Um....couldn't Maxine just take Billy with her? She even thought of doing it before Joy showed up, then once she did show up, I thought for sure Maxine would have thought, "ok, now I definately have to take Billy now". Maxine "hoped" that Joy didn't see him, but I felt like Maxine taking Billy was such a simple move.

Also, Maxine has to keep watch of Billy nonstop. She can't leave him alone like that. Either he escapes or someone finds him. I thought Maxine couldn't let anyone know about this secret? She seems so calm about leaving Billy here and there as if she doesn't care anymore.

Maxine should not even trust a drawer to keep Billy safe. If anything, Maxine should take Billy everywhere she goes. That way, she is in control over everything.

Perhaps, when we get back to Maxine's assistant, I hope she will be more committed to keep Billy safe and secure.

Man. I miss your descriptions of underwear, my favorite article of clothing to read about. Especially the crotch section. I too, would be going crazy in that drawer, especially if Maxine is a hot as you described her to be. Looks like Billy is starting to enjoy being tiny.

My favorite chapter of all your stories was in Bob's experience, #4, you had a scene where his mother in law kept him in the front of her panties for most of the day and she kept crossing and uncrossing her legs to feel the sensation of Bob. I just wished that Bob was awake during that scene. Also, I wished Bob was awake when she put him in her panties rather than waking up inside them. I relish the reaction of tinies being put inside the underwear.

Perhaps, Maxine has similar kinky ideas to keep Billy safe.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  I suppose that I should have expanded a bit more on Maxine's childhood.  Her kidnapping, and subsequential abuse while growing up in the orient. Her feelings toward all men in general, being just slightly subjective, (To say the least) she can't allow herself to get too close, ...although, it's quite different with tiny Billy; the lady Doctor will slowly become more interested...    Billy, being so small and harmless, will actually become someone that could possibly help her to change the way that she feels toward men.

Hmm. Not much to say about this chapter.

Gotta give credit to Joyce though for being creative and assertive. She does what she what she wants and I find that appealing despite her being my least favorite giantess.

This backstory seems to be taking over a good portion of the story. We know it affects his current relationship with women and his social skills in general. Also, it triggers his memory of past events. I just wonder what else this backstory has to offer since not much was added this chapter.

The Japanese word is becoming more than just a title, I see. Glad it has some importance to this story. Maybe this word is bigger than we think.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wait a minute? Midnight writer is back?!!!

I was waiting for a new story and it finally was here. Well it was here a while ago, but the strange title caused me to ignore it. It was only until I saw your name behind it that I realized that I had to read it.

I read all 10 chapters at once. Took me a while. I will say that I will defiantely be following this story.

I liked the first few chapters better than the last few. That's just my opinion. Once Diana got so much attention, I starting longing for Amy. Diana has a sexy body, sure. But she doesn't act sexy or seem sexy compared to Amy. Amy has this "good girl" approach and she seems like she is hiding something. Diana is just all out, revealing everything including her nakedness.

My favorite giantesses so far: Amy, Maxine, Diana, and Joyce.

Joyce just sounds like some grandma wearing stripper clothes. Sounds creepy to me.

Diana left talking about Maxine arriving shortly. Didn't Diana consider Joyce in the house? Also, why would Maxine be going out when Diana thought she was staying home? Do people communicate in this house? I expect some exploring by Maxine or Diana soon.

So Maxine is 45, Amanda is 27, Diana is 15 and Joyce is (around 50? 60? )

I was hoping maybe Maxine gives Amanda the gift of a little man for being her best helper for her office. Instead, Billy gets given to a teen whom we didn't meet yet so it felt weird at first.

The bad story's are not sticking with me.....yet. I know they are somewhat important, but it just seems like some typical bad childhood on both Maxine and Billy. However, I do like how Billy remember's his past when the giantesses handle him.

Pissing in the cage is nothing. I just read a story about a giantess putting a tiny in her drink to punish him and he pees in it and she doesn't notice as she slurps it up. Besides, he has plenty of reasons why he can piss there.

Hmm. This is funny. The giantesses just keep getting worse and worse. First, we meet Amy, then Maxine, then Diana and finally Joyce. (The way Billy met them.) What's next, Amy's daughter? I hope she is good. Maybe Amy's daughter can wrap up Billy and give him to her mom as a gift. Aw, how sweet.

Yeah, I don't know about Joyce. Seems crazy to me. Looking forward to Amy.

Love the frequent uploads by the way. Nice work!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank's Tom!  Yea, the title is in Japanese, you can go to 'Google translator' and translate any languages; it's pretty cool too.  I've had this tale simmering on the back burner for a couple of years, and I worked on revising it for most of the summer...

Great chapter. Very well written.
Later,
Diesel

Great chapter. Loved the bath. Loved the doctor checking in on him. She squats and then rises to full height. Amazing.
I hope she talks to him more. Will Amy come by to visit the little Guy?
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks, Diesel!  Really appreciate the chapter by chapter views! Lol!  - There'll be lot's more 'details' involved in this opening session.  I won't spoil it, by revealing anything ahead of time, but, ...the next several chapters only cover a span of two days, and I try to make it as real as I possibly can, ... so, that you can easily picture what is taking place.  

You describe things so well. The set up is great. Love the white tiled floor.
Later,
Diesel

Dr.Harrison reminds me of news reporter Joie Chen. Love how she grinds the medicine and gives him a cap of water. You set the scene very well.
Later,
Diesel

Great first chapter.
Later,
Diesel

Bill makes a good point. The doctor does seem weirdly casual about the whole thing. Maybe she does know something about what's happening to him? Also, did you purposefully use two zeroes in the word stood instead of two o's?

Author's Response:

Yeh, I was purposely attempting to 'vertically' elongate the word, ST00D , in ST00D UP, but I later changed the rest of the sentence, in editing and forgot that I had done that, so it was just left that way, ...I'm surprised that you noticed it :)

Nice! That peaked my interest and looking forward to your story's future. I enjoy your writing style. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks, man!  Appreciate the interest, ...hopefully, this will continue to grow with each chapter.  I'll add a few more tags as it goes along...