Date: September 01 2016 9:47 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
Just gonna put my character in here.
Character:
Traivs is six foot tall not extremely good looking but most call him cute. Brown hair blue eyes. Is a pretty mellow person but can also be wild at times. Pretty smart but doesn't care too much about school. For the characters interests it can be any butt stuff. Toilet is ok too. Not really into feet or vore. Insertion is good.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 7:48 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
HaahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH yes.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 3:43 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
Definitely liking this so far. I've emailed across a character idea. Looking forwards to seeing what else you come up with.
Author's Response:
That makes 2 successful emails and 2 that didn't reach me. Try again, maybe?
Date: September 01 2016 2:20 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
I like the start of the story and it looks like it could be fertile ground for plenty of interesting scenarios! I had an idea or two which I've included as part of a character summary below. I hope it's not too out there and you can make some use of it, even if only indirectly.
Sam Tappet
Gender: Choose whichever you prefer to write with
Age: 25
Dark hair, Mediterranean appearance, 5'7"
In a wheelchair
Schedule- Chemistry: 10%; English:50%; Biology: 5%; Mathematics: 80%; History: 1%; Physical Education: 0%
Sam once ruled the roost at Class of Giantess, until a debilitating accident, which left him/her in a wheelchair. The subsequent depression also lead to grade slippage; had it not been for such a positive past, it is likely Sam would not have been kept around despite so many repeated flunkings.
Although Sam is, and always has been, a generally kind person (only ever gave one person a wedgie), you don't go to any school without developing some rivalries, especially when you have the dynamics of a place like CoG.
Scenario suggestion: Since the accident Sam has been exempted from P.E. However, a new P.E. teacher has arrived and ruthlessly refused to allow the exemption (could she be an ex-student, once rival, with a grudge?). Given the long-term exemption (and wheelchair), Sam effectively has 0% in the subject - how will the school administration decide on sizing?
Author's Response:
That's a question I wondered if anyone would ask.
An absolute 0% means that the moment you step into the class, you shrink and shrink and don't stop shrinking.
However, most professors try to circumvent this by making attendance itself worth an odd point or two, making grades of 0.2% or lower possible if you do literally no work.
Also, end-of-day PE means microscopic Sam would share a class with 130%-score (8'2", if you're curious) Luna due to the sheer amount of extra credit work and TA jobs she/I do.
You're in, though. I'll write your idea . . . do you want the professor themselves to be the one playing with little Sam, or do you want her to use another student as an unaware death method?
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 5:09 AM Title: Luna's Birthday
Seems like an interesting story here. I'll be sending in a character shortly!
Date: August 31 2016 10:17 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
(Oh, and because this is your story, don't think I want you to make George and Luna a couple. It will be better if he never gets his shot for George, believe me, I know.)
[Report This]Date: August 31 2016 10:15 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
Hey, Silent One. I was excited to see this interesting concept and even more excited to see who was helming it. I, an unabashed Naomi and Lorelai fan, have been looking forward to more from you.
Anyway, here's a little profile I have done:
George Lutz
Male, 21
Black, short, bang-less hair
Brown eyes w/ glasses
Pale skin
5'6"
Scrawny/Lanky
Schedule- Drama: 10%; English:40%; Biology: 100%; Mathematics: 1%; History: 70%; Physical Education: 1%
Submissive, Neurotic. Prone to anxiety. Intelligent in fields, but unable to ratchet up grades to due his lack of punctuality, often ending in tardies as well. Dating No one. Madly In Love w/ Luna. When approaching her, he often thinks he's saying the wrong thing at every time, and ultimtely is depressed about himself. I envision him constanly wearing a brown tux, red tie and matching pants.
I have one interesting story idea:
Character is pressured into helping a bully get a better grade, and ends up spending so much time, xe lowers xir own grade, letting the bully over power xir. Every time xe tries to get their grade up, the bully beats xir. I could see George doing this, hat is my self insert, but your characters could work in the situation.
Author's Response:
Your self-insert is madly in love with mine? That's . . . actually pretty funny.
Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the dynamic between Naomi and Lorelei. They're fun to write, but I'm loath to write them when I'm not either making a present for Choreo or collaborating with him.
Also, it's gotta sting for little George that it's the two classes Luna is at her best that he's flea-size . . . heck, Tanya, her/my ever-possessive girlfriend, is taller than him/you in almost every class!
You suggested it, George will be in it. Unfortunately, without anyone making themselves into a bully, I may have to dip into my well of characters . . .
Date: August 31 2016 6:52 PM Title: Luna's Birthday
Hmm, quite the interesting story concept. Considering you're going to need more people, I volunteer. I'll send you an email detailing my character. The concept is quite solid, and I truly hope the idea takes off as it's quite creative. I'll also try and think of some conflicts and ideas to email as well at later dates.
Author's Response:
I got your email. Your character is in.
Also, thanks! I'm glad you like the idea.