[Report This]Date: June 16 2015 2:36 PM Title: Completed Story
You did a great job with this story Tala is so cute I just wish it had a happy ending for Tala :(... I think Bruce was a jerk to her he needs to make it right because was being selfish just thinking about being big again. I Don't like sad ending I get to attached to a good story.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2012 8:28 PM Title: Completed Story
What happened to the sex between Tala and Bruce when they are little? It isn't written in this story. That is a major disappointmet.
Date: July 14 2007 3:58 PM Title: Completed Story
This story was freaking super cute. I mean really. You captured innocent so well that I'm stunned. No inappropriate material and creative with what you did use. It came out kind of short but well done.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Innocent and playful was exactly what I was going for with Tala.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2006 5:13 PM Title: Completed Story
Wonderfully playful story, and I really liked Tala. She was such a great character!
The ending was kind of a disappointment though, but I guess that's probably how a guy really would react if he had been subjected to that kind of treatment.
Anyway, excellent job!