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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 3:00 AM Title: Oliver the Tour Guide

Okay, so the big moment is coming up.  Whila a bunch of us have been rooting for Oliver, destiny approaches.  Time to share a little truth from my perspective.

    Okay, we all know Oliver is gonna get shrunk.   We all know he’s gonna spend the rest of the story as “less.”  But if you are a fan of the character, keep in mind, no matter what his circumstance.  He didn’t lose.  
    First, in order to lose, you have to know you’re in conflict.  Any other circumstance is more like an assassination.  Do you say JFK “lost” to Oswald?  No.
    You know how you win a war?  The first step is declare fucking war!  If you take hostile action against someone with out them knowing you are hostile, you are an assassin, a murderer, something...you are not a winner and your victim is not a loser.
    Oliver has made mistakes.  That isn’t losing.
    Oh sure..the ‘Mega Cunts with their antisocial personality disorder laden brains will think “We won.”  But they lie to themselves better than they lie to men.  Ah, you say “he took the arm bands they came with a warning ‘belong to omega pi?’”  So the megs warned him and he still walked into their trap.
    Imagine a scenario.  I show you a picture of a house.  I say, “I will sell you a house just like this for $20,000.  Only one previous owner.”  The pic shows a brown and red house, with a nice porch.  On the back of the photo is written X square feet, X insulation...etc.  You say “Sure.” and give me the money.  I give you a copy of the photo.  “See,” I say, “just like this one.  Only one previous owner.”  You didn’t lose.  You were deceived. 
    I didn’t sell you a house, I sold you a photo: I lied.  The implied promise was I’d sell you a house with X sqft and X insulation.  It was the only term on the board.
     Now, keep in mind:the girls handing out the arm bands all “belong to omega pi.”  They aren’t being shrunk, humliated, tortured.  The aren’t having their lives destroyed.   The only terms on the board are their experiences of “belonging to Omega Pi” which are clearly benign.  What they are selling and what they are showing are two very different things.  In other words: they lie.
    Those of us who come from a rural area and have half a brain, might object that Duggernaut is treating Oliver like a “bumpkin”, but we all know the guy who is “smart, except when it comes to women.”  Oliver being that guy, does not make him a loser.  In fact, you could make an argument that Oliver is not that guy. 
    Oliver is a small town gentleman.  He as treated the ‘Megs as though they were honorable and worthy of trust and respect.  A mistake, but not his fault.  Do you suppose for one moment his so called mother ever said “Oliver, guard your self respect and dignity jealously?”  Ha!  Her supposed mothering was more like “playing house” when she wasn’t showing him off to her psycho friends.  He has no defense against that.  Especially when he’s being lied to and manipulated. 
    The base mistake he’s made is interacting with them like they were human.  These things are only shaped like beautiful women...inside...I’m not sure what they are....but it’s as ugly as it comes.   They may be human enough that they feel the need for justification....some “all men are guilty crap”....what has Oliver done compared to what they do?  Makes any justification they give themselves a great big, stinky lie.
    When Sersi grabs Oliver’s junk she’s telling him “I want you as a man.”  Could there be a bigger lie?  She grabs her own junk and tells herself she’s thinking of Oliver.  Un huh, what did she compare their victims to?  Oh yeah, a cigarette butt.  Can’t be both a cigarette butt and Oliver.   But, when you lie to others so easily...lying to  yourself is a breeze. 
    This, actually, illustrates one of the big lies the ‘Megs tell themselves; they are intimate with their victims.  It’s pretty  clear they are getting off on their victims pain and humiliation, the guys themselves are providing very little physical stimulation.   If it were otherwise, they wouldn’t need all those sex toys.  Look at Sersi’s fantasies about Oliver, all designed to humiliate him, not stimulate him.
    So, no matter how it goes, Oliver has not “lost.”  He’s been victimized, but that’s not the same thing.  For those of us who are rooting for Oliver, we know he’s not a loser and the ‘Mega’s lies and double entendres can’t make him one.   When some giant monster is pushing him around, he won’t be a loser then either.  Bullied, maybe, but not a loser. 

    I've described before how Duggernaut has created these fantastic good guys and bad guys for us.  And this is just to show that I'm still with Oliver all the way....Go Team Oliver!

Peace.

 

PixL8Ed

 



Author's Response:

Alright then, it seems as if they may be a hint of dislike for the poor misunderstood young ladies of Omega Pi, a mere wisp of discontent. Let's see what the next few chapter holds and see if you're still of the same mind, tee hee...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 7:05 AM Title: Oliver the Tour Guide

Trust your own kind before anyone else. A classic example of what psychologists call (not making this up, Dug)...

...Brooklyn Syndrome.

Author's Response:

Good to know

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 6:47 AM Title: Oliver the Tour Guide

Is Oliver finally putting it all together?  The Omega's special knockout beverage, that the two previous lucky recipients of three pink wrist bands have strangely disappeared.  When it came to naming a contact that he trusted the most, it wasn't his mother Oliver went with, it was Stan.  It should be interesting to see how he declines or pretends to drink the roofie juice during tonight’s special event.  I'd love to see him fake being unconscious so he can see what is really going on with these girls and their tributes as they begin to prep his body for the reaping...



Author's Response:

So soon. Yes he's trying to make some sense of it, but the reality is so far out of anything he could puzzle out. too little, too late? You shall see exactly what you ask for as the next chapter, oliver does indeed thwart the laced beverage... :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 9:37 PM Title: Oliver the Tour Guide

Honestly, I would have said the exact same thing as Deacon if I was him. Once again, this guy is literally me. If a girl is that good looking I would praise her. Also, nice touch about panties. Most guys would say pants, but Deacon and I know the real deal.

I have been starting to watch more movies recently, but not enough to know many references. So if I had a code with roommates, it might be with sports, or maybe video games instead of movies.

I would have jumped out of my seat if Brooklyn touched Deacon. I would be so happy if she just touched him in a few more places. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure Deacon's role will be expanding in the next little while, just saying. As for movies, dude, i love movies and quotes. I have a couple of friends we probably communicate more through movvie quotes than actaul conversation. A couple of favs - True Romance, particularly Christopher Walkne and Gary Oldman's scenes - amazing. Snatch, Lock Stock and two smoking Barrels, Departed, the list is virtually endless!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 8:06 PM Title: Oliver the Tour Guide

Look at that!  Way to go Oliver!  CYA!

Not that it'll help...poor guy.

suspense is killing me.

More please!



Author's Response:

A moment of clarity...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 9:48 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Hey!  No fair!  Oliver plays with himself and misses important clues.  Sersi plays with herself and just intuits a problem?...guys have intuition too!

Oh! And Cam wasn't "happy enough" about his life being destroyed?!?!?!  I hope she dies in a slow, humilitating fashion.  Something involving weasels.

So...Queen Evil Skank might take a shine to Oliver?  Well, it might be impossible for Oliver to make his situation better with her over him.  So bad.  On the other hand...Ha Ha ! Screw You Sersi!

Really creating some intrigue here Duggernaut.  The web you've weaved really has me caught.  It reads like a Hitchcockian horror mystery and I'm just hooked.  Great, amazing stuff.

 

Peace,

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

That because men are dumb beasts easily led astray, and as a man i own that.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 7:05 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

This Prima Eligendo sounds like a quasi-Amazonian version of a certain Norman custom from the Middle Ages. Wherein the lord of the land could deflower a newlywed peasant bride on her wedding night...before even consummating with her own husband!

Author's Response:

I based it off the right of Prima Noctae, exactly what you mentioned!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:25 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Well....that's a plot twist for sure.

After all this time, we realize that Sersei might not even get to play with Oliver? Hmm. Obviously I'm a bit dissapointed becuase every time a new character is intrigued, they tend to change the plot somehow.

Hopefully, this works out in our favor and Sersie's.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:08 PM Title: Preparations and an Unexpected Guest

Hmmm intersting... so the life energy not only maintains the beauty of the Omega participants, it extends their lives as well.  So, for the old ones, their very lives depend on the reaping of the life energy...



Author's Response:

Almost like energy vampires, youth and vanity at someone else expense...

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2017 6:46 AM Title: The Night Before...

Just as Oliver's mother is out of town partaking in the ritual to steal some other poor sap's life away from him, these two crones are in town to have their fill of life energy to feed their ceaseless addictions.  As the line said, Oliver is a deer surrounded by wolves.  He is the guest invited to a dinner in his honor and he doesn't know he is the main course.  He being lead to the slaughter by the women who pretend to be his friends as they have to dozens before him.  Oliver's instincts are true, the red flags are being raised, but he still hasn't been able to put it all the pieces together.  Why hasn’t he pursued Bear’s disappearance?  Will Stan's visit be in time to intervene or will another step up to save our hero? This story is becoming my addiction.  More please…



Author's Response:

Exactly right. Oliver and Bear were never freinds, so thinking of the big fella in the hospital hasn't triggered anything in Oliver. Stan's visit is scheduled for the upcoming weekend, about three days aways....

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2017 8:44 PM Title: The Night Before...

Sersei got him good. Since she has spent so much time with Cam, she probably knows all of Cams jokes.

Vesper looking good as always. Her friends creeped me out too. Haha! "So delicious." Lol.

Things are looking good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

True enough, Sersei knows her brother. Soon, Tom, soon...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2017 5:26 PM Title: The Night Before...

The thing is, Oliver doesn't even know he's doing "the dish of the day" for all these evil cows.

And yes, even their "little" jokes are evil.

I gotta say, everytime they get away with something it just plain bugs me.

That is why I'm hooked on this story.  It may seem like this is just some "cleverness" on the villains part.  But it's really adding to the suspense.  At least if you're rooting for Oliver.  Though, being an Oliver fan is starting to feel kind of like being a Cubs fan for the better part of the 20th century.

Great work Duggernaut, you set the standard.

 

Peace,

 

PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Heh heh heh, Oliver being on the outside of an inside joke leaves him treading water with no bottom in sight, just black silhouettes circling the depths beneath his feet in the darkness below, anticipating the frenzy to come...

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2017 5:24 PM Title: The Night Before...

Hoo-boy! Why is the phrase "Calm before the storm" suddenly ringing through my mind?

Author's Response:

Angry clouds gathering o the horizon, the air feel dense, charged as the storm crawls toward the shore...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 5:00 PM Title: Oliver's New Roomie

In the worst light, Oliver looks like a good friend. As long as it's not partly-cloudy or something. He's literally pulling his pud while forgetting important clues. Phone call from NotCal anybody?


But first a little about me. I learned to read with the Encyclopedia Brown Mysteries. Sherlock Holmes? Read'em, not fair play mysteries. Star Wars came along and broadened my tastes, but mysteries were my go-to read. Later I had to special order Sexual Homocide: Patterns and Motives by Bob Ressler because my damn book store didn't just carry the damn thing. First season of Monk..fair play, I could solve them before the credits ran. My copy of the FBI Crime Classification Manual is looking pretty rough theses days.


It's frustrating for me to see Oliver with a real mystery on his hands and just kind of, well, not realizing it. See Oliver doesn't think like me. And yes, again, it's frustrating.


But that's the power of truly excellent writing.


Duggernaut has created characters that draw you in. Even when you don't agree with their priorities. When Jamie Lee Curtis hides in the closet (even though you're screaming “NO”) you don't get up and leave the theater, you're with her. You care. That's where we are with Oliver. Even when we're saying “get your head out of your ass” we still care about him. We never write him off.


And it's all due to Duggernaut's genius. There's not a lot of authors (even pros) who can create something both frustrating and satisfying as story.


 


On the chapter, the fact that Oliver isn't using the fresh set of eyes has me of two minds. Part of me is thinking he should just say “Hey Deacon, friend of yours goes missing. Last seen in the company of people you're sure use roofies. You get a text from his number from someone not him. How worried are you?”


Deacon would probably say “Pretty worried.”


“Ah, but here's the rub. One of those people is his sister.” Oliver points out.


“Uh, Oliver. You don't roofie people you love.” Deacon says, not adding “dumbass.”


On the other hand, the kid might not be reliable. He might blab to every 'mega twat he sees about Oliver's suspicions. Just trying to get their attention.


So, we have a bit of an impasse with the new guy. Just the kind of situation that is making this story so compelling.


 


Thanks again for sharing your amazing work with us, Duggernaut.


 


Peace,


 


PixL8Ed



Author's Response:

Hey PixL8Ed, thanks for the glowing review. I'm a extremely pleased this tale has you shaking with frustration knowing the fate that awaits oliver and the string of clue he has blissfully overlooked. Is there enough to overcome his enflamed blood or does this little lamb allow himself to be led to the slaughter? Next chapter will shed some light on his frame of mind as the noose tightens.  :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 8:31 PM Title: Oliver's New Roomie

I really, really like this kid, Deacon. I mean, I feel like this kid represents me. I see myself in him.

It all makes sense now. Oliver=Duggernaut (the guy running the show). Cam= Carycomic(the guy with jokes and references. Deacon=TomSpeedy(the guy sooo interested at girls and wants to be more buff).

Deacon wants to learn about these Omega Pi girls and I would too if that was me. Also, I always try and keep a conversation going, especially with strangers. Lastly, his vocabulary is average and I would put myself in the same boat as him.

Usually, I despise new characters, but I like this kid.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, yeah Deacon is a likable chap. The question is whether or not the Omegas have thier pretty eyes on him...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 7:27 PM Title: Oliver's New Roomie

Heh! Oliver's wild guess is a lot closer to the truth than he thinks. As for Deacon? His being adopted makes me wonder if Omega Pi is getting a little more cold-blooded. Shrinking young men they think will _never_ be missed!

Author's Response:

It just might be that insidious, though adoptive records and screening are usually very thorough...but who knows who might be highly placed inside the department responsible for adoptions? If she's an Omega Pi, they just got a whole lot more sinister.

Reviewer: IN54N1TY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2017 3:55 PM Title: Stan

I was at a wedding over the weekend and there was one girl there who i couldn't stop starring at and i couldn't figure out why because she was hot but not the hottest one there then i realized... she was EXACTLY how i pictured Kandi in my head



Author's Response:

Man, color me jello!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 11:20 PM Title: Stan

Okay, I figured it out.  Stan is the type of guy who sees what he wants to see in women. 

That explains how he can be taken in by an evil cow like Samantha.

Carycomic-thanks for the tip, but Min' never made much F/f content, which is the flaver of SW I prefer.  Think Sally Reynolds' "Slumber Party."  Great stuff.



Author's Response:

Stan has no reason to suspect anything untoward. the name of the sorority means zero to him as long as she is enjoying herself. don't we all see what we want to see and blind ourselves to other truths?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 11:49 AM Title: First Time Away From Home

Dear Pixl8ed: allow me to recommend the shrunken women stories of The-Minimizer @ Deviantart. He used to have his _own_ website. But, apparently, it went bankrupt for one reason or another.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 7:06 AM Title: Stan

And another thing...in what universe does that psycho bitch have "innocent eyes."  She wouldn't even be able to generate a glamour to give the effect: she wouldn't even know what they look like.

Just sayin'.

God...so hooked on this story....someone make some nice SW porn that I don't have to think about.

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