset about it...

It was mostly a cute interaction between Amy and Abby from here. Glad she tiny got a breather for a bit. There's also a hint about Ebon's (?) relationship with Amy, which seems to be a rather nice one. If she actually referred to Ebon, of course.

The ending was also really cute, with Casey finally getting something nice ^^ I still don't know who I want Abby to be with ;_;

A cute chapter indeed.

Oh, and I guess that's where the vore tag comes from. Congrats on fulfilling that.

See ya~

Hi! I'm now a bit earlier than the last time. Hope to be able to keep the free time for reading...

So, starting with another flashback. I wonder what triggers them? I tried figuring out the monster's identity in Abby's dream but seem like I can't pinpoint it yet. At first, I thought it might be some kind of elf because of the ears but it might be something more demon-like.

Moving on, pretty cute and informative session with Abby and Eve. Too bad for them that it was more informative than sexy. I wonder about Enya's identity but not a clue now. So far I can only think of a Lamia because it was mentioned before but really is just a vague guess. It should be a strong kind though, I suppose. Also makes me wonder about her past since she might have human blood running through her?

Poppy smelling earthly is just Eve way of saying she's sweaty...? lol

Anyway, lavender and lemon on the scene, somehow I found them even more adorable this time! And their first encounter with Eve was somehow cute, even in that scary situation. Glad to hear Eve isn't too pained about Abby losing her clothes one way or another. Rather sad to see such a hard work wasted all the time.

I think I know who the next girl is but will wait to confirm my theories in the next one. Nice chapter.

See ya~

This is really a very special story, with the fantasy and human vs monster element. Very good idea and well written and developed with all the different characters and very much depth, really great.

Only thing i notice a very little bit negative is the very slow progress since Abby arrived in the cave. How often was she already taken to eve´s cave without any real progress and Naija still in coma, many things seem to delay almost to timestop speed awaiting to finally happen. Ok you use the time to improve the developement of the world around Abby in all directions every now and then a little bit while no real full steps in any direction ever happen... almost a sneaking progress in a cirle all around abby in snail speed.

Everytime i hope now happens something like yeah eve and abby mate.. nope abby pulls the parachute cord in the very last moment basicly nothing happend again after all that chaptor.

But its like that in many stories here as of lately, i am seriously consiering to do a giantessworld vacation and return in a few month to hopefully find some progress in my favorite stories, similar to wait till a few more tv series episodes got aired before continue watching.

Sorry for behing honest.

I think I get Eve more now. That was one flashback. I'm also glad that she somewhat accepted Abby not wanting to be her mate. Good for Abby! I think she made the right call not going into something as serious as become Eve's mate without putting thought to it first. 

Hope Franchise gets better, having a cold sucks. Trust me, I know -_-

Work kept me away from this longer than expected, but finally I could read it!

It was really sad to see Eve denying she's not human anymore. The method to test it was effective sure, but really harsh. I suppose it was the only way to make it clear to her, I guess...

The naga attack, wow, seems like the tales about Najia weren't exaggerations. Good thing, since Eve was very close on that one. I wonder if that's when Eve started changing her mindset about the kitsune or maybe it was a thing coming forward since she was found by her?

Anyway, time keeps passing. Najia and Eve had a nice and fun relationship until more people got in the picture. I hope Najia picked up Eve's true feelings... Or even if she didn't right there, hope she got to know how she actually feels about her before she got to her current state. And well, I guess Eve was always the jealous kind.

Ebon's apparition but I don't think there're many clues about her past in there, or at least I didn't really notice them. Impressive she was able to fight Eve though. I remember the vampire mentioned that about their first encounter but being it after part of Najia's training does say a lot about it. Also, wonder if she also trained the others.

Feel uneasy about what is to come, since Eve said it was the thing she regrets the most. We've seen Brook is safe already so things couldn't have ended up totally bad, hopefully... Looking forward to the conclusion!

See ya~

I've been wanting to read the chapter since it was uploaded but it was a really tough week ;_;

Have to say, I didn't really feel much for Caitriona in the previous chapter so I didn't expect to feel so bad for her now. The poor lady might've been Eve's biggest ally and got it really bad. It was so satisfying to see her trying to get her master to see Eve, yet it was so sad... At least she's safe, I suppose. By the way, I have a bit of trouble picturing her, I wonder how old she's supposed to be.

As for Ventris, seeing him acting so shaken... The who guy stood up to a vampire with almost total composure was acting nervous. That gets to show how much he actually felt for her daughter, and that the fear and hate towards vampires took priority, making killing her the only viable option. At least that's what I want to think, that even if she was an heiress for the most part, some love as there. It could've been the frustration of losing his heiress but, that's even sadder...  I wonder if he was looking for any other alternatives all this time or just stalling the inevitable...

Is really a world without any intention of communication within species. Seeing Eve's wonderful recuperation, it makes you wonder how much more could be done if all species worked together. I also think of how much everything could've changed if the vampire had managed to take Eve under his wings.

And of course, Eveline is the one that had it the worst. Left in the dark about her current condition. Gradually being separated from other human's contact. Every day being treated more like a best instead of a human. And finally being betrayed by her own family... Man, why did it have to be so sad ;_; And depending on how much Naija knew about vampires, the poor girl might have had to learn the down of her conditions by painful tray an error, just as when trying to enter that building in this chapter.

And seeing Naija in action is nice, she strikes as someone with a big heart from the start. Also, must feel nice to be embraced by a fluffy tail.

As some other have pointed, I was curious about Eve's past length. It's been great of course but having these much screen time feels as if she's on a protagonist level higher than the other girls. Not that there's anything wrong with that if that's the aim. N-not that I'm saying I want some more insight on Casey or anything...

Excellent chapter.

See ya.

Eve's had it rough. It's not bad at all to get the scoop on how she wound up the way she did though, so these chapters are enjoyable.

Like i've said before though, I have been keeping up with all of your updates since PLD, so you don't need to worry about my enjoyment lol!

Also, i'm with Sirk, seeing Ebon's backstory is a definite want lol

Finally some free time to post a review.

We get some answers about Eve but still far from the whole truth. I wonder what happened with doctor Bowers...

There was a lot of tension when the vampire appeared and at the scenes. I could feel he was taking the spotlight every time. Also like the was is implied he's lightly using his powers to keep control of the situation on his first visit. His prideful personality goes well with the usual concept of vampire.

I like the way Ventris was portrayed, he struck me as a very imponent and calm man, one that focuses on something and does what is needed to get to it, most likely having a concept of morals different than usual but not someone "bad". That's the part that I liked, that he doesn't seem like evil but like someone with different priorities. Albeit, quite merciless.

I'm still a bit doubtful about the reason Eve was happy when told she was dying. I can see now how she wanted attention as the vampire mentioned seems his father looks like a busy man or someone with the focus in other matters and her mother... I don't really know about her but it was implied she checks on Eve even less than her father. For a moment it made me think she wanted to relieve or escape on death from being abused in some way but it doesn't seem to be like that, not physically at least

The whole confrontation both parties had in the end was really nice. The way the vampire looked down on humans and how they counter him was also good to see, it keeps showing that discrimination goes both ways and that every side has their ways of fighting back.

The ominous message by the end of the chapter keeps me intrigued. At first, I thought that Eve would get some retaliation for killing the one that made him a vampire since that happens in some of the vampire lore with their servants, but she seems to be a full-fledged vampire and seems fine so it's not the case.

Oh, and the part in which Eve comes back to life startling the maid was also nice.

See ya~