Date: January 11 2019 11:56 AM Title: The Bathroom
Best stuff I've read in a while. Love it a ton!
Date: March 08 2017 9:39 AM Title: The Bathroom
yaaay! you did it! nice addition. You know what this story needs? more feet interaction. Great stuff, dude
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do ;)
[Report This]Date: March 07 2017 3:41 AM Title: A Flashback
Long live Caitlin.
Author's Response: m/
Date: December 18 2016 10:59 AM Title: The Bathroom
good stuff mate. i was thinking, what about a flashback? it'd be nice to read what happened with the babysitter before she was eaten :)
Author's Response:
That's a good idea! I'll try to include that sometime in the near future
[Report This]Date: December 15 2016 2:36 PM Title: In The Mouth Of The Beast
This is one truly one of the best mouth scenes I've ever read! The descriptions were so vivid I felt like I was right in there with poor Julie. I really like the smooth transitions back and forth between POV's, you make it seem so effertless. Excellent work, so far I look forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I really appreciate that!! I'm also following your story and I'm loving it so far :) hope to see more from you in the future!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2016 8:16 PM Title: Just Desserts...And Bug Crushing
Caitlin is just a peach.
Author's Response:
She is, isn't she :')
Date: December 14 2016 7:08 PM Title: The Bathroom
Continually superb. Loving the entrapment aspects and hope to see more. I'd be really happy to see some even more tiny captives, then have them trapped and imprisoned in various places - embedded under a toenail, stuck in the wrinkles of a navel, trapped between threads of a sports sock, jammed in ear wax or up a nose, ensnared in saliva in s bottle or held to the outside of a candy by dried saliva, even sandwiched in the creases of the girl's asshole or lodged under her clitoral hood or in her urethra, adhered to her discarded underwear by her fluids... the list goes on.
Author's Response:
Yeah, once Caitlin has disposed of the rest of the original 5 captives (aside from Julie, who she's probably gonna keep for the majority of the story tbh), she'll definitely go gather more and more in the future :)
And all of those are great ideas! I'll definitely try to work some of them in when I can!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2016 8:35 AM Title: The Bathroom
So glad to see you back. College can be real time consuming, huh?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately /: today is my last day of the semester tho so it's nice to know I'll have some free time to keep writing. I feel like I'm gonna hit writer's block soon but I'll keep trying to get chapters out consistently
Date: December 12 2016 9:01 AM Title: Playing With Her Food
so glad you took your story back. the sense of ownership is great in this story, i love it. also, i'm clinging to my hopes for more foot stuff :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! And well then you'll like the end of the chapter I just posted :)
[Report This]Date: December 11 2016 12:46 PM Title: Playing With Her Food
Great addition!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like it. I'm hoping to get back to adding chapters more frequently now that the semester is about to end
[Report This]Date: October 29 2016 6:04 PM Title: And The Fun Continues
The sadism is great! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'll do my best!
Date: October 28 2016 7:18 PM Title: The Bathroom
Superb, just superb. The foot torture was amazing, and the toilet part was a new spin on the idea - very good. Loving the uncaring protagonist, it really adds to the story that she cares so little for them she forgets what they are or looks at her phone instead. Can't wait for more, especially more foot and butt stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Many more chapters to come for sure. I want this to be a long story, with Caitlin kidnapping several women :)
[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 3:32 PM Title: And The Fun Continues
Damn that's cold, good stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 8:32 AM Title: And The Fun Continues
Go on and on with the vore! It's so great, congrats!
Author's Response:
I plan on it! It's by far my favorite category!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2016 6:14 PM Title: The Bathroom
Really loving this story, can't wait to see the butt stuff especially but also just more chapters.
Great stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: October 27 2016 1:41 AM Title: The Fun Begins
i loved the last chapter. i really hope in some more foot action :D
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, they're definitely be a lot of that. While there will be many different categories in this story, vore/mouth play and feet are by far my favorite two
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 4:58 PM Title: The Fun Begins
Best chapter so far my good man.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm definitely striving to be better
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 7:08 AM Title: The Fun Begins
One suggestion: whenever you switch to a different perspective, use a bar of some type like - *** or ... or ~~~ . I order to separate the different scenes.
~ not to be a nit-picker but, just a suggestion...
Whenever I'm reading it, and I have to 'stop' to figure out where I am, it kinda interrupts the flow of things, ya know?
Great chapter, though, ...Caitlin's casual teasing might get out of control, I hope! ;`)
Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response:
I might sometime in the future, thanks for the suggestion!
Date: October 25 2016 4:01 PM Title: In The Mouth Of The Beast
Butt stuff
Author's Response:
I will definitely work some of that in!
Date: October 25 2016 12:22 PM Title: The Bathroom
I really love how vore was illustrated in this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!