[Report This]Date: April 27 2017 1:12 PM Title: Forward Momentum
I'll bet _this_ one is Harmony's room.
Date: April 27 2017 9:01 AM Title: Forward Momentum
I agree Pix. I believe he is referencing the trap that the Omegas have set and caught their victims is effective because of their amazing beauty.
Date: April 27 2017 5:12 AM Title: Forward Momentum
Tom,
I would say that the honey reference is Oliver’s way of acknowledging the ‘Megs beauty and predatory nature. In this case he is the fly,wistfully admitting to himself how they caught him.
There’s an implied “Ya got me, honey.”
...or maybe it’s something else...
pix
[Report This]Date: April 26 2017 8:04 PM Title: Forward Momentum
I'm not sure. I'm pretty sure he's better off not waiting until the wee hours (heh) of the morning. They might post a spotter at that point...though not on the first night. But pretty soon, i expect there to be traps and sentries.
He's siezed the initiative and that feels like the right move. I'm also pretty sure he was better off not going for Maeve's phone. Can't see a way to make that work in this circumstance.
Damn suspenceful. Just amazing. Duggernaut, this is great stuff. Thank you.
PixL8Ed
[Report This]Date: April 26 2017 6:47 PM Title: Forward Momentum
Flashes of unaware. Nice touch.
"You catch more flies with honey than you do with vinegar." What? Is this a reference to soemthing?
I like this sneaky journey. Reminds me of Tom in Janine's house.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: April 25 2017 5:25 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
Pix... You are nothing if not creative... Gotta love it ;)
[Report This]Date: April 25 2017 4:42 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
Shrinkmeister, buddy, don’t ask me questions like that...you gotta know I’m gonna answer you.
Though right now I’m up to imagining the soundtrack to “Omega Prison Girls 3: Pussy Parole” (because “Omega Prison Girls 2: The Lick Down” left so many unanswered questions.) Is guitar fusion jazz too much of a stretch?
While your suggestions have merit, they’re a little too old school. Even classic impaling doesn’t quite do it for me. Though if we were stuck with the golden oldies, that’d be my choice, it has that “intimate" element to give things a touch of balance. However, your suggestion of making it public is inspired.
I’m kinda drawn to something that invokes the three-fold-law-of-return, we see in modern occult theory. The law basically states that what you do with your power, positive or negative, comes back to you multiplied by three. Using that logic, since their victims are shrunk to three inches they should wind up at about one inch tall.
Since they consume their victims (after a fashion) they should be covered and restrained in a hard candy shell, (like a Jolly Rancher) and tossed into a cage full of hungry weasels. The hard candy shell provides a moment of pure enjoyment as they get see and hear the charming furry creatures chew their way toward them for a touch of the old room one oh one.
Since I’m orchestrating this little show, Sersi gets to go last. She also gets to watch as Cam and Oliver do rock paper scissors lizard spock to see who gets to punt her in. I see Oliver, even if he wins, giving the privilege to Cam anyway. He’s earned it.
Of course, it’s tough to top the Cam-ster’s own idea. But do it on a grander scale. Starting with Sersi, they each get shrunk and tied to his johnson, or just stuck in a condom, (he’ll want protection for this.) The he ass plows every Omega Pi in the backdoor. Every Omega Pi. Ever. Even his Grandma. Then the shrinkee gets re-enlarged minus one inch and the process starts over until he’s given them all the special attention they deserve. This process continues as they subjects keep losing an inch a turn. Soon, as the receivers shrink, dem bung holes are tight enough that the tiny creep gets mushed into the slime they already are inside. Now, because we’ve got the magic on our side for this one, they’re protected from things like suffocation and such as long as they don’t enjoy it...the second they like it...choke! Except Sersi, too much chance she’d like it from the first round.
Oh, and to make it public as you suggested, it gets filmed and edited to follow the process for each ‘Meg. Then the vids get sold on Clips4Sale dot com. No reason Bro’ can’t pocket a little something for all his efforts.
Or we just cleverly edit the footage to use in Omega Prison Girls 4:Back Door Row.
Have a nice day everybody.
Pix
Date: April 25 2017 11:56 AM Title: A Port in the Storm
Pix... Perhaps their punishment... Should they actually ever have to pay for what they have done, truly fit the crime. Cerys could be placed in a tank filled with something chemically similar to stomach acid and digested alive. Teagan could be buried up to her neck in human feces, Vesper encased in wax, Cam and Oliver, if they are ever restored, should beat the living crap out of Sersei, Kandi and Brooklynn. There is a special place in hell for Edith and the mother's of the boys willingly set up and handed over to these monsters.
Date: April 25 2017 9:07 AM Title: A Port in the Storm
What did you have in mind Pix? Something public like stoning or flogging or maybe burned at the stake?
[Report This]Date: April 25 2017 4:30 AM Title: A Port in the Storm
Wow foreighnkanto, you must be a truely kind person. In my mind something a bit more like street justice seems the most appropriate. But I can't dismiss you idea of them getting arrested. That could lead to the most interesting "women in prison" story ever. Yep....gotta think about that for a while ;)
Date: April 22 2017 11:33 AM Title: A Port in the Storm
Hey Pix... You keep on keeping on... :)
[Report This]Date: April 22 2017 11:25 AM Title: A Port in the Storm
Okay, I know, the truth sucks, but this is actually a huge win for Oliver. We all know in the long run (I personally hope very long run) Oliver will fall into their clutches. Now he won't have evil harpies looming over him and giggling while he learns the truth. One less tool in Sersi's toolbox of bitchiness.
I kinda smile at the thought of ol' weasel bait telling him and grinning in anticipation...and he shrugs..."figures."
He has to start thinking about food and water and stuff now. And he has to do it before those hunting him can start using those needs as bait.
The suspense is thick enough to cut with a chainsaw. I can see the image in my mind of Oliver on the desk, behind cover, the two slimies in the distance. The writing is that vivid. Wow Duggernaut, just wow.
Peace,
PixL8Ed
And to anyone who doesn't like my bit of "fan fun" please feel free to by pass my reviews. I have no desire to turn a place that should be reserved for heaping praise upon a deserving author into a flame pit. So if you see my nick...just move along.
Date: April 21 2017 9:19 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
Man, what a way to find out about his mom's betrayal. I hope one day Oliver gets full sized again, and has the chance to call his mom a backstabbing bitch to her face right before she gets arrested. That's what she deserves. It's what they all deserve.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2017 8:46 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
I really hope there is some plot twist coming up. Maybe since Oliver avoided the dose from the drink, there are other side effects that the drink did not eliminate.
What if Oliver can reenlarge himself by command and he also has super strength. The girls see him and they try to tackle him, all 200 of them, but Oliver begins smiling as they try to pull him down. Some girls back off marveling at Oliver at how he managed to hold himself despite numerous girls tugging at him. A girl stabs him with a knife...it doesn't penetrate his skin. The girls all back away gasping. Some start looking in fear. Oliver finally speaks. "Relax, I can't hurt you and you can't hurt me. I do admit, this is quite an operation going on here, shrinking guys and using them as sex toys." Some of the girls blushed with embrassment. "A few of you were even going to use me." Oliver continued. He gave a wink at Harmony and she covered her face with shyness. Sersei wasnt fazed. "I will have you Oliver. You won't get away with this." Oliver kept his charming smile. "Get away with what? All of you tried to shrink me. I did nothing. Now if you will excuse me, I would like to enjoy my life in other ways." The girls watched as Oliver marched outside the house and disappear. The girls looked at each other in worry, wondering if they will be in trouble. Vesper calmed them down stating that everyone will be alright. 'At least she hoped' she thought.
Oliver arrived at his dorm and saw sad Deacon, it looked like he was crying. "What's up!" Oliver said. Deacon looked, did a double take and ran up to Oliver and gave him a hug. "Wow, you got stronger." Deacon said. "Long story" Olivier replied.
Then Sersei took the shrinking magic and put it in a dart. She loaded a sniper rifle with it and headed to the top floor of the Omega Pi house. She was fortunate to see Oliver's dorm from her view and aimed her scope. She saw a figure and fired. The figure went down. She went to the dorm to retrieve the body. She wasn't sure if Oliver would shrink, but it was worth a try. She opened the door by flirting with the lock and the door swung open but nothing was in sight. No body on the floor. Sersei got a little excited. "Maybe he shrunk" she thought. Soon, there was a noise on the other side of the wall, it sounded like water rushing and she heard the sound of a girl moaning. Sersei connected the dots and smiled, making her want Oliver more. The noises seemed the get louder and Sersei knew she didn't have much time. She quickly looked under the bed, saw an action figure and decided to look somewhere else. "Wait, that's him!" Sersei exclaimed. Now there was a knock on the door. "Yo Oliver, wanna party with us?" She reached under the bed and grabbed the figure and stuffed him in her panties. Sersei then got up and answered the door. "Hey, Oliv....oh hey beautiful." The guy said. His friends dropped the jaws as they saw Sersei at the door. "Um, is Oliver with you?" he asked, trying to peer into the room but saw nothing. There was a whisper "I bet she gave Oliver head just now and he's hiding." Sersei eyed him and kicked him in the balls. "Oliver is not here. Besides, I was just leaving." Sersei said as she locked the door, winked at the group and walked back to her place with a nice sway to her hips, enjoying the feeling of Oliver against her. She has dreaming of this moment for weeks. Now it's finally here. She heard a little murmer down below. She placed a finger on his back underneath her panties and pressed until she couldn't hear a peep. "Hush Oli, we will have fun soon." she cooed. Sersei arrived in her room and pulled out Oliver. Only it wasn't Oliver. "That was so fucking hot!!!" said the tiny Deacon.
Now that would be weird/awesome plot twist.
Date: April 21 2017 8:01 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
So... Oliver finally learns the hard truth... All Omegas are the same... Lying, two faced backstabbing bitches. None of them can be trusted. Not Sersei's, not Vesper and not even his mother, the person he trusted the most. This will be a battle of wits and intellect. May the bigger man win...
[Report This]Date: April 21 2017 5:17 PM Title: A Port in the Storm
Well, now he knows the truth (if not the whole truth and nothing but...)! Yet, while knowledge is power, Oliver doesn't have the necessary size to implement it. So, I confess that I can hardly wait for chapter 53! If only to see how you get him access to a cellphone he can operate at his...diminished capacity.
Date: April 20 2017 8:45 PM Title: Where O Where Has My Little Lamb Gone?
I thought I'd throw in some sciency fun facts about what the size of the Omegas would be like from Oliver's perspective... If Oliver shrank to about 2 1/2 inches tall from his normal height, say a nice round number like 6 feet, that means he is now about 3.4% or 1/29th of his original size. The mass of the average Omega who is say five feet five inches would be 65 cubed times her original weight. To Oliver that would translate to about 275,000 X that weight. So, a 115-pound Omega would translate to about 31,652,000 pounds. So, Brooklynn’s advice about Oliver not wanting to get accidentally stepped on appears to be sound!
From a height perspective that would mean an Omega that stands five feet five inches would appear to be 157 feet tall. I’ll leave to you to determine the sizes of other parts of the Omega’s anatomies…
Author's Response:
Kind of daunting once you start throwing the numbers around...
[Report This]Date: April 20 2017 7:51 AM Title: Dilemma
Dear Pixl8ed:
In the immortal words of Shrinkmeister...
"...it's just a story."
Date: April 20 2017 1:46 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
Wow it worked. Reviewing just got more fun. I don't know what happened at the end of my last review, but at least I got what I wanted.
Date: April 20 2017 1:44 AM Title: First Time Away From Home
@shrinkmeister,
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