[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 8:30 PM Title: The Kandi Man Can
I deduct one-half of a star for not including the descriptor "water sports.
;-)
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 1:24 PM Title: The Kandi Man Can
Ah, Cam finding a positive in his little situation. Once a little guy knows how to operate on a girl's womanhood, well, we know how that will happen.
Interesting to see Cam finding it easier to fall asleep deep in her groove rather than on the side of her panties. Well, I probably would enjoy it and sleep better too. Maybe dream better as well.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 10 2017 2:22 PM Title: Sweet Tooth
One might refer to that as a cam-shaft 😉
[Report This]Date: February 09 2017 5:11 PM Title: Sweet Tooth
I rest my case. ;-D
[Report This]Date: February 09 2017 5:05 PM Title: Cam
Isn't that what most strippers are good at: a bit of stretching? ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 09 2017 2:46 AM Title: Sweet Tooth
I think I'm starting to like Kandi. The way she used the tape and continued to use him is something I have not seen since Brooklyn.
I agree. I think Vesper has so much potential and it's all about her teasing. Her sexual innuendos in her conversations with Oliver just broaden my imagination.
Yes, I still love Brooklyn, but she is not match to Miss Harwood. :) (I miss her.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 08 2017 7:30 PM Title: Sweet Tooth
Was waiting til I'd get to see Vesper's toys in action and I'm anxious to see in full what role the vixen herself plays in all this.
On a more serious note, really not getting a good feeling about the future of our heroes. Cam seems to have already started to accept his fate. I feel like even if oliver miraculously escapes, he wouldn't be too quick to join him. I'd really love to see them give their mothers a boot to the... er, I mean piece of their mind at the conclusion of this but I don't see it happening.
Date: February 03 2017 1:15 PM Title: Cam
Another great chapter... On to the ritual :)
Author's Response:
Not quite yet :)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2017 3:02 AM Title: Cam
Hmm. I stil don't seem to be attracted to Kandi as much as the other girls.
Maybe I'm jealous. I think Cam should get an exclusive dance just for him.
We know there are other tinies, but we haven't seen any of them. Part of me doesn't want to. I like the focus on just Cam, and soon, Oliver.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You've still got a thing for Brooklynn (and that's okay!)
[Report This]Date: February 01 2017 9:40 PM Title: Cam
There's another, more practical reason Kandi didn't take Cam out of her stocking, right then and there.
It wasn't his "Destiny" to be shown to any of the other strippers.
Author's Response:
Ooh a bit of a stretch... :)
[Report This]Date: February 01 2017 9:30 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Just really really wanted to express my gratitude for your time. BTW this story rocks!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: February 01 2017 6:38 PM Title: Cam
Cam taking a moment out of his torture to ask the real questions. Although I fear that the answer to why he hasn't seen any other tinies is that they have all hitherto passed. I wonder if they'll ever allow Cam, Bear (and let's face the inevitable, Oliver) to meet see each other.
Author's Response:
It does kind of seem like an inevitability for Oliver to became small-iver...
Date: January 29 2017 5:23 PM Title: Sersei's Side of the Story
I have just a few more observations about the current and former Omegas and their mindsets. One thing that stands out to me is the attitude that they have towards men. Among active Omegas, there is no mention of them having any kind of ongoing romantic relationships. Among the older, post collegiate Omegas, only one is married or with a man (Oliver’s mother). Coincidentally, she is the only mother that has any real feelings for the welfare of her son and Omega tribute. The other mothers seem resigned to the fact that their sons were never really their own, they were always the property of the sisterhood. The Omega’s sentiment seems to be that men are only to be used and once their life energy has been drained off, they are reduced (pardon the pun) to being things and are no longer considered to be people. Thus, Sersei’s attitude towards the reduced Cam at the breakfast table and her reference to reduced men being the equivalent of a cigarette butt.
If Oliver still can’t put the pieces of what has happened together, I believe he has little hope. Neither Sersei or Vesper or any of the Omegas who pretend to be his friends truly care for him at all. They see him as they see all other men…fodder to be sacrificed to the Ritual for the Harvest. If there is any exception to the Omegas attitudes, it is Harmony. Harmony still isn’t a true believer and has not yet participated in the Harvest ritual. I believe that she will seek out Oliver to warn and save him from the impending fate the sisters have planned.
I originally believed that the Omegas were involved in the dark arts of witchcraft. I still believe that there is some kind of dark pagan magic they use and I also see them being akin to vampires. They feed off the life energy of their victims and while the feeding doesn’t immediately kill the tributes, once their energy is consumed, there doesn’t seem to be any going back. There is no restoration to normal size for them. What remains is to be used and eventually disposed of when the sisters have finished them off.
Come on Harmony, screw your pledge of secrecy to the Omegas and step up to do the right thing. Help Oliver!!
Author's Response:
Okay I'll play along. True none of them seems to have a boyfriend. Also true thus far only Oliver's mom has been revealed to be in a relationship. Sersei's description of Cam being like a cigarette butt is pretty brutal and seems to objectify him without regard for him as a person - true again. As I noted in an earlier review Harmony is my outlier so who knows if she'll wisen Oliver up before it's too late. Sersei is circling like a shark around wounded prey now. I can hear the music from Jaws in my head as I think about Sersei. Time is ticking away for Oliver...
[Report This]Date: January 29 2017 12:38 AM Title: Sersei's Side of the Story
And the hi-jinks ensue!
Seriously, though: is it really applicable to compare the shrinking of males to smoking a cigarette? One process reduces the size and mass of men. The other merely reduces life expectancy!
Author's Response:
Blame Sersei for the analogy. I wanted to use a joint as an example but she talked me out of it. Chewing gum might have been a good analogy too now that I think about it.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2017 9:08 PM Title: Sersei's Side of the Story
There is so much to talk about. So much stuff has been introduced that I got to question it like how Harmony questioned the ritual.
This chapter and the next one are the "wtf is going on" chapters. This ritual is just too complex it seems for these girls to be doing it over and over again for generations.
That cigarette analogy didn't quite click for me. Maybe next chapter. It seems like these girls have to use Brian to make him shrink. Does that mean sex? They take his seed and he shrinks? Could be.
Sersei is kinky. I hope she does sit on Oliver's face. Facesitting is so hot in my opinion. It's the closest thing to insertion that can happen in reality. Since you mentioned it, it makes me love Sersei much more. Can't decide who is sexier; Sersei or Brooklyn.
Also, Harmony brings a good point. Why are they there? Especially Oliver. He got unconscious twice now and it was for no reason. It just makes Oliver to become more suspiscious again. Maybe he will be suspicious of Sersei since she was the last thing he saw when he went out.
I was laughing when Harmony went super critical about the whole thing. "Aren't they people?" Lol! This seems like you are mocking the reviewers who nitpick everything, haha!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Note that this isn't an every day occurrence as only four males appeared to be marked for the game so it want attract too much attention. Harmony is brand new to this and we yet don't really know a whole lot about her yet except she seems to have a morality missing from the other sisters. Things are heating up and poor Oliver is the moth being drawn to the flame.
Date: January 28 2017 7:48 PM Title: Sersei's Side of the Story
How incredibly careless can they be? They're just going to do the same thing with Oliver this time as they did last time? I'm pretty sure any sane person, if they weren't already thinking something was utterly wrong with this group, would begin to think so after they passed out and awoke in their room with no memory of the previous night not once but TWICE?! Especially given the fact that both times, someone from that night, the person who it was supposed to be about, dissappeared. I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be showing up for my night.
Speaking of dissapearing, wouldn't someone notice like 1 guy going missing per week at this university? Sure they happened to have an excuse with Cam's family, but they don't have that with everyone. Unless all of the guys are sons of former sisters, in which case, their dads would still notice them going missing and report it to the police, who would start to investigate the multiple dissappearances on this university, which would inevitably lead them to the last place all of these guys were last known to be going (some of them must have told their roommates where they were going), Omega Pi. Am I over-analyzing a story that is so clearly set in a fantasized world? Yes.
Also: so it seems that most of what they want from these guys is actually some sort of life-force they release as they shrink, which the girls then absorb? And then having them as a little plaything afterwards is just a nice side-effect?
Author's Response:
Wow thanks for the enthusiastic and thorough review. Let's see if I can't provide a little clarity. We are not sure where Oliver might awaken. We do know he is suspicious but there is no way he would deduce the shrinking factor. So far Cam is the only one who is missing with a possible explanation as to why. How will the disappearance of Bear Briar go over? We shall see if it is plausible. I have tried to establish those taken as being descended from women who were/are affiliated with Omega Pi. Yes the life force energy is what is being taken from those being shrunk leaving only a tiny plaything behind. As the next few chapters unfold I hope it sheds more light on your insightful questions. :)
[Report This]Date: January 26 2017 1:42 AM Title: Third One is the Charm
Man, if Sersei started telling me everything, I would be so turned on. That she would use me as her toy and I will be in her control. Of course, I think Oliver has different thoughts on the matter.
That hug though. Everytime I hug girls, I instinctively lean forward so my chest and pelvis don't even touch the girl. Even though I want my body to touch the girl's, I just keep my distance and only wrap my arms around her. However, if the girl closes the gap and hugs me tightly, then I would be happy. I fear if I close the gap, the girl might think I'm a creep or soemthing.
Oliver is so lucky. I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 25 2017 10:16 PM Title: Third One is the Charm
You know, in real-world chemistry, they have these things called "binary agents," where one of the two components doesn't work without the other. I'm now starting to wonder if this shrinking potion is a trinary agent?
Date: January 25 2017 9:14 PM Title: Third One is the Charm
Oliver, Oliver, Oliver... you knew it was coming and you still drank the Omega Kool-Aid... Hopefully he doesn't make the same mistake in two days time when he is the center of attention. I'm curious to see how Bear's sudden disappearance is explained away... another "family obligation"? Once Bear vanishes Oliver has to put two and two together. Interesting how Vesper made her speedy exit from the room... no doubt preparing for Bear's reduction ritual... the gathering of candles, etc. For a minute, I actually thought that Sersei might actually have some kind of feelings for Oliver but clearly, he is just another toy and how casually she readies herself for his quick death at the hands of Cerys. These are some cold blooded, heartless bitches and taking another life is as nonchalant an act as throwing away a used Kleenex... nasty...
Date: January 22 2017 1:17 PM Title: Walk a Mile in someone Else's Shoes
Kandi decides to put her foot down and Cam is perfect for his role... A shoe in :) I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...