[Report This]Date: January 19 2017 9:40 AM Title: Walk a Mile in someone Else's Shoes
Ok, this is awesome how Kandi keeps thinking about what to do. I swear, if I replaced nylons with panties, and toes with pussy, this chapter could be one of the best ever.
If only Kandi was wearing panties to this strip club, then she would be thinking of hiding him there. Ahhh, I can think about it all day.
Well, that last sentence seems to tell me that Kandi will never be as good as Brooklyn in my opinion. What each girl seems to prefer as far as body parts seems to make me decide which girl I like better.
Cam actually thinks that Kandi's feet won't be as bad as Brooklyn's panties. I disagree on all accounts and I think Cam will regret thinking that.
First, it's the panties, giantess heaven. Second,
It's Brooklyn, the fitness model. And finally, Brooklyn teases like crazy with her wordplay!
Brooklyn will be hard to top as my favorite giantess this story, but Vesper seems to be on the rise to take the throne. She hasnt even done anything except flirt which just makes me ponder what she will do physically.
Interesting to see you take a foot scene this story. I like how you added some entrapment with the stockings. Reminds me of panty entrapment.
Things seem to be picking up. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: January 19 2017 4:38 AM Title: Walk a Mile in someone Else's Shoes
Great storie so far, and again it's mentioned about how dangerous Cerys is, and she gave Oliver his second band, trouble for him.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2017 10:46 PM Title: Walk a Mile in someone Else's Shoes
So, basically, she just put Cam through an undress rehearsal?
Date: January 15 2017 10:08 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
You don't have to change/limit your reviews at all since I misinterpreted it. You view is how you saw and I just saw it differently that's all.
I put up spoiler filled reviews about 90% of the time. I also include random thoughts that might happen in the future. People have than replied to my reviews saying this or that, but at the end of the day, I see it as a way to an open conversation.
My point is limiting your reviews won't be as fun to read.
You talked about Vesper being the queen, operating the whole thing, and the one who informs people of such information. You sold me with this idea. Even though it wasn't exactly in the chapter, I found it entertaining to read.
Date: January 15 2017 3:08 PM Title: Vesper's Office
My apologies to TS and anyone who read my review before reading the chapter and believe to have been misled. My review is based on my perception of both the chapter and story as a whole from the details released thus far. TS may be correct. In the future I will limit my reviews to the details released in a given chapter...
Author's Response:
Feel free to speculate away. that's half the fun of seeing how readers interpret where I'm guiding this story. :)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2017 8:25 AM Title: Vesper's Office
I made the mistake of reading shrinkmeister's review before the chapter and I was looking for Vesper being the queen of the omegas. Only I didn't. In fact, we met who was in charge at the cafe shop earlier in the story.
Also, we see Vesper more involved with the Omegas, but I wouldn't say she is running the show. A few shrunken molds and dildos is all she had basically. She probably helps with shrinking and custom sex stuff.
Funny thing now is that Oliver is thinking about Vesper the same way I am. Ever since we met her, I was thinking of the dirty thoughts and it looks like Oliver has joined the club. It must be fun working for a sexy boss who is into a fetish for tiny guys.
Now we just need some Vesper looking through her store cameras and watching Oliver go through her stuff. Instead of being angry with Oliver, I suspect she would be curious to see how Oliver reacts as he goes through each item, especially the dildos. Then, I hope Vesper really starts flirting with the idea of putting Oliver in her dildo or soemthing.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
PSYCH! Who is to say the significance of Vesper role. she could still be a very important figure in this drama as it unfolds. Maybe... :)
Date: January 13 2017 8:25 PM Title: Vesper's Office
Wow... another great chapter! Just as I suspected... Vesper is the queen of the Omegas, the one really running the show and facilitating the disappearances and murders of dozens of young college men. Obviously, she enjoys what she does. She allows the Omegas to discuss the awarding of bands with her only son knowing full well that he too will eventually be sacrificed to the sisters. Our hero Oliver is catching on and won't be partaking in the Omega's special brew at the next meeting. How will the Omegas perform the ritual on Bear (and possibly Oliver) if Oliver does not play along and drink the Omega's roofie? This should be interesting... :)
Author's Response:
There will be more on the ritual to come. Seeing Aventus and how nonchalantly Vesper is treating him is kind of ruthless, because I think we all see the fate that awaits.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2017 6:13 PM Title: Vesper's Office
Hmmmmmmm! I hope Vesper really _can't_ read minds. Otherwise, Oliver is in real trouble!*
*Then, again, her last name does include the letters ESP.
Author's Response:
I think we would all be screwed if they could read minds... In this case, Oliver might still be in a whack of trouble
Date: January 13 2017 6:07 PM Title: Hot Sweet and Sticky
The former, I'd say.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2017 10:30 PM Title: Hot Sweet and Sticky
Oliver, your Cams only hope, I believe in your abilities Mr Oliver Twist.....lol....
Author's Response:
Lol, yeah right now Cam the one getting twisted in all sorts of different ways. hopefully he can hold out long enough for oliver to be of assisstance...
[Report This]Date: January 10 2017 10:48 AM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
This is quite fun! I admit I began your story halfway through and so read much of it out of order, so I will have to go back, but I do enjoy your characters!
Author's Response:
Thanks wwebby! I appreciate you taking the time to share a review. I think you'll find the first half (or more) primarily character development.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 10:48 PM Title: Hot Sweet and Sticky
Kandi felt like a stranger in this chapter. Perhaps this is why those backstories are so useful. Just having a small segment about Kandi in the club and now with Cam isn't much to make me like Kandi.
Maybe I'm just so into Brooklyn that Kandi feels much lower than her. Maybe when Kandi goes to work, I will start to like her.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Kandi will be a bit of departure from my usual prototypical giantess add to that how special Brooklynn is, tough act to follow.
Date: January 09 2017 6:45 PM Title: Hot Sweet and Sticky
Cam, Cam, Cam... He'd better change his attitude and show some enthusiasm soon or his life span may be shortened should the girls tire of him. Self pity doesn't work when you're a human dildo...
Author's Response:
Right? He was the one about the power of positive thinking and now he's Captain sulky. I'm not sure much works when you're a human dildo though, lol
[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 6:35 PM Title: Hot Sweet and Sticky
Leave it to economy-sized Cam to give new meaning to the phrase "Feet? Do your duty!"
Author's Response:
Jumping in feet first? Or, feet don't fail me now?
Date: January 08 2017 6:29 PM Title: A Candle in the Wind
Duggernaut...I would really love to see the description of the shrinking from the perspective of the Omegas... The plans being made by the sisters and of course, the act itself as they all gather around Bear, proceed with the ritual and observe the change in size as he is reduced to toy size...
Author's Response:
Hmm, maybe a chpater solely from Sersei's perspective as Bear Briar is thus reduced and her thoughts about all of the things she might be able to do once she has Oliver. No promises, but we shall see :)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2017 10:39 AM Title: A Candle in the Wind
I think what makes Duggernaut stand out are the conversations and dialogue. I mean, the kid's thoughts were very realistic. You make this kid seem like a kid, and not some adult doing stupid things like spilling food or stuff. He complains about silly stuff like the band color which is exactly what a kid would say! Amazing.
Once again, Vesper stuns again as usual. Love how she keeps getting into her personal space.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I do enjoy witty dialogue between characters and try to make it quasi-authentic. LEts see what Oliver can uncover in Vesper's office...
Date: January 06 2017 5:45 AM Title: A Candle in the Wind
Hmmm more thoughts... Cam... No father... Oliver... No father... Aventus... No father.. is it possible that they also attended the same university, received pink wrist bands and became the play things of the Omegas? Were these men all the sons of Omega sisters? Lastly... Will Bear get to remain on the football team at 3 inches tall?
Author's Response:
Interesting observation. A lot easier to sacrifice a son without paternal interference some might say. Oliver did catch the fact Vesper knew his mother's first name. We also know Sersei's mother was an Omega. the question is will Oliver be able to assemble the pieces in time to prevent himself becoming Property of Omega Pi? :)
[Report This]Date: January 05 2017 11:42 PM Title: A Candle in the Wind
The build up of your stories are easily the best parts of them. Lovin this.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I think there is definitely a correlation to the build up portion of my stories as it is my favorite part to write. That and innuendo laden dialogue between someone who knows something and someone who has no clue.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2017 8:34 PM Title: A Candle in the Wind
It's probably the freshman girl who gave Bear his third bracelet. As it stands to reason that Melody, his girlfriend, gave him the first one! But, what really's starting to freak me out (suitably enough) is Vesper's not-too-subtle insistence that Oliver come along to witness it. Makes me wonder if Brooklynn is going to hand out Number Three, after all!
Author's Response:
Maybe...remember too Cam, Oliver, Bear, amnd a fourth uynnmaed but braceleted male were there for Cam's third bracelet.
Date: December 19 2016 1:16 PM Title: The Brooklynn Tunnel
New member here. Absolutely love your work. From the clues you have left, clearly the omega pi sisters are skilled in the dark arts of witchcraft. The references to the circle being complete and pagan verbiage leave little doubt. I suspect Vesper is the head over the coven. Is Cam's life as he knew it over or can the spell be reversed? Will Oliver discover the truth in time? How many other naive young men have met the same fate as Cam? What happens when the toys have out lived their usefulness? I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work and keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Hi Shrinkmeister, thanks for taking the time to create an account and share your thoughts! There does certainly seem to be a pagan inclination and so far there is no telling how far back this particular tradition dates. There are still a whole lot of questions left unanswered at this stage of the story, and you're right, will Oliver be able to put the pieces together before Sercsei tighten the snare. should be fun to find out! :)