Date: December 17 2016 10:22 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel
Woo that was hot!!~
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hopefully the long intro was worth these kind of chapters... :)
Date: December 17 2016 5:44 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Might you consider anyone inside the sorority breaking to some degree because of the ideological stress?
Author's Response:
There is always the possibility, of say, perhaps someone new to the sisterhood? A certain disharmony? I guess we shall see :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2016 4:12 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel
I was listening to Interstellar music and it surprisingly matched the chapter as Cam was "floating in space" inside Brooklyn.
Once again, another amazing chapter with the amazing Brooklyn. I agree. I love her playfulness.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Maybe some laser Floyd, Great Gig in the Sky, Us and Them, who knows. :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2016 3:03 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel
:-O
Now would be the perfect time for me to snow shovel my driveway.
Author's Response:
Excellent! Nothing like blowing off a little steam
[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 4:16 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
"She's a big girl."
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Anyway, another great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Right? These girls are ruthless in their own way! Thanks for the review :
[Report This]Date: December 16 2016 12:37 AM Title: “How slight a thing will disturb the equanimity of our frail minds!”
Brooklyn is now the sexiest girl on this story so far in my opinion. She continues to radiate her flirty, happy attitude.
Love how she has Cam and is using him to boost her confidence as she talks to Oliver. Well, I guess she was always confident and that's why I like her.
Can't wait for work!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Brooklynn is certainly a sweetheart. I'm trying to protray her as a fun playful giantess
[Report This]Date: December 15 2016 9:22 PM Title: “How slight a thing will disturb the equanimity of our frail minds!”
Happy Centennial Review! :-D
Author's Response:
100 times thank you
[Report This]Date: December 15 2016 9:21 PM Title: “How slight a thing will disturb the equanimity of our frail minds!”
Hmmmmmmmmmm! Sounds like Brooklynn will give him his 3rd bracelet after all.
Author's Response:
I'm leaning a different way, but never say never.
Date: December 15 2016 8:44 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Could we get some gentle footwear entrapment with Cam? Oliver needs to start trying to talk to Cam and irk the girls off with stubbornness
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do to maybe incorporate some silk stocking entrapment. As for Oliver, he needs to break Sersei's spell and him and clue in to what is going on. We shall see :)
Date: December 13 2016 6:05 AM Title: Orientation and a Dialogue on Relative Negativity
Oliver said to Cam that he saw two of his sister's housemates, and they were going somewhere is there a hidden place full of shrunken guys.
Author's Response:
Another interesting premise. Maybe the girls do have a cache of little ones tucked away. WEe'll see as this story continues to unfold. Thanks for the read and review, it is always awesome to get feedback!
Date: December 11 2016 10:16 AM Title: A Brooklynn Kind of Morning
Something to find out: Are all Omega Pis this good looking to begin with, or are they magically enhanced when they're initiated?
Author's Response:
Omega Pi is highly selective on who they allow into their sorority. An interesting notion though that part of their initiation might revolve around enhancement contributing to their devotion to the cause for fear of losing that boost. Very interesting. Maybe.
Date: December 10 2016 3:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@duggernaut
Oh. I had for some reason always assumed Tom was about 3 inches tall, which is much larger than half the length of an index finger. I guess I assumed wrong.
Author's Response:
I think over the course of the year and half I have been working on Tom's Story, I envisioned somewhere between two and three inches and have described him against various measures that haven't necessarily been quite as consistent as I should. Having said that, the difference between two and three inches is quite considerable to our shrunken protagonists so my apologies for any confusion. Undoubtedly at some point, I'm sure I'll obscure it again... :(
Thanks again for the input, it will help me to remember to try and be more consistent. Generally for me, if I am thinking vore, I'll edge closer to two, if not, then three. (but even that isn't a hard and fast standard)
Date: December 10 2016 4:19 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@foreignkanto,
I'm sure they are the same size. Tom just knows where to go and what to do so he finds a way to slither where he wants to go.
Cam feels the same pressure as Tom, but he feels cramped since this is new to him and therefore he doesnt move much, hoping it will end soon.
Author's Response:
I tried to use the Oreo as a size reference for readers, but in my mind they are similar in size.
Date: December 09 2016 8:20 PM Title: A Brooklynn Kind of Morning
So these guys are being shrunk smaller than Tom from Tom's story right? I assume that's why Cam has a harder time moving around inside than Tom does?
Author's Response:
They are fairly similar in size, though in my mind. As I've delved deeper into this style of writing, I think I've learned more and it shoews int he writing. Tom has just been done this ALOT more than Cam, for now. :)
Date: December 09 2016 8:16 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue
So how does it work? Every member of Omega Pi basically pledges to give their first-born son to the sororiety? Suprised so many women are willing to make that trade.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review! My intent was not that every sister would be required to provide a son. It is seen as an honor to be able to give back to the sorority as opposed to a heavy price - though for Oliver's mother, he is her only child and thus far it appears as if she was one of the ones chosen to shoulder the obligation. I havent refined it yet, though as Oliver gets closer to unraveling the mystery, I will certainly try to expand on the notion.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2016 8:48 PM Title: A Brooklynn Kind of Morning
So, Brooklynn and the "sly little dog" are going for a run, huh? If she were a sports car, would that make him a one-Cam engine?
Author's Response:
OR, she would be out driving her Cam-aro...teehee
[Report This]Date: December 08 2016 7:15 PM Title: A Brooklynn Kind of Morning
I need a giantess to put me in her groove all day too. Cameron hates it, but I love it!
Interesting to see how Cam feels about Brooklyn running while down there.
I like this girl.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
As snug as a bug in a rug, wait, she's got a Brazilian
Date: December 08 2016 6:18 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
This has got to be an harrowing adventure story, get Oliver on the run and have him start looking for cam , what happens when the omega pi huntress is hunted?
Date: December 05 2016 7:23 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue
@Duggernaut: I was actually asking about how Cam's mom felt about Cam's situation, though I can see how that wasn't clear.
Author's Response:
Apologies, Cam's mother has multiple children and has obviously confided in Sersei at some point about the legacy, gaining both an ally and confidant, Different story for Oliver's mom though.
Date: December 04 2016 1:07 PM Title: A Call from Out of the Blue
“My little man all grown up and headed to university,” she said, voice quavering, slightly rounded but pretty face expressive and reflecting the heavy emotion in her heart as she looked at her only child.
There's more to her feelings there than she let on.
The Omega Pi oath is a sacred trust, a solemn promise that shall never be broken, shall never be compromised and shall endure long after each one of us as individuals have passed through the hallowed halls of academia. It is a lifelong pledge from one sister to another to uphold the values, virtues, and integrity of Omega Pi’s ideals and unwavering pursuits.
As a sisterhood, Omega Pi is greater than any single one of us. In the end we believe it is the little things that make all the difference.
At first, you think that the last sentence is the meaningful one, but the rest is turning out to be very important as well.
Author's Response:
Very astute, somebody's been paying attention.