Wow, lots of embarrassing fun.  Very much looking forward to where it goes.

I enjoy that Addie hasn't had to actually shrink the father to totally emasculate him, and I love Addie's casual goddess level super powers.  

I am anxiously awaiting playtime with Adelaide. I always feel a surge of excitement when I see this story updated. Mooooore :D

Can't wait to see where this story goes.

I really REALLY like this story so far. I'm hoping it doesn't go down the stupidly cruel route that some size writers seem to love, but I am definitely looking forward to future chapters and updates. Keep up the great work, Tiny Jedi.

That's why I'm glad I'm a stick-in-the-mud bachelor. Because it seems like once a husband and wife have kids, the former always get amnesia and break the teenage promise I'm sure they made never to become like their own parents. For instance; when teenagers demand respect from their parents, the latter tell them everyone has to earn it _before_ they get it. And, yet, when those same kids mouth off, those same parents become the ones demanding respect. Acting as if parents are an automatic exception to the previously stated life rule!*

In short: Adelaide is no doubt feeling that all Jim initially earned, by marrying her mom, is grudging tolerance. But, now that her mom has sided with Jim, against her, all Adelaide feels he's earned is...pure contempt.

*Which, btw, they are not. And, like most parents in such situations, they're confusing "respect' with "courtesy." Those two concepts being about as synonymous as "faith" and "trust."

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  You make some good points, and understand the story.  My interest is in creating a drama so the reader doesn't fall asleep while reading it... as well as I don't fall asleep while writing it.  Thanks again.

Wow, just immediately into chapter 2 I could tell you're getting better, or changing your focus or something. I am enjoying it a lot. I hope you don't give up on Stepsister's Delight... It's at a cool place, such a cliff-hanger!

Stick around, it's fun hunting down your additions. Like Christmas... for... deviants. It isn't the holidays often enough, IMHO

Really solid start. Your writing here is good, and as far as your previous stories go, this is my favorite starting chapter to anything you've done 

Your screen name makes me half-seriously hope that, at the start of chapter 2, Karen tells her daughter:

"Use your fork, dear. Use your fork!"

Author's Response:

lol.  That's a good one.  Thanks for commenting.  I almost would write that, though the next chapter is about done.  Those lines would fit seamlessly into the text, but if the daughter replied, "The fork is strong with you, Mom," and then James said, "I feel a disturbance in the fork," -- well, then people would get suspicious.