This is going to be my most disgusting pun, yet (in more ways than one). I just can't resist saying it, though.

"Kandi is dandy. But, now, Cam will be licked by her quicker."

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If I was Oliver, I would just admire Brooklyn and think maybe its time for me to get caught. Get Brooklyn to play with me, and then she can give me to Sersei and stuff.

However..... since it's not me and it's Oliver, I want him to remain free of these girls as possible. We get so many instances where these girls catch the guy, but I feel like I want to break this wheel or this system. I want Oliver to show these girls how it's done.

Good thinking by Oliver. Stay in a room that has been already searched. That will at least buy him lots of time.

Two chapters in a row, Deacon has been mentioned. Will he get a chapter soon? Would love to see him just walk to the Omega Pi house, ask for Oliver and we will see what goes from there.

Maybe Deacon will be the beacon for Oliver.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Right? Brooklynn is really a magnificent giantess, physically, just gorgeous, but now we know the omega secret, there is something not quite as pretty on the inside. Have faith in good old deacon, his time is coming

To paraphrase Sonny and Cher: "And the game goes on!"

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The game, the beat, reminds me of the The Kings - Switch into Glide, on and on and on

All the time humming “thank god I’m a country boy.”

This is why we root for Oliver, because it pays off.  He’s not gonna go “I guess I’m a dumbass who want’s to get eaten.”  I do hope he figure’s out the meaning of Ol Weasel Munchie’s “visit” and takes precautions. 

Gearing up was a risk, but since he has a time line in mind, he might be planning another move.  Back to familiar, probably already searched, territory (basement or Maeve’s)  or forward?

Great characters in a great story.  Isn’t that what we all want? Thanks for hooking us up Duggernaut.  You rock!

Oliver is becoming quite the action hero. Now let's see if Deacon and Stan are just as sharp.

It's great seeing this resourceful side of Oliver.  We all knew he was a common sense, no nonsense kind of character.  I also love the kind of decent, country gentleman he is.  That said, let us consider what he has experienced in the last few days.  His roommate and best buddy Cam was, abducted, assaulted and was who knows where being subjected to who knows what kind of torture, all with the approval and at the direction of his own sister who lied and covered up the crime.  He just witnessed how one of these "ladies" treated Bear, completely objectifying and dehumanizing him to be nothing more than a sex toy. Lastly, we have his own personal experience.  He has been drugged, assaulted and turned into this thing he is now, a small shadow of his former self.  He doesn’t know the total motive for these actions, but he knows what has been done and after witnessing Bear's predicament, what Sersei and the other Omegas intend to do to him.  He knows that every woman he has ever known (with the exception of his former girlfriend back home) has deceived him as part of this grand, far reaching conspiracy to do this thing to him.  Sersei, Brooklynn, Harmony, Vesper, Edith, and of course his own loving mother.  All of them working in concert to first direct him here and put him into this situation. We just witnessed his complete rage when he fully understood the betrayal of these "ladies".  It just seems like "He rarely thought of ladies in a derogatory sense, but right now, the word bitch flashed neon in his mind" does not adequately describe the anger and raw emotion he must be feeling.  But then again, he is a country gentleman.  I know what I'd be saying to myself in that situation and I'd be just getting warmed up with "bitch"...

This is amazing work and I’m enjoying it all with chapters being cranked out on a regular basis.  Please keep up the great work… ;)

Gee Sersei...isn't kinda late?  Vision getting blurry?  Feeling tired?  You should rest...never mind the dream about the weasels.....rest...sleeeeep.

I might mention it's a big house.  Lots of places to miss.  And Oliver...he's resourceful.  And really, does she deserve even the slightest taste of victory ...does she deserve anything but a bunch of weasel bites?

Loving the chess game Duggernaut.  God this is good.

Pix

Oliver's freedom appears to be coming to an end.  Oliver's quick thinking is going to have to be a step ahead of Sersei to avoid panty prison and that sticky feeling like you haven't showered in a few days. Is there a ventilator shaft somewhere?  I guess there are positives and negatives to keeping his freedom or getting caught.  On the caught side there is geing fed... But also being fed to Cerys.  Then there's that smell you just can't quite wash off... Hmmm... I'd lean to the side of keeping my freedom...

The bit about thinking of water after eating something salty.  That was great, subtly turning the pressure up on the survival front.

As far as resource gathering goes, Melody the slob might be his best friend right now.  Until someone else makes the same observation.   

Oh, editing note, at one point you call Bear a football “the little football wanted none of it”, which may be wrong, but seems so appropriate I had to laugh.  Freudian slip?

It’s kind of hard to feel sorry for guy like Bear.  In many ways he is like the ‘Megs.  Pushy and selfish.  So I don’t mind if Oliver doen’t go out of his way to help him.  Though it is clearly the right thing to do.   (As long as it makes sense tactically.)  But, it’s me, if i have to choose between saving Bear and the cows getting theirs: WEASELS!

This veneer of childishness has me thinking of Harmony.  How can she be so ignorant of all this? (I will NOT use the term innocent.)  She must be the type of girl who never asked “Where’s Daddy?”  Or maybe she still believes dad is still on a secret mission for the CIA in upper Mongolia.   We’ve only really seen inside “families” that have sons....it could be that as long as the wife throws girls you’re okay....but make a boy and >GAK<

Cool scene Duggernaut.  Thanks for the amazing.

Pix

Wow! That is hot. Getting a free preview of porn without paying anything. In addition, he gets to watch a whole night of porn. For free!

The best part is that Oliver is learning that he is next. If that was me, this would be super exciting! Being helpless and at Sersei's mercy for hours and much more!

While this is undoubtedly erotic, I still would enjoy Oliver to somehow become normal size before he gets found and then confronts Sersei and asks her instantly "Were you planning on shoving me in your vagina?" I can't help but imagine Sersei blushing and trying to create a response. Lol!

I can't wait for the next chapter!