[Report This]Date: October 13 2016 12:08 PM Title: Saturday Night's Alright
The wristband score thus far (for all you lurkers who might be wondering)?
Oliver: 2
Cameron: 1.
Author's Response:
I'm not quite sure what to say... ;)
[Report This]Date: October 11 2016 9:59 AM Title: Party Time, Excellent
Hmmmmmmmmm! I wonder what will happen if Mr. Irate P.E.T. is confronted by an interceding O.P.?
Author's Response:
You sir, are far too clever...
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 8:46 AM Title: Working for the Weekend
Don't know about the rest of you. But, I think the "growth" promised for chapter 8 actually occurred, here. LOL!
[Report This]Date: October 05 2016 5:06 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Shaping up to be one of my all-time favorites even before we're to the action :)
Author's Response:
Wow that's for the high praise!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2016 9:02 PM Title: Olive Branch
The way you've been describing them, these last few chapters, I now get the impression that Cameron and Sersei's relationship is more like that of good-natured rivals than, say, a Hatfield/McCoy-style feud.
Author's Response:
Exactly right. the dynamic isn't rancorous, more like playfully chippy
[Report This]Date: October 03 2016 8:52 PM Title: Lightning Strikes Again
Moral of the chapter: never accept Kandi from a stranger.
Author's Response:
Or, strange gear from a Kandi
[Report This]Date: October 03 2016 8:45 PM Title: Tie Score
And now we have _two_ self-branded cows.
Author's Response:
a moo-moo
[Report This]Date: October 03 2016 5:58 PM Title: Olive Branch
Tell the story you want. This set-up is great. I love the characters. Don't rush it along just to please the critics.
Author's Response:
Thanks Happy! I won't compromise the story aspect but might improve the delivery schedule to keep people interested. :)
Date: October 03 2016 7:35 AM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
Personally, I like a slow build up with lots of character development. It makes the meat of the story that much better.
And growth at the stripper bar? Sounds interesting.
Author's Response:
My preference is also to flesh out the characters to enhance the story aspect of the tale.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2016 9:02 PM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
"...at the stripper bar, there might be some growth..."
LOL! Good one. :-)
Date: October 02 2016 3:18 AM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
Not being funny mate but there are slow burns and then there's this.
Does it really need at least 7 chapters before anything remotely Giantess even begins to happen?
You write very well but I'm sorry, this is now at the point of being just boring.
Author's Response:
Hey Pdawg thanks for the great review. I appreciate you taking the time to share your input. I apologize for the hair growing pace and will try and step it up some by doubling up on chapersonal. All I request is some patience as the next few chapters have already been drafted.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 8:40 PM Title: Burning the Candle at Both Ends
A stripper bar??! Oh, crap! I hope he doesn't show up for his first day on the job completely hung-over. For some reason, I think his shrinking in the next chapter would be too soon.
Author's Response:
This tale seems to be taking a while to evolve so no shrinkage imminently if anything at the stripper bar there might be some growth
[Report This]Date: September 30 2016 5:20 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
You've got me wondering how candle lady will fit in here now. Normally I don't find older women attractive (Yes, I'm young enough to call 35-ish "old" lol), but for some reason it seems easier to imagine this one as somebody I could be smitten with. How curious.
In shorter terms, still looks good :)
Author's Response:
Vesper is more aloft a background character as there are a fair number of sisters
[Report This]Date: September 27 2016 8:49 PM Title: The Frog and the Scorpion
I first heard that "Frog-vs.-Scorpion" story on a first season episode of the original STARSKY & HUTCH! But, the moral of it still rings true now than even it did then.
As for "Maeve?" I think it was the name for the Queen of the Fae in Welsh mythology ("Mab" in Irish mythology).
Date: September 27 2016 4:45 PM Title: The Frog and the Scorpion
Maeve makes me think of a witch.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2016 7:48 PM Title: The First Pink Wristband
Why do I get the feeling that the cow just branded itself?
Author's Response:
Um moo
Date: September 24 2016 1:18 PM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity
And the wristbands are how the determine who's going to shrink, and who gets him. The secret is what the date entails.
Author's Response:
Bingo! All will be revealed :)
Date: September 24 2016 1:18 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Property of Omega Pi
Summary:
The sisters of Omega Pi have a little secret...
Seems like a typical sorority story. I think I'll pass it over.
Duggernaut
He has a new story then. I should read this.
As for the chapter itself, the scene at the beginning makes it more poignant, knowing that this guy who's going to be shrunk has parents who think it's the greatest thing ever that he's going to university.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I was hoping to put my own kind of spin on the familiar tale and I did like the scene in the beginning, but as the story unfolds...
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 9:25 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity
Still interesting :)
(my reviews, they're so creative)
Author's Response:
...and still gratly appreciated :)
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 6:25 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity
I loved this chapter! It was like listening to a debate between Dr. Ruth... and Dr. Zachary Smith.
Author's Response:
Lol I wasn't hoping the dialogue would come off as witty as the two young men get to know each other.