Whoa! Wholesome barista gets to first base with shy gitarista.*


*That's the genuine Spanish spelling, btw.

Author's Response:

Nice!

I love that title. While I hate it when a fly gets stuck on soemthing sticky, especially like a beverage or soemthing, I could see how helpless they are trying to escape. It helped me get a good vision about Oliver in the cream.

Brooklyn took a big whif of Oliver and the cream. Imagine if Oliver was inside a lollipop and Brooklyn tried to get a taste. That's the next step.

What I like about unaware, is the chance that they could be caught at any moment. The problem with stories that are only unaware, is that since I know the tiny won't be caught, it ruins the suspense. However, this scene is frightenly awesome becuase any moment Oliver could be spotted.

Wow! Brooklyn left Cam on the bed alone for a moment! If I was Oliver, I would have snuck over to Cam, undress him and put his clothes on me, and then I would hide Cam under the pillow or soemthing with my clothes. Then, when Brooklyn comes back, I would lie on the bed, pretending to be Cam, and she probably would mistake me for Cam and put me inside her pants! If there was a tiny Tom, he would do that.

After that fiasco, I think Oliver should choose a new hiding place. Maybe by Brooklyn's bedside so he can get a nice view of the action. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Right! How long can Oliver's luck hold? I bet right about now Oliver was wishing there was a tiny Tom in this story.

     Holy crap!

     My heart was in my throat when he couldn't open that dang lid!

      It kind of amazes me how Oliver is reacting to the 'Megs like we did at first, disbelief, asking why....but it's only been a bit.  He'll figure them out soon enough.  At least as much as you can something that only looks like a human being.

     It kind of amuses me that they call them “littles.”  I wonder how many of them read the children’s series?  Maybe go along girl did.  That’s why she feels something.  Don’t worry, it’ll pass. 

     There is a certain irony at work in the name too.  Here are these creatures with tiny, shriveled souls calling Oliver “little.”  He has proven himself to be more honorable, more intelligent, more resourceful, more courageous, more compassionate (not hard in this case) and just an all around bigger guy than any of them. 

     I really wonder if he’ll actually be able to rescue Cam.  I would guess no.   Still, Cam is close to the end of his rope.  Maybe if Oliver can just offer him some hope, that might give him strength.  It might help him to have a light at the Brooklyn Tunnel.  If he has hope he might to make it to a rescue.

     I think we're all going "Hang in there pal."

     Another great bit of suspense Duggernaut.  Love this!

     pix

@shrinkmeister,

You got beat to 300. You are 301st.

Try try and try again.

But remember, you won't win.

God I hate them...did I mention that?

Nice to see them going at each other...nice comeraderie...or however you spell it.  Let's hope it gets worse. 

Thanks Duggernaut...I love this.

pix

     Yep.  You nailed them @Shrinkmeister.  If you’d like to nail them some more, I can lend you a hammer, any time.
      One of the things that makes them so delightfully loathsome is the contrast between how the look on the outside and how utterly disgusting they are on the inside.  In a sense you have to (not admire) acknowledge the skill it takes to hide their vileness.

     Of course, they only hide it so well.  The girls that Oliver saw avoiding them on the campus tell us volumes.  To know them is to avoid them.  That must be why they are so into their form of sex.  Real intimacy can be revealing and they have to avoid that.  Of course, with time they acquire the skills to hide the fact that they are really a well stacked pile of sewage and can pretend to be wives and mothers...for a while.
     The natural outcome would be to have them appear on the outside as they are on the inside, but what about if some karmic accident made them smell in a way that revealed the truth of their souls. 
     It would be called “The Mega Pew House.”....hahhahaha.

     pix

Nice seeing that Brooklynn had the common sense to feed poor battered and bruised Cam before she subjects him to more human dildo abuse.  OK... The moment has arrived.  While Brooklynn has shuffled off to round up some grubb Oliver will have a brief opportunity to chat with Cam since his abduction. Go Oliver...

And now Cam unintentionally gave Oliver a chance to meet him.

Now @Carycomic, just because he hasn't doesn't mean he won't. 

I can see the chapter now...(warning: much pandering to follow.)

Singing With Cadence.

     I can see it now.  Deacon hooks up with Cadence, only because we’re in a different reality this Cadence is nice..well, nicer.  When they go to Deke’s room for his performance, they catch Brooklyn and Kandace and a bunch of the others, moving out Oliver’s stuff.
    “What are you doing?” Deacon asks, “where’s Oliver?”
    “Uh...Oliver has gone in for gender-reassignment...” Brooklyn fibs, “He’s..uh .. she’s going to be an Omega Pi and move in with us...”
    “Why am I doubting your story?” Deacon asks.
    Caught red handed, they try to shrink the pair, but Cadence steps in front of Deacon and all the ‘Megs are suddenly tiny.
    “What did you do?” Shouts Deacon....staring at tiny Brooklyn.
    “I didn’t do anything....”Cadence grins, “they did.  I just reflected it back.”
    They gather up the evil tinies and interrogate them...they promptly sing like birds...for Cadence.  (Get it?)  Whereupon she calls her friend ...the less mean Faith...and they head over to the house of Pi. 
    “Yes?” Sersi asks, answering the door.
    “First.” Cadence begins, “why are these weasels following you?  And second where is Deacon’s friend Oliver?”
    “Right through here...” Sersi begins, and tries to shrink everyone....only to have it bounce and make her 3 inches tall.  “How did you do that?” She yells.
    Cadence and Faith only look at each other and giggle.  Because, you know, they’re being mysterious.  Then, they scoop up Sersi, just as the weasels close in (dammit!)
    Once in, Deacon calls out for Oliver while the girls shrink every ‘Meg they encounter.  Oliver show’s up bearing a tiny, improvised grenade launcher, a bunch of nutrition bar pieces, a tiny bottle of vodka, an improvised crow bar , 100 feet of rope and a tiny portable computer playing “raiders of the lost ark.”  He also has Cam and they’re both wearing ninja suits made from scaps of panties. 
    “Wazzup?” he asks Deke, casually. 
    “Me an my super powered girlfriend are rescuing you...” He says proudly.
    Oliver and Cam look at each other and shrug.
    “I guess we could do it that way. “ Oliver concedes.
    “But our plan involved explosions.” Cam quips.
    Once they baddies are gathered by two girls younger than all of them,they realize they have to restore the guys.  That proves to be a tough one, so they call Faith’s mom.  She shrugs and undoes all the damage the weeping stone has caused.  Then she asks “What are you going to do with all the tinies?”
    Everyone shrugs.
    “Share with your sister.” She orders.
    “Awww mom.”
    In this reality Julie got all the mean for the family.   So, thinking they are being clever, they decide to dice for them.  Julie only gets a ‘Meg if the di rolls a 1.
    However, it seems that the di come up a 1 for everyone, except Brooklyn and Harmony (since you all seem to like her, I don’t know why.)
    Faith keeps Harmony nice and safe...mostly.  Occasionally letting Josh and Julien have a go at her while she watches.
    Deke learns a valuable lesson about choosing a girl just for her surface.  Plus when he says that the shrinking thing looks kinda fun.  Cadence lets him screw Brooklyn while they’re both in her panties. 
    Meanwhile...and i do mean “mean”...this version of Julie opens the cage for Mr Chompers ...her pet weasel.

@pixil8ed: why would he?

He never used "Singing With Cadence."

;-D

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