Date: October 08 2016 8:38 PM Title: Day 1: Part 1
I don't normally enjoy body exploration, but I am loving this. My suggestion: you seemed to imply this already, but I would like to see character to end up in Sarah with her being unaware of him. I will continue to read no matter where you take it, though. Hope a new chapter comes out soon!
Author's Response:
I'm looking forward to what I have planned for Sarah. It'll be a bit before we see her sadly.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2016 8:37 PM Title: Day 1: Part 1
Yeah, Chris is definitely not going to like Mei if he survives XD calling him a parasite and fiith is kinda pushing how much she could humiliate him. I'm wondering why Kayla would agree if she's worried about Chris's well being, I assume Mei lied although I doubt Chris would care since he was knowingly put in a situation where he has to eat filth and can die in a horrible way because of them.
I can see the conversation now: "so you learn your lesson?" "Yes, now I don't want to see either of you ever again unless you're coming with one hell of an apology for the past month." *Chris leaves* "well... fuck".
She's being pretty brutal to him. Although I get the feeling if he dies, they will hopefully respect him enough to tell the truth to Sarah and his mother which will be an incredibly awakward conversation (kinda rooting for Chris here as all he did was gamble way too much XD). And if he does survive and they want to remain friends/close, they've a lot of groveling to do because he will likely hate their guts (literally and figuretively) for pretty much everything, lying to his family and loved ones, taking a month before classes to teach him the lesson so when he goes back he'll be tired and exhausted and probably hurt while they all got to relax, etc.
At the same time, I also think that there's a chance he'd be changed for the worse being called and treated like a parasite and filth by them over and over. So yeah, if he survives the girls will have a TON of work ahead of them since they'll no doubt (due to his relations to them) feel accountable for his state afterward, let alone if they even want him to talk to them about anything. Although I can see a card saying "Sorry for Shrinking you for a month" being pretty funny XD.
The chapter is good, description of the vast world he's on. It's alien but at the same time, Chris noticing things that he remembered when he was normal was a nice touch.
These aren't criticims, just thoughts as I was reading. Good Story, can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Oh trust me, Chris is going to have some very choice words and responses for them if he makes it through this. It's only the start of the month and he has a long ways to go! I'm glad you put so much thought into it, thanks!
Date: October 08 2016 7:30 PM Title: The Last Bet
Once again you nailed it. You have never written a bad chapter in any story. I constantly check daily for any updates from you and I love every single chapter. You are my all time favorite author. Never stop writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! That means a lot to me. I really try to do my best on these. Extreme micro can be a bit...harrowing to write. I hope you enjoy the future ones too
[Report This]Date: October 08 2016 12:28 PM Title: The Last Bet
This is already one of my favorite stories here. Your descriptions are great, and having him so tiny and having to subsist on her bodily fluids erc is amazing. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! There are going to be plenty of other fluids for the lil guy to interact with too ;)
[Report This]Date: October 08 2016 8:20 AM Title: Day 1: Part 1
This story is getting better by the chapter! The milk was a great Addition to his deppendance on her. Wonder what else will he have to survive on when he is not on her nipple. Thanks for the read!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you are enjoying it! Trust me, our boy is going to have to do some things he will want to forget before its over
[Report This]Date: October 08 2016 1:12 AM Title: The Last Bet
A very well done, well written story. I love the feeling you are able to project with the discriptions and setting. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Date: October 07 2016 4:26 PM Title: The Last Bet
Something this last chapter made me think of was Annie suckling Mei's nipples as she had wanted to, and our protagonist winding up stuck in her mouth . . . or, worse yet, gettinggulped down entirely unintentionally.
You're really creative and descriptive, and honestly I hope you continue.
Date: October 06 2016 1:52 PM Title: Getting Abreast of the Situation
Nice hope to see more!
Date: September 15 2016 12:10 PM Title: The Last Bet
Not gonna lie, I feel bad for Chris XD. He's going to have no social contact for a month so he's gonna be lonely. He's going to constantly be moving and feeling in danger along with feeling small and insignifgant to those he considers his closest relationships, for a month will probably mess with him. I'm curious to see how it will end, if he doesn't make it (which will be a dramatic ending considering two of the three he considers close friends) or if he does.
Although I can see him basically flipping them all off if he does and will probably not want to see them for at least a while for the month of trouble. After all, an experience like that is something that flowers and chocolates can't fix, even if the cause was noble. XD
Yes I read way too deep into things.
Still I like the story, keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter(s). And I admit, I am kind of rooting for him to survive if only because no story I found on this site has had a scene where the former Micro (Nano?) told off the Giantess(s) for putting them in danger and such, let alone for a month.
Author's Response:
I feel bad for the lil guy too. Especially since I know some of the things he's going to experience! Trust me, if Chris makes it out alive, he won't be happy with them. I really hope you like what I do with it and the direction it takes. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 12 2016 10:08 PM Title: The Last Bet
LOVE the level of detail, especially for the sights and scents. It's rare to see a story where the shrinkie is microscopic and the giantess knows where they are, a lot of fun potential here. Personally looking forward to some epic mouthplay/exploring. Don't be afraid to get gross where appropriate he he~
Author's Response:
Trust me, we are going to get some mouthplay really soon ;)
As for the description, that was very important to me in crafting this story. It was difficult but I wanted to visualize how alien things would seem at that size.
Date: September 12 2016 10:22 AM Title: Getting Abreast of the Situation
Mm mm very nice ...wish I had a clearer perception of what flesh looks like at this size but that's why we have Google :).
I do know it's vastly different that what we see. Great story :)
Author's Response:
I tried to be somewhat descriptive, but I will try harder on the next chapter. I wanted to make her nipple and areola seem like a landscape. Things at this scale get a bit hard to describe at times.
I am glad you're liking it so far though!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2016 2:28 AM Title: The Last Bet
Love the first chapter so far. Would love to see more interaction and more nano size exploring like Milk Duct , Pubic hair forest , Clit , Vag etc etc. Maybe shrunk other and play a game on Mei body? That just my opinion. :D
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you are liking the story so far! I do plan on exploring most of those areas you mentioned, along with some others, in this story. I am going to try and pick up the pace somewhat in order to hit more areas and fetishes.
Date: September 09 2016 12:32 PM Title: The Last Bet
Very interesting idea, and I'm kinda jealous I didn't think of it first lol. But seriously, this story has a million possible directions, a lot of them fetish fun! Also, since you asked . . .
Naturally, me being me, I'd love to see a few lesbian scenes here, with our hapless protagonist merely along for the ride, perhaps a bit where he struggles to swim free of a single droplet of cum, but . . . hey. You do you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! And trust me, we will definitely be some lesbian scenes in this. Especially since Mei and Annie are dating. There may be other characters as well. Our poor protagonist is going to see a lot of these ladies, that's for sure. I also have a scene like the one you described outlined already!
Date: September 07 2016 10:30 AM Title: The Last Bet
very gooooooooddddddd
going to asshole be very interesting
Date: September 07 2016 7:27 AM Title: The Last Bet
Love the concept! As another commenter said, different areaa would be great. A mixture of uncaring and unaware, and armpit, navel, nose, ear, stuff, along with the usual staples for feet (toenails would be interesting) and lady garden, and of course for me, a healthy dosage of ass and asshole action!
Author's Response:
I plan to explore several areas on these lovely ladies before the story is over. This is definitely a body exploration story and we are going to see a lot of things! I certainly plan to hit neglected parts too. I too am an ass man so we are going to see that too, of course ;)
Date: September 07 2016 4:56 AM Title: The Last Bet
I really like this story and am looking forward to what happens next. Really good job :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: September 07 2016 2:08 AM Title: The Last Bet
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[Report This]Date: September 06 2016 10:31 PM Title: The Last Bet
You're off to an excellent start, I LOVE micro and nano stories, and the premise for this one's really great. As far as things that might be interesting to explore in the story, besides breasts, I'm partial to lesser travelled areas on a giantess, such as navels, armpits, and/or ears.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so far. I plan to use the full giantess as much as possible. I want to do some breast play stuff at first, but...he's shrunken for a month. That is a long time. He's going to see some other areas, don't you worry ;)
[Report This]Date: September 06 2016 9:44 PM Title: The Last Bet
Very interesting! I don't usually read any micro stories. For my own personnel tastes she would change his size for some fun every once in awhile a little dildo action. possibly piss her off use him as butt plug return him to micro or something. Kind of curious what will happen in a micro story, under 2 inches I can't think of much happening.
Author's Response:
I understand the concerns about limitations due to the size. I plan to write some fun scenarios with his size. Granted, it is going to be unaware scenarios, which I understand are not for everyone. I hope you enjoy it either way.