[Report This]Date: November 18 2019 11:57 PM Title: Introduction + Story Start
I know it's been a while, but would love to see the main arc of this story continue. It's nice to see you writing a little bit out of your comfort zone (office environment vs. College/house, etc.). Hope to see you grow and expand out your character development and writing style. Great story start!
Date: May 14 2017 1:32 AM Title: Introduction + Story Start
loved the new meghan chapter and the high levels of unawareness. Hope you enjoy doing the mannequin storyline and keep it up. I was just re-reading your introduction to the story and thought that the night-crew cleaning lady might make a good addition to the story as a secret character as she winds down and roughly cleans the 'mannequin'.
Date: October 20 2016 6:51 PM Title: Introduction + Story Start
Great story idea. im going to look forward to every chapter that comes out.
Hopefully miriam is the queen of nose toe clamping, fast foot bouncing and deadly toenails!
If you are feeling creative you can exaggerate the unaware situations to more types of contact, at a level of unreal obliviousness.
cheers
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so far. As I might have mentioned before, this is way outside my comfort area on what to write about, so I hope I can keep the main part of the story intersting.
And that's a cool idea. I might play around with extreme leves of unawareness and see how I like it.
I also hope you like the more traditional shrinking stuff I included as well. I figured that I had might as well use these characters to their full potential.
Take care!