[Report This]Date: November 05 2016 3:14 PM Title: Moving In with Amy
Yes! Time for Amy! Hopefully, she will live up to my expectations as this sexy, and especially naughty woman.
I thought it was interesting that most of the chapter was on Maxine and Diane just chatting as they prepared to go to Amy's house. Then like the last third of the chapter was about Amy moving in.
Amy's daughter Jazzy seems to represent a problem to me. She is far too young for me to even think of anything sexy for her to do with Billy. I don't care how tall she is, she is still 8 years old.
If she does get any interaction with Billy, I hope it's something similar to "Uh oh. Little man has run away from mommy. Time to give you back" she says. Jazzy then walks into her mom's room and decides where to put Billy. She finds some lace panties on the bed and giggles at what she will do next. She puts Billy inside the panties, but then watches Billy run away from them. "Oh no. Little guy must stay here to please mommy. I don't want to make her sad." Jazzy then takes some tape and wraps Billy around until he was mummified from the neck down. Only his head was free and he look up at Jazzy in fear. "Please Jazzy, let me go." Jazzy replied unfazed. "No. You belong to mommy." She then took a final strip of tape and taped Billy's mummified body to the front of the lace panties. Billy started screaming and Jazzy then took another piece of tape and gently place it over his mouth, silencing him. Jazzy smiled at her work and left.------This is what I hope Jazzy does if she gets involved. Otherwise, I hope it's a one on one session with Amy.
Jazzy is 5 foot 2. Isn't that way too tall? I mean, there are tall 3rd graders, but not that tall. Even I'm just a few inches taller than that.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey, some girls grow pretty tall! I knew a girl in grade school, that was at least a head taller than everybody else in the class until we got into H.S. and even then, she was still taller than all of the other girls, ...she was the 'Star Volleyball Player' Too!
..most of the boys were afraid of her. All she had to do was stand up, and most people would instantly get out of her way. Lol! Thank's Tom!
P.S. Jazzy won't be in anything raunchy, ...so, don't even think about anything like that...
Date: October 31 2016 1:24 PM Title: Maxine Pt. 2
Great writing and a very interesting and erotic story. Can't wait until the next chapter arrives.
Author's Response:
Thank's J baron! I really appreciate it. Thanks for 'favoriting' me, too! I'm attempting to keep this intricate plot going but, sometimes I get carried away in the details, ...I constantly have to keep 'refocusing' on the main storyline, and searching for a different angle of approach.
Date: October 29 2016 2:17 AM Title: Maxine Pt. 2
Maxine part 2 was fantastic. The realism with which you write is amazing. The pleasure yet the closeness to death. Maxine is my favorite character. Love to have her as an owner.
Looking forward to the Amy chapter. Looking forward to hearing Maxine talking with Amy. It is always fun when Giantesses talk about you like your not even there.
Enjoyed it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yeah, ignoring someone is a form of domination, ...aside from the humiliation of being disrespected. The idea of a beautiful giantess having complete control of your person being, and acting so nonchalant about it does seem to be something that is most prevalent within the fetish fantasies. Although, I've noticed it in more often in the violent type stories... Thank's Diesel!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 8:18 PM Title: Maxine Pt. 2
Ok, Maxine is so far the best giantess yet. But I'm sure Amy is about to steal the show.
She is 27 which is in that perfect range of sexiness in my book. She was on a giantes website which means she should have plenty of ideas for Billy.
I really wonder what Amy has in store. I hope she likes keeping him in the front of her panties as well. It's my favorite spot. Maybe, Amy will tie him up so there is no escape.
Perhaps, Amy carry him to her house in her panties. She can tie him to her panties. Just wrap some thread on his wrists and ankles and and tie knots to the front of her panties and make him spread eagle.
Man, I have so many ideas for Amy, but I just don't even know much about her to predict what she will do. I'm simplify judging by how sexy and controlling she was in Maxine's office.
Maxine had 2 parts. Amy should have 3 or more. 1st chapter for the journey and welcome to her home with lots of teasing and sexy stuff. 2nd chapter for Amy fulfilling her fantasies and 3rd chapter for more ideas!
She can tie his wrists to a string and let him dangle while she guides him to her sensitive parts. She can dangle him above her mouth, her cleavage and let's him slide into it, and finally, her panties. Then, she cuts the string and let's Billy fall down into her pantie trap.
Amy could gag Billy too. A small piece of cotton ball, or tissue could work. He can't call for help that way.
Instead of a cage, Billy has to stay on her body 24/7. Sleeping, showering, and even while at work.
I hope she talks dirty to him too. "Guess where you will be staying all night, Billy? That's right, you will be staying inside my panties and there is nothing you can do about. If you do a good job down there, I can give you a little reward. I think you will like that, won't you Billy?"
Or,
"Oh Billy! I know just where to put you." Amy pats her crotch. Billy looks down in fear. "It's all warm, nice and cozy Billy. It could be your new home. You don't have to thank me, after all, you will be pleasing me the whole time, won't you my little man. Mmmhmmm. I think we are going to have so much fun together."
I think I know what I'm dreaming about tonight. Amy is stuck in my head and I can't wait for her next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh, ...the possibilities! ;`) Thanks for the input Tom, I'll consider your ideas...
Date: October 25 2016 3:56 PM Title: Maxine
Please keep going your doing great
Author's Response:
Thank's Man! I Really appreciate the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2016 12:58 PM Title: Maxine
That was an amazing chapter! Finally some panties action. I really loved when he first entered it, as his feet were dragged on her belly and he saw Maxine pull the waistband outward.
I'm glad you titled this chapter. Now I know which chapter is the sexy Maxine chapter for future reference.
Wait a minute? Amy brought this up? Damn, she was already my favorite giantess and now she just got even better! Amy has this brilliant idea? Now I absolutely can't wait for Amy to get her hands on him. I bet she is kinky and is even more creative than Maxine. (Maybe some bondage too.)
I noticed that Maxine wanted Billy to want her. She said that she didn't want to force him inside. Hmm. I think it might be sexier if she actually did want to force him and for Billy to be against that. I hope Amy will force Billy similarly like what was saw today.
I like it when Maxine describes ideas and dirty thoughts while Billy is inside. I think since Amy is the creative one, maybe she will say something like "I could keep Billy with me all day and he couldn't escape. He can be my little pet and he might enjoy it too, I know I will. I will take him home with me and we can spend the night together, just me and him and my pussy. Mmhmm! I can't wait to feel his little body against mine."
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank's Tom! Yes, Amy must have given Maxine the idea when they were whispering to each other while in the office on the day that Billy became infected with the shrinking, ...she certainly has some interest in this type of thing. If you recall, she was looking at a 'Giantess Web Site' on the computer monitor whenever Billy first walked up to her reception counter. No Spoilers, ...but, Amy will eventually get her hands on Billy, but it might be a while before that happens...
Date: October 25 2016 6:55 AM Title: Maxine
What an incredible experience for little billy.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank's Diesel, But, ...It's not even close to being over, ...yet...
;)
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
While the chapter was sexy, I felt like certain parts weren't exactly clear like if Maxine was under the sheets? If Billly was in her hand at some points, was Billy being squashed in her boob or belly, if Maxine was awake or asleep? Just a few things here and there becuase it felt like I couldn't tell what is going on.
Now, you could answer that you wanted me to feel like Billy and I wasn't supposed to understand it all, but I think I prefer descriptions that describe something that I can visualize easily.
Yes, I would love Maxine more. So far, she knows what to do with Blilly. I love her moaning and talking at the same time. Especially about Billy being warm and cozy. That's the dirty talk that I like. Kinda naughty too. I like that.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 18 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Soooo well written. I felt like I was actually there. I would pray that she would keep me forever.
Later,
Diesel
Date: October 17 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love, love ,love, Maxine.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank's Diesel!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
That plot twist though. Well played. I never expected that coming. I thought Diana was going to sacrifice herself to save Maggie, but instead she blames Billy?!! Lol, I was shocked. It was the first time, I was genuinely surprised.
Billy should said something like "well, your drawer has been opened a bit more, so I guess that means someone got me. Also, your bedroom door is at a new angle." Maxine is super smart so I was thinking that she couldn't be they gullible.
Well, now we know that Diana is not trust worthy. Already such a privileged girl with a new car at age 16 and already with a gift of a tiny man and now she is abusing her gifts to create lies to make herself pure of any imperfections. Diana can't admit that she did something wrong. Seems childish like when a kid says "he/she did it".
At first, I hated how Maxine was about to punish Billy for all this, but then she started talking and I was changing my mind. She was talking about keeping him as a pet, no escape, stay with her forever, never let him out of her sight, and I was getting excited. Especially when she said she wanted him for tonight. At this point, I was thinking, "oh yeah, Billy actually did it, punish him real good, I got a few ideas..."
So the ending changed everything. Maxine seems to know that Billy didn't escape and I believe that she knows now that her daughter was lying. I still hope Billy gets punished (sexually). It's about time a real woman takes charge.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Billy thought that he was in some serious trouble there, ...for a moment, but, remember, Maxine is this famous world renowned Phycologist and she can instantly see things that most people would never notice...
Date: October 15 2016 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love where this story is going keep up the good work boss.
Author's Response:
Thank's Dude! I'll do my best, and at the same time, I'm trying to keep it as real as possible...
[Report This]Date: October 14 2016 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Alright! Now it looks like a transition is coming up! Maggie's house coming up? I hope so. I also hope Maggie's mom is just as sexy as Maggie or maybe even more irresistible to Billy.
I would've said yes in an instant. A beautiful girl probably means an even more beatiful mother.
Ooooh! The possibilities!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that these girls are fascinated with feet. See, I'm not interested in these teenage girls or feet. So, I think when we get to the 27 year old assistant, she knows a more intimate way of teasing Billy. :)
Also, this tells me that you are probably saving the best for last. I can be patient and while these girls are having fun with their feet and stuff, I can wait for the juicy stuff with the assistant.
Well, I can't say that I can't wait for the next chapter. I guess I'm more excited about the chapter after the next 5 chapters. Once the teen orgy is done, it's the assistant's time to shine. I can't wait for that!
Author's Response:
Thank's Tom! I knew that you could be patient, and just enjoy the actual 'Experience' of becoming so tiny that even a young inexperienced girl, could take complete, and full control of your very existence, ...playing with you like a little pet. Teasing you, relentlessly, until you're so confused that you've become nothing but a blubbering mass of tiny human flesh...
" he he he he he he he he he", mumbling to myself as I write the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: October 12 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
First off, great responses to my review. You answered all my questions and it was mostly becuase I didn't pay attention to those minor details.
Back to this chapter.
Maggie seems to be planning something. I just don't know what. She keeps looking at him, perhaps thinking of naughty things to do to him.
That dance scene was weird to me, but I bet other reviewers can say that this was some sort of transformation, or in the moment feeling. It was a moment where he didn't care about his worries and just enjoyed the little situation that was going on.
Hmm. I wonder what these girls have planned for Billy. Are they old enough to know any dirty thoughts? Any fantasies? I know the adult women are experienced with this so I won't be surprised if the girls don't think about it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
They've got some tricks up their, ...well, they don't have any sleeves, soooo... maybe somewhere else? ;`)
Date: October 12 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nice having the 3 ladies playing with him and talking about him. His opinion means nothing.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Man, I got a lot of questions since half of this chapter felt random. Haha.
First, in the last chapter Maggie let the door close behind her so how did Diana know that Maggie was in her mom's room?
Second, how did Diana know that Maggie had Billy behind her back? Sheer luck?
Third, all these girls are fascinated that Billy can talk but after he says one word to confirm that he can talk, they silence him by ignoring what he says. (Ok, that wasn't a question.)
You know what. No more questions. I forgot what I was going to ask.
I think I changed my mind. Actually, I do want Maggie do take Billy home with her. And since you do a good job on introducing characters, you should involve Maggie's mom too, but not her sisters. I have had enough teenage giggling so far.
Diana keeps changing what she says. First, she says that Billy is a person and can't taken as an object. Then she claims that Billy is hers. Lol, wtf. Make up you mind girl!
Diana is the doctor's daughter, Maggie is the hot girl, and Christie is the other girl. Like I said, too many characters that I forgot any details about Christie since the focus shifted to Maggie.
Well, all this dress up will take some time. We know how long girls do their makeup so it will take forever to dress Billy up. And then guess what? Maxine shows up! Then it's all going down!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, Maggie was taking a long time in the bathroom and Diana walked back to see what she was doing, and she realized that she was inside her mother's bedroom.
And, she knew that she had Billy, behind her back, 'Because' he screamed as loud as he could, "HELP ME!"
...and, when Diana called Billy 'Her's', she was really saying that He was her's to 'Take Care of', more of a responsibility than an ownership type thing...
Date: October 11 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
You go, Maggie.
Author's Response:
Oh, Maggie's definitely gonna go! She really likes the idea of having someone so small...
Thank's Diesel!
Date: October 11 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love Maxine and the way she handles him. And her panty drawer.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ok, I think you are at that point where there are too many characters in the story. It feels like they get a paragraph of background and all of a sudden, they are involved with Billy.
Love the name Maggie. If you watch the show "walking dead", you will know why. I keep thinking of her when I see that name.
Once again, another "unlikely" situation that happened sure another person finds Billy. This could have been prevented with Maxine taking Billy with her during the party.
I hope Maggie doesn't take Billy with her. I want the story to focus on Maxine and her assistant. That's what made me interested into the story. Now it seems like it's getting further away from that. When you mentioned Maggie's 4 sisters, I thought "oh no".
Lastly, why the armpit? You would think that at least one of these horny boys would comment on one of her other body parts. Is this a sign that Maggie will be the disgusting giantess rather than the sexy one? I hope not.
What I do hope is that Maggie escapes with Billy and then bumps into the assistant and Billy flies into the assistant's purse and now the assistant has him. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yea, I'm not very good at introducing new characters into an existing story. Although, it does seem to be an easy thing to do, ...it's really not. Especially, when those newer characters are merely temporary. It's just been two days, since Billy was affected by this strange shrinking, and without having a whole series of 'boring' developmental chapters, I just 'dive right in' and make it as short and sweet as I can... Just lazy I guess, but I can't wait to get to the good stuff! You, can understand that, Mr. Speedy? ;`)