Date: April 18 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I look forward to seeing what tasks and torments Litea endures during this journey. I like the sense of danger and uncertainty about whether she'll be ransomed or disposed.
Still getting a kick out of your use of locations from my stories. The image of Gwynne going to Keelah and gorging herself on Fair Folk was very sexy. I think she'd find that most of them can defend themselves pretty well (not to mention the kingdom's own enchanted defenses against visitors). But the fact that she's considering it is pretty hot.
Author's Response: Lol, yeah, gwyne would be murdered immediately I imagine were she to visit Keelah. Remember that giant effigy the fae made in Matt and Amelia 2? Faeries are kinda scary once they get in groups. Now, were gwyne an earthborn sized gal... Gwyne is absolutely playing a mind game with litea here- we won't see the end of their telationship, but I honesty dot know if Gwyne would actually ransom her or just kill her. The length of this story, however, litea is sure to live. I've got a couple of ideas on how to 'torture' litea, and this may actually go longer than intended lol.
Date: April 18 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Dammit, why did I have to check the most recent list before going to work? GAH!
The little bit (first 1/4) I read so far is great, cant wait till breaktime!
Author's Response: Hey man! Glad you're still enjoying this. Expect more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;$;&(8:&/$/82&(&/9;&;&&(4&:&/!:
Date: February 02 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! I really enjoyed Litea's perilous journey across Gwyne's mountainous form. Big fan of body climbing scenarios like that.
Glad we finally have an answer about why Litea wanted to kill her. It will be interesting to see how Gwyne processes this information.
Also enjoying the little references to places and characters from my stories. It's weird but fun to see someone else's take on this world.
Author's Response: My hope is that it continues to be interesting. :) thanks for reading! :)
Date: January 15 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like the sense of glee that Gwyne has about messing with Litea. That poor kid. Also, I love that Litea tried to use the classic fantasy cliche ("A wizard did it!").
Nice shout out to Rowena and the Green Goddess Inn early on there.
Author's Response:
I mean, techically yes, a wizard did shrink Litea. As far as Gwyne's cruelness/glee, it's like how Rowena got excited when Cedric first started staying with her, except Gwyne's fun is not nearly as... well, fun. Thanks for reading!
Date: December 24 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Woohoo, almost vore, much more my speed. I love that Litea ended up in both the ale and the stew. Some days the gods just conspire against you.
Makes sense that Gwyne would think she's one of the Fair Folk. Another option besides faerie or pixie would be an atomy, one of the smallest species of fae. They'd be about that size.
Author's Response: Lol, I forgot about Atomies. I'm glad you dig the almost vore! It's been quite fun to do, and I think for Gwyne to turn to cannibalism so quickly says something about her. Anyway, Gwyne won't just eat her quite yet- the way things unfold, much much more is going to transpire before tale's end >:D
Date: December 11 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Been looking for ideas to pitch for our Christmas dinner. Probably going to suggest this recipe. (I don't know how to cook). Do you have any dessert ideas? We've had cake mixed with ice cream and rum for two years. Just nothing with mint. Mint belongs in a colgate tube.
Gywne sounds a lot like Gywn from DS1. That boss fight was hard, but I think Litea has it worse at the moment.
Author's Response: Hey man! Sorry for the late response. For holidays I would suggest a warm alcoholic drink (mulled wine/glögg, both super easy to make), and something sweet. There's this wonderful and horribly unhealthy thing called chockladrulltorta (chocolate roll cake) that I have a recipe of, email me and I'd be more than happy to give it to you! Thanks for reading! And while yes, Gwyne is like old Lord Gwyn, she might be more akin to his daughter, gwynevere :) although, both Gwyne and Gwyn could be overcome by using calculated, repetitive actions (roll, dodge, hit, roll, dodge, hit, FUCK ESTUS ESTUS *You Died* vs rest, pull, scooch, rest, pull, scooch) That game held no more hardship after Ornstein and Smough. I felt like a goddamn Greek hero after that fight.
Date: December 10 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
A very harrowing adventure within the armor. And Litea doesn't seem to be mcuh better off than when she started. I wonder if Gwyne will remain unaware or eventually find her tiny stowaway.
Author's Response: Well, as fun/interesting as it would be to keep Gwyne completely in the dark, there's just too much fun to be had if she were to discover Little Litea >:D
[Report This]Date: December 09 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Beautiful role reversal and unaware.
Author's Response: I'm glad you dig it! It's very fun and challenging to write. Thank you for reading it!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
#happycamper
Author's Response: #superhypedtohearthat #moretocome #hashtag
Date: December 09 2016 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
A giant's masturbation should not be intruded upon, awesome chapter and cool recipe!
Author's Response: That must be something to truly unique tto witness. Still, Litea may yet find herself to see more of it >:D
Date: December 06 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like your story. It gives a great deal of setup that I appreciate, I don't know if everything was planned or generated by yourself as you wrote it, but the environment is easy to get immersed into with your extreme descriptions and detail. The entire atmosphere in the camp reminds me of the smaller towns in Skyrim, or of the Fremenniks in Runescape.
This setup did, however, drag on for a long time before anything happened. It's always been my preference to begin stories at the start of action, so that is just myself. I don't know, the story wouldn't work without the setup but I also wish it were shorter. Maybe some of the detail could have been sacrificed.
The interaction in chapter two gets repetitive over the first half of it, where she climbs up the ass and falls down and goes higher then in the crack then out and so on. However, it picks up when she finally escapes from the ass and gets to the vagina.
As a whole, it's good and fun. You are a talented author. Good luck finishing your story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been trying to address the particular challenge of length vs quality, and I hope
I get better soon. I will certainly try to. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not a butt man so I can't say that I particularly care for the interaction in this so far. But it will be interesting to see how (or if) Litea gets out of her predicament. I'm wondering about the full story of why she wants revenge. I'm also intrigued by the current state of affairs in Ilica. Devolved into civil war, have they?
Author's Response: Well, there's a whole Story behind that revenge plot. And yes, Ilica has fallen into a civil war :( pains of rebuilding a nation, i suppose.
Date: November 10 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Umm....giant buttocks. I've lately grown an appreciation for butts, they are a rather nice part to admire even if it does spew shit regularly.
Author's Response: Poetic :)
Date: October 30 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fallout : New Vegas? I usually play Skyrim so there's no luck stat.
Author's Response: Yeah, I've been burning through New Vegas recently.
Date: October 30 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, this is why I always go with a warrior in a fantasy rpg or even a sneaky archer if I feel disinclined to bloody my hands.
Author's Response: My stats always tend to be something like STR 10, END 10, AGL 5, WIS 2, LCK -72
Author's Response: My stats always tend to be something like STR 10, END 10, AGL 5, WIS 2, LCK -72