[Report This]Date: November 23 2016 10:36 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn
After all these stories and chapters about insertion, you seem to have perfected this scene in my opinion. You have recently increased the level of detail which is great.
I love how you describe her body clinging onto Cam's body as if it were like an animal itself. Also the part where as Cam struggled, it pulled him in. And lastly how her pussy is reluctant to let him go. It's like a mosnter that wants to eat him up. :)
Brooklyn seems like a very sexy girl. I remenber when we first met her, she was described as this athletic girl going for a run. Then she was talking to Oliver and even flirting with him! Love her playfulness too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom, my difficulty is trying to try and find new and interesting ways to explore this type of interaction without becoming repetitive and insipid. Glad you approve! Brooklynn is definitely a fun girl with lots of energy!
Date: November 23 2016 10:13 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Duggernaut,
You have been updating this story like crazy. However, I'm wondering when will the shoebox chapter will update.
Author's Response:
Done
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 7:59 PM Title: A Brooklynn dodger
Fantasy just dominates reality. I wish I can be alive when the world discovers shrinking. Wouldn't that be something...
Surrounded by college girls, all horny, sexy, and giantesses. I love how excited they are to see Cam all tiny and their reactions.
I think my favorite part of this chapter was Sersei saying "not my favorite moment" with that seductive tone. You wrote that beautifully, especially mentioning the eyebrows raised. I knew excactly what you meant, and I agree, it is also my favorite moment. I can't wait for it.
Also, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you approve, because your favorite part is coming up soon, :)
Date: November 21 2016 7:37 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Maybe take some time for Oliver to get caught, make the girls frustrated and figure a way out from the collage of info he stumbles upon in meandering around fate, make this an adventure story, not an interaction story
Author's Response:
Hmm, there is probably a happy somewhere in there. We'll see how this progress. thanks for your input!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 6:49 PM Title: A Brooklynn dodger
Excellent baseball pun!!!
Author's Response:
How about an inside the park homerun? O-:
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 3:22 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Hey-hey! LT's in the house. Welcome back!
The rhyme scheme was a little off, though. Half a star deduction. ;-)
Date: November 20 2016 4:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Cam! Cam! He's our man! If Duggernaut can't have him fulfill our wildest fantasies, no one can!
Author's Response:
Whew, that's a lot to put on Duggernaut - good thing I've got big shoulders :)
[Report This]Date: November 20 2016 7:01 AM Title: Back to Work
I love you double-entendre-filled banter! Although, when it comes to verbal games of cat-and-mouse, Vesper is clearly more expert at being the former.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2016 3:24 PM Title: Back to Work
Can we all just admire how sexy Vesper is. I mean, wow, I wish my boss was like that. I wouldn't file a complaint in the slightest. I would embrace it and maybe take it to the next level.
She put her hot breath on him, she put her hands on his shoulders. She wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him into her. She pressed her sexy body into is, letting the contact increase as she wrapped him. She even put her teeth on his ear. I have no idea why it's sexy, but to me it's super sexy. It's one of those weird things that I like.
End notes are funny. Cam's situation is defiantely a dream in my book. Being surrounded by giantess women who want to play with you sounds like my total fantasy. (Well, one of them.)
Oliver's next Roomate: Duggernaut. Lol! What if, you put yourself in a story?!! This seems like the ideal spot. It would be tedious to write your long name all the time, but I think there would be no better roomate for Oliver other than Duggernaut himself.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2016 11:54 AM Title: Back to Work
Starting to get good, let's see where you take this!
[Report This]Date: November 18 2016 9:14 AM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
Gts-interaction, at last!
Way to go, Dug. :-)
Date: November 18 2016 12:21 AM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
Hmm, so I guess Sersei wasn't exactly kidding when she mentioned an obligation to their mother, with her planning to sell him out like that from the begining. And man, gotta feel for the guy, I mean if you wanted a way to break a guy down look no further. I'm kinda hoping Olivier gets to play hero eventually but for now, the fun starts.
Author's Response:
It would be a knife in the heart kind of betrayal for Cam from his sister and his mom, but yep, let the games begin!
Date: November 17 2016 10:33 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
I can't wait to read about the adventures Cam is about to have. Please more!
Author's Response:
On it's way!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2016 9:08 PM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
I call this "welcome to heaven".
A new life as a little toy to these sexy giantesses and these girls are claiming him, one after another so they can play, all day, everyday.
Also, there is no chance of escape, he is not property of these sexy girls, wow! This is amazing!
I would so want to switch lives with Cam right now. Imagine waking up to hot giantesses wondering if you were ready to play and the best part is that they all want to have a piece of you and there is nothing you can do to stop it! Yes!
Man, this story just got so much better!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 8:20 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Of course, the rest of us know what really happened to Cam. I just hope Sersei is touched by how genuine Oliver's concern for her brother really is.
Author's Response:
Mmm, maybe...
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 1:37 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Hmmmm. Well, since I know where this story is going, I can't wait for Cam next chapter.
If I was Oliver, I would show uneasiness to Sersei and make her know that I don't feel safe around her. She will question it, and then I explain why it looks sketchy and either she tells the truth or delivers a much more convincing lie.
Well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
He has no reason to doubt Sersei, besides, her presence messes with his logical thought...
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 1:23 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Feel like I stepped into an episode of Lost. I like the mystery and adventure. Your slow reveal of Cam's true size I have a feeling is going to be epic.
Author's Response:
I hope it lives up to expectation, :O
Date: November 05 2016 2:55 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
It's a shoebox! Why? Well, Duggernaut referenced Jessica's sorority from Tom's story in this story and now he is referencing the shoebox story with a shoebox in this story! It makes sense!
Author's Response:
Very clever...
[Report This]Date: November 05 2016 2:18 PM Title: Morning After, Cam Awakens
Uh-oh! Cam is either in the second floor bedroom of a dollhouse (with only a detachable roof for the entrance); or, a shoe box.
Date: November 05 2016 1:21 PM Title: Morning After, Cam Awakens
Ah, this chapter explains everything. (Almost everything.)
Cam got shrunk. Love his reaction to the Oreos. Great job in describing the size comparison too. I was having difficulty visualizing his "room". Sounded like some makeshift doll house but I'm not even sure.
So Oliver did not shrink, but Cam did. I guess that difference between 2 and 3 ribbons. Cam is most likely in the Omega Pi house, maybe stuck in the playroom. Cam is also branded which is very interesting. Does he still have the ribbons?
I'm eager to hear what Sersei has to say to Oliver about Cam.
I can't wait for the next chapter!