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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 10:25 PM Title: Stan

What if Stan shrinks and Samantha gets to play with him? That actually sounds like a good idea.

I'm hope Vesper returns soon. I miss her.

Do parents usually talk about their kids dating and having sex like this? Do they think that Oliver attracts a lot of girls? I wonder why Stan brought up Oliver getting into a girl.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We shall soon see Vesper in all her glory... but the satory is going to move in a direction that might leave you feelings somewhat disheartened by my previous comment. Sorry Tom.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:37 PM Title: Stan

A thought occurred to me... If there are any fans of the original Star Trek out there, there was an episode called "Mudd's women".  In the show, there was something called the "Venus drug".  This drug, when taken by a very average looking woman, made her look like a perfect 10.  Is it possible that the harvest of the life energy of their victims has the same effect on the participating Omega sisters? Is this the reason they keep going back for more…? To maintain their beauty…? Like I said, it’s just a thought...



Author's Response:

Seems like someone has caught on to my little charade...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:24 PM Title: Stan

Oh, brother! I wonder if that photo-capture was actually sent by Oliver? Or could it have been sent by Sersei, herself?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 9:08 PM Title: Stan

At first I took pity on Samantha.  Here she was, a sister of the Omegas but one who was being forced to give up Oliver, her dearest love.  The mere thought of what Oliver had in store made her an emotional train wreck.  Like I said... I felt bad for her... until this chapter.  She is as bad as any of them.  She still participates in robbing these college men of their lives.  They all deserve to burn. It seems that Stan's visit may interfere with the timing of the plans the sisters have for Oliver.  This should be interesting.  Can't wait for more... 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 7:40 PM Title: Stan

Is Samantha about to become another Jessica Atreides?

And how old is Vesper, if this has been going on for awhile?



Author's Response:

Jessica turned her back on the Bene Gesserit for the sake of the Kwisatz Haderach. It brings up and interesting thought about regressive latent abilities. Does Oliver possess some type of power? The next Maud Dib? Hmmm

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2017 6:56 PM Title: Stan

Okay, just for the record, did I miss something?  Does Oliver know his mom was a 'mega?  How could he not if she's going on "reteats?"  If that clue was given I just missed it.  He didn't know how his boss could know his mom, wouldn't that be an obvious link?

I know...there's a very good chance, as a growing boy, he just never cared what sorority his mom was in.

By the way, any mom who is willing to see her son sacrificed can burn in existencial hell...the one that really hurts.

I am really hooked on this damn story.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2017 3:00 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 2

It's sexy how powerful these lovely bodies can be deadly.

Teagen and Kandi are good, but even in part 2, I still don't find them as sexy and dominant as Brooklyn or Sersei.

Love the descriptions of Cam struggling inside to find a breath. It shows how powerful these girl's muscles are and how they are controlling him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 5:03 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 2

Weird! Arousing...but weird.

I still give it a perfect ten, though.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 12:54 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 2

Ladies and gentlemen!  Tonight we are in the presence of greatness.  The giant of the shrunken man story is here to show us all how it is done!

Truly a great chapter.  I really feel for Cam in his predicament.  Steamy as it is.

Thanks for sharing this with us, all your fans.

Oh, geek moment: you see how they’re be so “not gentle” with him?  Everybody remember the scene with him in the shower? Looking down and wondering if the fall would take him out of this hell?  We’ll this scene should be seen as proof the answer would be “no.”

It doesn’t matter that it looks like he’s on a tall building, what matters is it’s only 3 to 4 feet.  He would only build up so much kinetic energy and if he can take what these two monster cunts can dish out, he can take what a 4 foot fall can dish out.  He may even have acquired a “non lethal terminal velocity,” meaning he could survive a fall from nearly any height.

So, no, he won’t find release that way.

Though, you gotta wonder how many have tried.  And how they felt when they learned they were denied even that option.  And what happened to the relationship once they basically said, “I’d rather be dead than go on with you.”

Damn, that got dark fast.  From physics even....

Anyway, let’s hope Duggernaut’s muse continues to treat him right.  And we all get to see what happens next.

Peace.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 1:50 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1

Normally, I don't have a lot of use for a SM story (being a SW fan.)  I only intended to read Michael's story because it had F/f content (a nice scene BTW.)  But damn it was a good story.

So I see your name on Property of Omega Pi and I figue it won't hurt to look... and GODDAMMIT you got me hooked.  You've created such compelling character.  Such intrigue. I really care what happens to Oliver and Cam.

Usually when I do read SM I'm appreciating the naughtiness of the girls, but really rooting for your guys.  I want them to be figure things out and be ok.  (Oliver and Cam, I don't think anybody's gonna cry when Bear gets his.) I can't be "with" the girls in this one...too evil.

I do want to mention that Oliver can check if he's been roofied, there's a rape services in every town that will give him a piss test.  Of course,If he finds something odd..."wormwood???what???"  He might start researching down the right path.

Oliver and Cam are two of the most interesting characters in the genre. And,consdering the Omega Pi's tastes, it kind of explains why every guy on campus these days is a beta male cuck.

Btw, did you get the message I sent you?

I hope you will continue to be inspired to work on this, I really want to see where it goes.

Peace,

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Hi PixL8Ed thanks for taking the time to read this story and share your thoughts. Unfortunately I did not receive your message for whatever reason. I can be reached at Duggernaut66@outlook.com  I really appreciate the fact you explored a story outside your normal preferences.  FYI I have the next few chapters roughed out so I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of this little tale. :) Also thanks for the thumbs up on Michael's Story and the F/f

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 6:49 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1

Wow! That was so cruel! Sersei shows complete disrespect toward Cam! That just wasn't right! I mean, if Cam dies, his sister will be responsible.

Cam is struggling to get himself free and then Sersei just pushes his head inside and continuous to push him until even her own finger was deep inside! Part of me felt that Sersei is blind to the danger of that action.

Teagen and Kandi are great but I know that part 2 will be better. Well, part 2 is always better. Part 1 is tongue fucking. Part 2 is with the other orifices.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sersei showed her colors while Teagan and Kandi get better acquainted and I think part 2 will get a little more in depth - pun intended 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 4:49 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1

Heh! All that was missing was the four of them watching "Supergirl On Demand" featuring Alex Danvers and Maggie Sawyer.

Author's Response:

Hmm having not seen the show...

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 1:06 PM Title: Teagan and Kandi, Part 1

The kind of sister every brother would like to have...



Author's Response:

Am I detecting a hint of sarcasm?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2017 2:36 PM Title: Tag Teamed

These girls are twisted.. Sersei's treatment of Cam is just wrong... I guess she's getting ready for Oliver...



Author's Response:

Sersei has been teasing herself in anticipation of her acquisition of Oliver, and yep, there is defintiely a slight twist to the girls in this sisterhood.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 9:58 PM Title: Tag Teamed

Even thought I don't know Teagen, she seems like a fun girl. Maybe not as fun as the mighty Brooklyn or the sexy Sersei, but I am interested in her.

Why does Sersei want to watch? And what was the reason for Sersei to stop fucking Oliver from the last chapter? (Yep, I remember that.)

Well, looks like fun next chapter. I can't wait!

Author's Response:

Sersei wants to watch for two reasons. 1) she is horny 2) a chance to see her brother';s dream of nailing her friends come true. She did follow through with Oliver because she wants him when he is little, the comment "you feel so good in my hand," is foreshadowing of what she really wants, plus she wants to keep herself hyper aroused when it's time to have her fun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2017 8:03 PM Title: Tag Teamed

Is there no end to these girls' depravity?

Author's Response:

hmm, none that I have stumbled over yet

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 2:15 PM Title: Rude Awakening

Oliver is letting the little head think instead of the big head. He knows that the text he received "from Cam" was faked.  He knows something strange is going on with the Omegas.  He has the odd conversation with his mother and stepfather and he knows that the Omegas drugged him twice. Come on Oliver... Use the big head...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 5:21 AM Title: Rude Awakening

Amazing! Honestly this erotic masterpiece was a surprise becuase I wasn't expecting it. I was instead expecting another Cam chapter, but I think the Oliver ones are way more entertaining.

I swear, Sersei and Brooklyn know how to spice things up. Brooklyn was just straight up horny. Sersei seems like she is into foreplay. Man, I love these 2 girls.

It's those little things that make me appreciate this chapter: The fact that he was in her room, different clothes, her hand on his dick, the whispers in his ear, the boobs rubbing his cheek and the wet finger to his lips. Wow!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Aplayful Sersei is something to behold but an enough she wants to be holding Oliver 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2017 11:34 PM Title: Rude Awakening

Oh! If only Oliver's last name was "Queen!" I could do so many jokes about "quivers" and "shafts." At least, till the next "Crisis To Infinitely Boost Circulation."

Author's Response:

Are you 'green' with envy? 

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2017 1:04 PM Title: The Kandi Man Can

Interesting... I can't wait to see how Cam exacts his revenge on Sersei... Back to Bear and the sisters...

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