I'm really sorry it took me this long to read the new chapter ;_;

Now with that out of my chest, onto the chapter.

Casey seems to be planning something special, with a kind of obvious intention. Meanwhile, Kari is acting more suspicious. I now have some idea of what she might be hiding but I'll have to wait and see.

Also, now we get to know Najia is waking up in 1 or 2 days. really wonder how will the story go from there. I'm a bit scared to ask but, does Najia's awakening means the story is getting to its end?

Now about the star of the chapter. Nya was very cute in this one. While reading her flashback for some reason I kind of pictured a Disney movie lol. Sadly, the ending wasn't as happy as a Disney movie...

While is good that Najia managed to pick her up, can't put away the thought of Nya's mother... Hope she's okay, though, that would only mean she's still looking for her child... Doesn't seem like a bright future either way. Also, I wonder if it was awkward to write scenes in which most of the dialogue was "Nyaa".

The ending with the belly rub was cute! Nice one that Abby decided to went onwards, to not hurt Nya's feelings.

Looking forward to the next one, specially since it seems it'll be Casey-centered. However, I'll be traveling in a couple of weeks so I'm unsure when I'll be able to read it... Still, I'm sure it'll be a nice one.

See ya~

Hey! This one took me waaay more than usual but finally managed to find time for reading the new chapter.

But first, I wanted to congratulate you on getting 100 reviews. So, congrats!

Now onto the chapter, well it was more of a transition chapter. Yu seems to have a full recovery, or close to one at least, and that's great. Very sweet her last interaction.

Eve had a short apparition but dropped the comment on how Ebon will never bother them again. Really curious on how she managed that. On other scenarios, I might think she lied in some way but I doubt she would do that to Abby.  I suppose there was some kind of blackmail going on? Also, indeed it seems Ebon still worried about the other girls and won't really harm them even when trying to get to Abby. I wonder if Casey also noticed this or just wrote it off as the dragon being tired or something. Oh, and I'm curious on how far will Casey get in terms of power, she seems to be doing nice progress.

For Kari, is nice to see her after so long. Cute as ever, but left us with the doubt of what she's hiding. I'm a bit out of ideas for this one, to be honest. I don't think there was space for Kari to do some foul play or something that would Abby in some way from the start. Maybe later on?

There's also the question of how will stuff proceed after Najia wakes up, and whether they'll try to unshrink Abby right after that. Though, I kind of would like her to stay like that of course, haha.

See ya~

Oh, I've been thinking and... Is the truth that Kari did shrink and brought her on purpose, I mean, she went exactly for her help, as if she knew that she would help them, she could have gone to another doctor or something, someone who was actually experienced and such, I dont think it was a coincidence that just when the real doctor left, Kari appeared, maybe she saw her from afar or something... I mean, it doesn't seem like something Kari would do, she is so nice after all, but that is something that the readers aren't expecting, and she does seem like the type of person who would do anything to help someone she loves; Najia. And yeah, I don't think she ever wanted to put her in danger, she just wanted Abby to help them. That would also explain why she is feeling guilty everytime Abby gets hurt, since it wast part of her plan, though she could feel guilty because it was an accident aftter all. But still, I think it could be a possibility...

My theories are so crazy xD

Oh, no, no, of course I like Yu, I even said I find her adorable. Didn't mean to say she had the intention of deceiving Clarette or doing any wrong to her, I know Yu's acts were out of pure love. Just wanted to point out that she was deceiving her in the end, and that most "humans" might have focused on that. Unlike Abby who had a different point of view.

Also, of course Abby having changes in her judgment in the normal thing in that situation, just pointing out how she's been going from one side to the other, nothing wrong with that.

And yes, I do agree that Clarette wasn't really a strong-willed person so her future without Yu didn't seem too shiny either.

Hope there were no misunderstandings in what I said D:

So... Wow, I have to say, just wow. I read this entire story up until this point in a single day because I really didn't want to put it down, very very good job. I honestly almost forgot it wasn't an actual writing submission instead of something posted on this website, so spectacular job in that. I actually was so floored by the quality I'm going to give it a more "actual" review instead of what I'd normally give to stores on this website, because this legit deserves it.

So first off, let me just say it, this story had legitemently one of the best character development of anything I've seen on this website, and honestly better than most things I've seen online regardless of their aim, which for a "giantess" focused story is exceptional, bravo. The time and focus you've taken on each character and the world building you have done is exceptional, and is the main reason this story has stuck out to me as much as it has. A lot of the time I was reading chapters and the fact that Abby was shrunken seemed like more a necessary plot point than anything else, which is impressive as normally that part of the story is kinda forced.

Another thing this story did extremely well is it didn't just force the giantess interaction down your throat, and take every single situation it could have to be fetish heavy and distract the story itself. It took itself seriously, and what elements there were of that fit into the overall world you had built. Sure, it seemed semi-forced when it first showed up, but accepting the world build as it was, it wasn't an unnecessary action which worked a lot better than most things this site features.

One thing I think the story kinda limits itself in oddly is the monster girls nature itself. Its kinda... odd, but I think early on the differences between the girls and "normal" humans was highlighted more, and they seemed more otherworldly, but until recently with Yu, it seemed like they were kinda... almost humanized too much in a way. I don't know exactly how to say it, but like with Casey, the fact that she is a dullahan was only really important in her backstory and early on, he "nature" as a monster girl really sort of got lost in a way later in the story. I kinda get that its because Abby is viewing them more like just regular "people" instead of monsters, which is part of the development in the story, but viewpoints aside they are actually different. Its not a bad thing, something I just noticed as I read the story. The quality picked up through the story it seemed, but in some ways the girls themselves were more humanized as time went on as well.

Overall though, easily my most enjoyed read on this website, and look forward for more updates in the future, really enjoying the direction of the story and can't wait to see how it develops in the future! Great job :)

So, so, so, sad T-T, I figured Yu had a tragic story, but... It's so depressing. Though, the story kind of reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, (Not only because of the similar name xD), the thing that reminded me of it is that Romeo and Juliet, did kill theirselves, just like Clarette did, and Yu attempted to do, because of their love, AND misunderstandings. Romeo killed himself when he though Juliet died, and Clarette killed herself because she though that Yu didnt like her. I blame communication xD

However, it's still good that Abby is staying, I figured she would, but always expect the unexpected. :'D

Chapter summary in feeling: Expect a happy chapter because of how the chapter starts, then be depressed because of what Yu had to go through, and finally be happy because Abby is staying. Cough cough, if she is not killed before that actually happens... Cough cough

When are you going to update the next chapter? 

Can’t wait!!!
P.S. don’t strain yourself

Author's Response: I never do. This story is one if my favorite activities. Life’s more of a strain on it really, lol. Glad to see a new face, welcome to my world :D

The weekend is here and that means free time!

Cute act between the twins, Casey and Abby. Nice to have more background about Amy, I wonder when we'll get to hear what happened that night since that info seems quite limited. Also, who would have thought that Amy wasn't on the dumb side and actually was pretty intelligent for her species standard lol.

I didn't expect Ebon here at all, to be honest. It was a nice action scene, is pretty cool that Casey now was more useful when facing off the dragon, hopefully, she's not too hurt... Same with the twins, they had quite nice moments to shine on this one. Though, Ebon keeps showing she's a beast. Hope Emma gets better soon...

Now, I wonder if Eve knows Abby is safe. Ebon's health might depend on that. Also, what measures will take the vampire about Ebon. The option to kill her is there of course and she should be really mad right now but she knows that would upset her little Abby. Maybe she'll hurt her to a point she can move? Shrinking her doesn't really seem to be an option but I have to say it would be funny to have a tiny Ebon, maybe being captive by Poppy.

About the next girl, I'm unsure about her species but her powers seem pretty cool. I feel a bit frustrated that I forgot about her previous appearance in chapter 8... For the one in chapter 13, I have to agree that it might be when Abby was saved from the flames. I wouldn't have noticed if I didn't read your comments though. Eager to see what happens to her.

Also, very cute how Casey kept calling Abby her storeen.

See ya~

OH WAIT!!!!!!! Was the appereance in the nighmares? Is she the one of the dreams?????? As far as I know she had TWO nightmares in which the mystery monster appears, and has blood red eyes, and fangs. But what I'm wondering is.... Was the one in the dreams trying to help her, or did she do the fire?

P.s, it seems like I'm writting too many comments, but I cant help it! xD

Wait, wait, wait. I'm having a theory. Is 'Eve' the monster that everyone fears? I mean, like a split personality or something. It would explain how Eve said that the other monster that hated humans was 'sleeping' and would be for a long time. And it would explain the change in behaviour that Even had in the 'Date'. ORRRRRRR, maybe Eve's sister? That would explain why she looks like her, but it wouldnt make sense since Eve was writting the letters to her and she said she was still a kid AND human. ORRRRRR maybe its a monster that can change the appearance, and maybe showed herself before in other's bodies and thats why you said she appeared twice already? Im getting out of ideas xD

Next chapter when? Please tell me its soon, because the cliffchanger you just did, was cruel T-T