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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

Great story! Will there be more? I really want to see what happens as Mindy shrinks smaller and how Kris teases her! 



Author's Response: Me too! Could you write it?

Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

Aww, neat idea.  Too bad it won't continue, but I enjoyed the concept anyway.

(it seems most of the reviewers didn't read the end notes or the chapter name :))

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

Hope gonna be a slow shrink *_*

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

This seems more like the beginning of a story than an ending :(

I would like you to continue writing on it :)

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

looks like another awesome story is coming up! nice so far!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

I agree more flights are needed cause I actually liked how this story was going.Would suck to see this go nowhere

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

You have a way of making us care about the characters quickly. I want to see what comes next. Here's to hoping you take more flights and continue this story.

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