Date: November 03 2016 11:47 AM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Cam is gone, but not from Oliver's memory. Question is, do others know about Cam or is Oliver the only one?
This could be one of two things:
1) Reality has been altered, and Cam was never a normal student.
2) Reality has not been altered, and they simply took Cam's stuff to his new room, and they were very meticulous about it.
We also don't know if Cam is going to be in the sorority house full time, or if he'll be allowed to become normal sized and go to class.
There's also the question of Oliver's job. When he gets shrunk, will he be restored to work there or will he have to quit the job?
However, Oliver was presumably shrunk that night. Could it be that Cam is shrunk full time and Oliver will be shrunk occasionally?
Author's Response:
With the GTS content coming soon, readers will have a clearer picture of what is occuring. Well, at least that's the plan.
Date: November 02 2016 9:55 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
Oh no. Not the sorority idea. Its spreading.
Author's Response:
A house full of nubile hot girls? The more spreading the better...
Date: November 02 2016 7:28 PM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Moral of the chapter? Never drink anything that might leave you Omega Pi-eyed.
Seriously, though: I like the mysterious cliff-hanger! We readers know, just from this story's presence here, what most likely happened the rest of that night before. But, gradually seeing the flashback through the eyes of the still-mystified protagonist is a plot gimmick that is rarely exercised, here. And I find your use of it, with this story, refreshing.
In fact, I'll go one step further and say that this whole story being centered around the titular sorority nicely compensates for the absence of such a plot gimmick (re: Jessica Lindholm) within TOM'S STORY!!
Author's Response:
Pi-eyed, nice. I would have also accepted Omega Pi-ckled. There has been a considerable drag and story to get here and i appreciate your commentary surrounding the usee of plot devices to msintain an element of suspense (even though as your say, readers will have a pretty good idea where its going) it was the use of Omega Pi for Jessica's sorority that prompted this story.
Date: November 02 2016 5:13 PM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Ok. Now I'm just confused. I'm not even sure what to review about.
Oliver wakes up. And, he seems to be still waking up. Shaking up the sleep out of his eyes.
Cam is gone, but not from Oliver's memory. Question is, do others know about Cam or is Oliver the only one?
Once again you surprise me with another weird transition chapter which I have yet to conclude what the heck it's about. I don't know what I think about it.
Maybe, Cam will find answers that Oliver didn't. Hopefully at least I get some answers too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oliver obviously passed out and awoke in his dorm room and all trace of Cam is gone. Next chapter, Cam awakens....
Date: October 28 2016 10:47 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Yeah, Vesper has caught my attention, Duggernaut. But for some reason, every time I declare my interest for a giantess, I get this vibe that you like to postpone that interaction for like 20+ chapters. Lol.
But now that you know....I hope she has her fun soon. :)
Author's Response:
Vesper is more of an ancillary character in this tale... there's always Mrs may :)
Date: October 27 2016 6:10 AM Title: A Night to Remember
Next chapter? "The Band of Shrunken Brothers."
Sorry; couldn't resist. To be serious, though? You successfully took me by surprise with this chapter. I thought sure Melody was going to make Oliver the second trifecta. If only as a sign of rapprochement (ALWAYS wanted to use that word!!) between him and Bear.
Author's Response:
I considered it, but there are so many different ways to go and i have yet to narrow down the choices...
Date: October 26 2016 11:45 PM Title: A Night to Remember
Well, it's finally here. I kind of liked the visits to the Omega house and the walks on campus and I'm going to miss all that.
Well, at least some fun is about to start.
I can't really choose which girl is my favorite. They all seem so good that I can't choose!
I just cant wait to see what's next and for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm thinking Vesper has caught your attention... :)
Date: October 26 2016 8:21 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
And now we get to see what these uberconfident girls actually do with their catches! Looking forward to it :)
Author's Response:
Not quite yet...close..but not yet :)
Date: October 24 2016 3:45 AM Title: The Longest Day Ever
I finally finished all 15 chapters and all I got to say is....Wow! Where do I start.. There is so much to discuss.
First off, I think this story is your bread and butter. You did a great job and telling a story and not setting up the giantess content like your other stories. This is the first time that I'm not looking forward to the giantess content. In fact, just reading about this college lifestyle getting wristbands is pretty entertaining. (Not sarcasm.)
Second, I'm currently in college, so this story seems like some sort of university heaven to me. Girls choosing guys that they like and they are so open. I mean, like 90% of college girls are hot so if someone chooses you, then that's like a huge ego boost especially for a freshman.
Third. It feels like the genders have swapped. Guys are dressing up, acting the best to gain the attention of girls so the girls can approach them. Instead of guys asking girls on dates, we got girls giving guys wristbands. Haha, if it was the other way around, guys would put bands on like every single girl since most girls on campus are pretty anyway.
Like Carycomic said, it does feel like 2 very smart, witty kids are talking to each other. There are plenty of vocabulary words and references which I don't even understand some of them. I usually figure it out and it's not a big deal, but it makes me wonder if a young college Duggernat would be like this. Lol.
I see a small resemblance of Tom, Julian, and Josh from your other stories. However, in a story like Shoebox, there was a clear distinction between Josh and Julian. However, Cam and Oliver seem very similar. They are both confident, cocky guys that get nervous around hot girls and make constant jokes and references about random things. It's very fun to read, but the 2 guys seems similar. Main difference: Cam just talks more, and Oliver is a bit more reserved.
I read so many chapters at once so I think I forgot a few other things to say. But otherwise, this is what I thought was important to review about.
After Tom's story and shoebox, this is my next favorite story and its quickly rising. I think the thought of a proactive girl chasing a guy like Oliver just really gets to me. I mean, that stuff is awesome. Also, when Vesper whispered to Oliver....amazing!
Oh yeah, one more thing. What is with the names of all the giantesses in all your stories. Not just this one, but I have noticed that you come up with some interesting names which I usually misspell in my reviews. This story just topped it off. I mean, all these Omega Pi members got names from some Ancient Greek book or something. I bet it's from a reference that I don't get.) The names are fun to say though. Vesper is a cool name too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lengthy review Tom, as always is greatly appreciated. i am glad you are digging the story component. A college duggernaut was too smart alecky for his own good ;) Cam and Oliver are similar, though Cam is more carefree, Oliver more responsible, however both are much less obnoxious and jaded as Julian. The boys think they are the ones hunting when in reality, the girls are guiding events. As for names, the girls are special, i just like them to have special names...
Date: October 22 2016 1:22 PM Title: The Longest Day Ever
I wonder if Melody will be the dispenser of Band # 3? I hope so. If only because it might be a bone of contention, between these guys, if Brooklynn gave Oliver that third wristband.
Author's Response:
I think these two might just have a little more to deal with than squabbling about the bands. Battle of the Bands? :)
Date: October 20 2016 12:05 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
"3 strikes..."
And what? Cam is out of circulation (re: being normal-sized)?
Author's Response:
California penal system...3 strikes equals life imprisonment no parole
Date: October 19 2016 7:23 PM Title: The Alpha of Omega
The very first Schoolhouse Rock video I watched on ABC, Saturday mornings back in the Seventies, was "Three Is A Magic Number."
But, it remains to be seen if Cam will look back on this particular third time and regard it as truly charming.
Author's Response:
3 strikes....
Date: October 19 2016 7:18 PM Title: Sunday, A Day of Reflection
Melody sounds like she's _glad_ Oliver made Bear sing a different tune.
Author's Response:
Music to my ears :)
Date: October 19 2016 6:29 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
1st chapter was soooo good that I can't read the next one without leaving a review.
Love the characters. Very relatable and I love how they get along and can keep a conversation going. Nothing awkward about it.
I'm really interested in this Omega Pi thing. Seems important.
I can't wait for the next chapter! (It's already here!)
Author's Response:
I am pleased you are enjoying this one :)
Date: October 19 2016 6:08 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Wtf, this story is by Duggernaut? No wonder. I thought you were slacking on your stories, but instead, you were writing this for a whole month and I have never noticed!
You should have told me on your other stories that you posted a new one when I wasn't reviewing this. Or, were you tired of my reviews? Lol.
Wow, for once, I got catching up to do. This might take a while.
Well, I can't wait to see what adventure you have planned!
Author's Response:
I just thought maybe you were getting tired of my stories :P
Date: October 19 2016 5:52 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Still all I have to say. Getting really excited!
Author's Response:
Excellent :)
Date: October 14 2016 5:28 AM Title: Saturday Night's Alright
Re: Queens? Don't ask/don't tell.*
*Sorry! Couldn't resist.
Date: October 13 2016 7:07 PM Title: Saturday Night's Alright
Oh, that's right! I forgot about Brooklynn.*
*I guess I'm one of those people who just naturally prefers Manhattan, the Bronx, and Staten Island, too. :-)
Author's Response:
Um what about Queens? (You know I had to say it :)
Date: October 13 2016 3:57 PM Title: Saturday Night's Alright
Aw, I thought we were going to get more of drunk Sersei! Oh well, hopefully our intrepid heroes will be invited deeper into Omega Pi's pleasure den on b their next visit.
Have I mentioned, this story is fantastic!
By the way, CaryComic, the wristband score is 2 to 2. Oliver has Sersei and Cerys. Cam has the jogging girl and the stripper.
Author's Response:
Nice catch on Carycomic's score keeping. Still a few things yet before things take a turn for the smaller. Thanks for the praise and support it is always appreciated
Date: October 13 2016 2:30 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
My last review still applies here. That's all I have to say :)
Author's Response:
Few the words may be but no less the powerful statement :)