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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 4:07 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue

Oliver's mom is an ex-Omega Pi? Ooooooh! The most ominous plot twist, yet.

Author's Response:

So it would seem :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 2:08 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

This story is gain momentum and popularity. Seems like a little apprentice to Tom's story. Maybe it's becuase it also takes place in a school setting.

I guess people love school fantasies. (Including me.)

Look at all these reviewers! It's great to see some new faces around here.

Author's Response:

It is awesome people are taking the time to share reviews. i know i greatly look forward to all of them as a source of feedback, positive or constructive in helping to communicate how the story is being received so hopefully people will keep'em coming!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 2:05 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue

Ok. Why does the step dad sound like another Duggernaut? It's like every guy in this story is making jokes or talking about girls. That conversation felt like friend to friend rather than dad to son.

And now al the ladies are part of Omega Pi. What a coincidence. Cam's mom, Oliver's mom too.

Whoa, the dorms are not coed and have bathrooms down the hall? That sucks. Makes me feel grateful of my dorm. :)

Sweater meat? Wtf. I never heard that one before haha.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wanted Stan to come off as the 'friend' step dad as opposed to the dad dad. He calls oliver son, but oliver addresses him by his name. Sweater meat, yeah, i thought it would be funny coming from Stan who was doing his best to not oogle women the day they dropped Oliver off.

Reviewer: eldorado Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 12:39 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue

Wow it completely slipped my mind that Oliver's mom could be in on it too. I wonder how much influence she had (if any) on his choice to go to a college with a chapter of that particular sorority. And it looks like we might get some light shed on what kind of rumors are floating around campus due to the fates of people that get involed with the girls. I've always enjoyed the parts where the character starts to dig deeper into the mystery (and himself into the hole) the most so I have a feeling I'm really forward to the coming weeks. 



Author's Response:

It would seem like the highly coveted wrsitbands are only going out to those who may have some matrilineal connection to the sorority. The question is can Oliver put it together before it's too late? Could be entertaining

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 12:34 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue

So, Oliver's mom is/was an Omega Pi, same with Cam's mom, now how's she taking this?



Author's Response:

Seems like Oliver's mom is struggling with the obligation to give up something, her son perhaps? :-O

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 11:56 AM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue

That's a nice turn, give him some time to figure out what's going on, and then give the girls some time to realize he's smarting up

Author's Response:

See if Oliver can piece it together before that third band. I guess it depends which head does the thinking in the end, :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2016 10:03 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

The review below this one summarizes why I think Carycomic and Duggernaut would be great roommates like Cam and Oliver. Especially with all these analogies, puns, and references.

Author's Response:

Too funny :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2016 6:40 AM Title: A Place to Crash for the Night in Brooklynn

To Cam, it must have been like snorkeling off the coast of Coney Island.

Author's Response:

Quite likely, except without the aid of her floatation devices!

Reviewer: IN54N1TY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2016 5:00 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

I've been reading through your stories (after reading Tom's story I couldn't stop) and the thing that's stood out to me is that other than a few small things your stories don't really show any evidence of coexisting in the same world... I think once you finish off Tom's story have him back to his full size and ready to go to college and he ends up going to the school Property of Omega Pi takes place in. Maybe have a few chapters of his perspective as he first moves in and as he learns by himself what the pink bands mean (what they allegedly mean) and gets excited when he gets three then when he finds out the truth it's bitter sweet since he gets unlimited access to 20 of the hottest girls on campus but also realizes there's no (easy) way out of this one... but he uses his usual charm and experience to amaze the girls until he figures something out. Also maybe something about how his charm gets him the bands faster than anyone else in the history of omega pi.
Again this is another of your instant classics and I can't wait for the storyline to unravel more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to check out my other stories! I know I need to finish many them, but i do get sidetracked fairly easily. there are usually a number of links tying them to gether subtly but typically I would like them to start apart. That would be quite the surprise for Tom to grad and wind up on the Omega list. I guess it probably be a shock both ways!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2016 3:02 AM Title: A Place to Crash for the Night in Brooklynn

Best chapter so far! You know, I thought that first chapter of Brooklyn's fun was good, but this...this is incredible.

I love how confident and aroused she was. She keeps using him for her pleasure, even when she sleeps! That's my type of giantess.

Wow, custom built dildo's to put tiny guys inside. That means that this sexual experience is nothing new. Must have been a fun time for hundreds of years on this campus.

Wow, there is a line of women waiting to receive Cam. That's like every guy's dream. And this was just the first one!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We'll get to the custom sex toys in a couple of chapters...:)

Reviewer: SoinaGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2016 5:03 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

Lol I hope Oliver figures it out before it's too late

Author's Response:

He's obviously missing something and the clock is ticking while Sersei circles like a shark playing with its dinner

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 9:12 AM Title: Late Night Visit

@TomSpeedy

X-D

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 8:59 AM Title: First Time Away From Home

"I’m guessing right about now he’s still in a little over his head but he should be fitting in nicely in short order."

No way she didn't have that one planned out

Author's Response:

Absolutely without a doubt she crafted that one up just to be cheeky

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 3:36 PM Title: Late Night Visit

Hmm. Soemthing doesn't feel right. She visits Oliver but doesn't really do anything. I think soemthing like a camera was placed in the room.

There were 2 girls and 1 boy. Sounds hot if they did it right there. However, I think Sersei brought Harmony to put or take soemthing from the room while Sersei distracted Oliver romantically.

Yeah, that kiss seems stated too. Sersei just setting things up. If it was a real kiss, she could've just shrunk him there like what happened to Cam. She didn't becuase she had to stick with the mission which was whatever Harmony was doing.

It's funny becuase just a little foreplay and Oliver is already aroused. He won't stand a chance against a giantess Sersei and I think that's why she likes to tease him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Definitely something going on, right? You know Sersei is enjoying herself

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 3:31 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

Carycomic,

Ha! I think you already know the answer.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 1:04 PM Title: Late Night Visit

"...matters into his own hands?"

Is that a hint he's going to pull a Sherlock Holmes? Or an in-joke reference to manual self-gratification?

Author's Response:

Refer to biblical character Onan for clarification :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2016 12:58 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

@ Dug:

Thanks! Don't mind if I do.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 9:26 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

WOW!!!!!

Thank you for giving us this erotic new installment. :-)

Author's Response:

Ice water?

Reviewer: Happy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 1:21 PM Title: Things to do while in Brooklynn

Really wonderful chapter. Terrific descriptions!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2016 8:55 AM Title: First Time Away From Home

Here, please have all of my yes

Author's Response:

I am humbled by your generosity

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