[Report This]Date: May 07 2017 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow MM! You took your time but with result! Excellent chapters. I cannot help feeling sorry for Eydva and I am curious how Staan ends up with Edovan. Look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you stuck around! I prmise it wont be so long till next one xD musta rewrote that fight 20 times XD
[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad to see this story back again! Not a huge fan of flashbacks, but they have their purpose I suppose. Looking forward to seeing more of Edo and his 'adventures' tho!
Date: April 02 2017 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just reread your story, MM. Makes me even more curious about what is going to happen next. And most of all, it makes me wonder even more what the hell Yagaritte whispered in his ear! Any plans for an update?
Author's Response:
almost ready to post.. shooting for sunday!
Date: January 19 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
A fantastic story and I am so eager to see what will happend next. I hope we all don't need to wait to long. : )
Author's Response:
lots of surprises twists and turns to come ..and MAOR ladies to meet!
Date: January 17 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can we expect another update, MM? It would be a loss to see your story stranded!
Author's Response:
writing a little more every day! I promise we are still working on it, just trying not to rush make the story as good as we can. Things are about to get much more "complicated" and adventurous..lol and that's a different challenge from sexy tiimes XD tho there will be plenty more of those too! They follow Edo where ever he goes XD
[Report This]Date: January 03 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Woke up a bit early on christmas morning and decided to read this story, after seeing it a few times on the most recent page. I dismissed it because I usually don't really like a fantasy setting but...
HOLY SHIT! I was not prepared for this. This story is so extremely good its ridiculous!
It could just be a lack of sleep, but some moments made me so emotional I nearly cried.
I should probably give some feedback about the story because it's a review, but judging by your writing skills, there is clearly nothing I could teach you.
Thank you for sharing your skill with you by writing!
Author's Response:
It makes us both very happy that you enjoyed the story so much! That is what is all about after all..giving you a chance to escape and share our fantasy world with us xD I promise we will keep at it till it is done! I have some epic plans ahead xD Thanks again and I hope we do you right!
Date: December 25 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
That,s veey kind but you don' have to convert just for me. It's my limitation, isn't it? By the way, suppose your last chapter was someone's fantasy, whose would it be? Edovan's or Mavka's?
Author's Response:
hahaha that's a good question! Given the nature of their connection..it would depend a lot on how close they are to each other. If close it prolly starts as hers and ends up being both? She has that affect on him <3 But I don't think Edovan would ever "conciously" go down that road if she's not close by to influence. We actually made this just for fun, and as personal treat for me to share with you, but we toyed with the idea of making it a Mavka/edovan shared dream at some point before we decided to just post it for christmas as is XD But don't worry, we will definitely be "exploring" this territory further in the real story! Her desire for him and his for her and the nature of it is completely tied to who/what both of them are, and all will be revealed in good time!
[Report This]Date: December 25 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
And what a treat it is, MM & Co! Excellent chapter but I'm glad you pointed out that it did not happen. It makes me even more look forward to see the poor guy reunited with Yagaritte. She's the one he is in love with after all. I look forward to the next chapter although I still can't get used to.the damn inches....;)
Author's Response:
lol you want heights in centimeter's/meters too? we can do that! I'm excited to get them back together too! He's got few thigns to take care of first but its coming!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can we expect another chapter this weekend, MM?
Author's Response:
It Christmas, and you have been very good, so I'm posting special holiday treat right now!
Date: December 19 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another good chapter MM, though a bit shorter than we are used to! I'm curious to see how Bernadette intends to compete with Mav and Yag!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bernadette better watch herself around Mav. The dremora won't take too kindly to someone other than Yag messing with her little guy.
Date: December 14 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
And it appears to be a mystery what Yagaritte did to/with his staff! It can serve only one purpose, if you ask me.... :)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see the story continue. You make me very curious about what she whispered in his ear! And who belongs the ring to he found in the laundry room? I look forward to see Edo and Yagaritte reunited, and what she plans to do with him... Another well written chapter and can't.wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
It might be a bit before we found about those two things..but Y and E will be reunited soon, I promise. She's been a busy bee, but all her hard work has been leading up to this XD As for the staff, we will fiind out when Edo finds out XD Thanks again for the support and the feedback Calahonda. I forward everything you guys comment to my partner and I thinks she looks forward to hearing from you guys as much as you look forward tor eading the next installment! I know I do.. See you this weekend with the next Chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I always groan when encountering a flashback. However, you made it short and sweet, and I thank you for it! Sounds like Edo's triangle may grow to include a fourth member, someone from his past? Also, can't wait to see what his job is going to be. Been too long since we've seen any interaction with Yag. And how is it the entire brothel knows his job before he does? Hopefully it isn't too dangerous for him. I'm sure Yag wouldn't let him come to harm if she could help it. He can defend himself...but perhaps not without a workable staff.
Author's Response:
We will be returning to the past later to finish that story..but for now it's onward and outward! All I can say is they WILL be reunited and it is going to be good times as usual <33 Next update this weekend!
Date: December 08 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Would be a loss to see this story stranded!
Author's Response:
still writing! not stranded..lol should be ready to post again this weekend. my partner is in retail hell right now so I just need her to finish the vignette and then we can go straight to all the stuff I've written next xD
[Report This]Date: December 04 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I am a huge fan of the elder scrolls series, and to see it in other areas of my life, ones where a good story and writing/proportions, is all to hard to find for me, is very refreshing. Keep up all of the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Mav. Now we've got a love triangle! Yag better not stay away for too much longer or else Mav's going to win this one. And maybe that wouldn't be a bad thing. :)
Author's Response:
It's prolly the first love triangal where any one of the sides would do the other one, or even all three together? xD Take heart tho, Yag will be back very soon! As always we love to hear your thoughts on the story and characters, so I thank you and my partner does too!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
And another terrific chapter! One has to feel sorry for Mavka, the way she struggles with her feelings. And now Edovan knows how she feels about him! How will he act with this knowledge and how will Yagaritte react when she finds out? How is the romance between Yagaritte an Edovan going to proceed with this development? You still made me very curious about what happened in the laundry room; what did Yagaritte whisper in his ear and who belongs the ring to that he found? Really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Calahonda! always appreciate your feedback, and I know my partner does as well!
Edovan is a giver. It's just his nature. Question is..how MUCH is he willing to give? Or mebbe she just TAKES XD But either way it definitely complicates things! But Act 1 is about to end and Act 2 is about to start and it will definitely give Yagaritte a fighting chance as we get out into the wilderness and into some dungeons! <3 There will be lots of surprises along the way as the bigger story starts to take shape!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a great chapter, the emotions Mavka feels really makes us empathize with her. I'm hoping she can have Edo. Maybe Mav and Yagaritte together can be Edo's lovers. As always can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That really makes us happy, because we want you to care about the characters! and of course the biggest issue now is.. Edovan KNOWS. o.O Take heart tho Yagovan (Edoritte?) shippers. Yagaritte is going to be back soon in a big way!
Date: November 26 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the love between the characters. Also how the way in which the gaintess appear to be a domineering presence that shouldn't be messed with. Overall, this is such a great read to pass the time.
Author's Response:
Glad to have you along! next update tomorrow!