[Report This]Date: October 12 2016 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Just wow :o This was even better than anything I thought of what could or might happen. This story is SO HOT it's now my absolute favorite of yours <3 Will there another chapter 3? Please do more m/m stories like this! The world needs more good mm tf stories. You're king man. This plot is just the shit. Everything about it is fantastic. The horrible humiliaton of this straight bully, I imagine him like a typical guy on the football team, just talking about chicks with his friends, chewing bubble gum, in his skin tight jeans and his red football jacket.
Would love to see another chapter of the nightmare continues for him, what if he actually turns into the nerds anus in a last chapter, that would be like pure hell, especially if he experiences the fun of going through a bowl movement, maybe in school and the gay nerd sitting in classes with his ass in skinny jeans having an itch down there, mostly didn't wipe properly.
Seeing more m/m tf stories like this would be epic, would love to see more school or college plots. Maybe a guy turning into a condom and being used by his brother.
Or a story of a guy like here, a typical straight jock, turning into a female blow up sex doll. And then being used in all three holes during a party by his friends. The nightmarish "look" on "his" or actually her face I imagine at the end, with the dried cum in her holes and how they totally didn't clean the doll of course and how it would begin to smell a few days later. And how his friends would speak about the doll in a humiliating way, his mind screaming and tears in his "eyes".
Another idea of turning into cotton boxers, or a food tf, turning into a single Cheerio.
But back to this story! DUDE! Story of the year for me on here, seriously. I always wished to read something like this. You wrote it so realistic, I imagine a lot of teens using toys like this in their private time, releaving stress, especially here of the guy being such innocent and playful is awesome.
A little minor thing for me, would be way better if the toy smelled in a ripe ass and it smelled awful of course.
Loved the part of how he sat on him during his homework and his anus over the toys mouth fantastic.
How he slept in with the toy still over his erect member... everything about this story is awesome! How he was like "oops" and then the twist at the end.
Would have been even more epic if the oor bully had a totally nightmarish look on his inner face, totally broken, whitish, his eyes sunk into his skull, his mouth shaped like a curved O, frozen, he literally had his brain fucked away, and the puur humiliation of being butt raped, as a straight guy, who mostly just a few days before laughed with his other friends about banging the hot chick during the next school party.
Please please please more like this!! Fantastic chapter. If you're not doing a 3rd would love to see one of the or eventually all of the ideas above, especially the jock to female sex doll seems awesome. Would actually see the unfortunate bully experience his day as the nerds dick, going to school, and taking a piss of course here and then, and then even worse... and maybe even the utltimate hell "hole" for him turning into his anus.
Author's Response:
You have some good ideas. Why not make your own stories? I'm sure many people would enjoy reading some of these, especially the one with the blow up doll. Unfortunately, I do have an ending and yes there is a chapter 3 but I would love to read more about some of the ideas you have, please post some stories.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Would love to see this continued. I find the idea of the bully being an asshole to those nerds other kids a bit funny, if you think about it, what if "an asshole becomes an asshole", lol
[Report This]Date: September 27 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
awesome seeing some m/m plots too, which are so rare, huge fan of them. looking great
Date: September 25 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
hot. wouldhve been so ironic if the bully actually turned into the boys anus, and how he would vomit out of his "mouth" every time the boy had a bowl movement, or sits in class in his tight jeans having to go through hell for the rest of his life.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks promising. Wonder what if the spell went horrible wrong and he didn't become the stuffed toy but somethen else on the bed. kepep it rollin
[Report This]Date: September 22 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
AH! Hope so much youll continue this! Looking amazing already! Loved the conversation between the teens, I love this kind of style so much how they talk. Hope this will actually become a m/m humiliation tf story, that would be awesome. I think it would have been epic ironic, if Brandon accidentally tfed himself into Jamies lose cotton boxershorts, his face becoming the inner back area of it. Looking forward for this to be continued!!
Date: September 21 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are always my favorite. I've been waiting for you to write another!
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Solid first chapter. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Nice to see you back with another story BTW