[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 6:19 AM Title: The Sister
Maybe it's hindsight, after reading these stories for circa 11 years. But, the word "cute" has always struck me as being an emotional castration for teenage guys. As if they're harmless puppies who are easy to leash-train!
"Whereupon, he put his hand to his ear, listening for the inevitable chorus of 'paranoid sexist.' "
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 5:51 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity
The dialogue is funny and I'm enjoying the characters' development. Flashes me back to when I was 18-19 and horny and naive as hell.
Author's Response:
Thanks that was the effect I was trying to capture
Date: September 22 2016 6:57 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
I was just kidding about the vore, D. But, the descriptor of "mouth play" strongly hints that these ladies might do some serious bluffing with their little men!
Author's Response:
I think I'm leaning away from vore though the mouth play can be fun
[Report This]Date: September 22 2016 6:54 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Yeah, Oliver: Omega Pi. As in "24 shrunken guys baked and eaten by..."
Date: September 21 2016 8:56 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Excellent. I look forward (or upward) to it.
Author's Response:
Lol thanks for the read and review
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 7:22 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Looks very interesting :)
Author's Response:
Thanks