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Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 6 ... 9-22-16

It's like the most drawn out tease ever O.O

Keep it up! Not the tease, lol. Excited to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your interest.

Reviewer: Dragonling Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good job with the suspense thus far!
Can't wait to see what happens when James shrinks!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  Finishing up the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 6 ... 9-22-16

Such a tease! Can't wait for more ;-p

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's called "properly building suspense," Tinyone.

:-)

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Thanks.

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please get into the shrink stuff. You've gone through a LOT of chapters now with minimal-to-no actual size content. Don't forget that you're writing smut.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Your observation is absolutely correct.  Next chapter will be the beginning of James' new perspective on life.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 6 ... 9-22-16

Oh, brother! He's in for it, now...and I don't mean from his wife.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  The story is taking that direction.

Reviewer: Happy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 6 ... 9-22-16

Addie is terrifying.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  That's nice of you.

Reviewer: Dragonling Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far! I'm eager to read the next chapter now that Adelaide is about to learn James' fetish

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Posting chapter six now.

Reviewer: Yougts Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Best story I've read in a long, long time. Keep up the good work!



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Thanks a lot for your kind words.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 ... 9-15-16

Cant wait for next chapter! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for commenting.

Reviewer: Odddice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really really have trouble waiting for the next chapter of this. It's one of my favorite stories so far, and the set up has been perfect. The character dynamics and interactions are great and the anticipation of what's next is killing me. Keep up the amazing writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your nice comments.  I'm glad the "character dynamics and interactions" are good.  I try to make the story meaningful through that.

Reviewer: chip Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Normally I don't care too much for long setups but this one has been amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm trying to make each chapter have at least something fun in it.

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm curious what's going to go down. I for sure thought someone would read his internet history and see the exact stories he liked.

I also wonder about the wife wanting no interest in being his giantess. Maybe that can be arranged without her ever knowing. I mean, it's what he wants, right?


Even if he says no, even if he begs, someone knows otherwise. Two someones.

What would his wife do if she found him the size of a tictac having been in her shoe all day?

Assume he did it on purpose I'd imagine. Drug her daughter into it. At that size he wouldn't really be heard anyways so no way to argue it.

Hrmmm. Just some thoughts. 



Author's Response:

Some interesting thoughts.  I like the possibilities.  Thanks for offering your ideas... it might influence how the story slants.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 ... 9-15-16

Santa Mierda!!!!!

Author's Response:

Holy shit indeed.  Your Spanish is better than mine.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Happy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 ... 9-15-16

With James's fetish known to Addie, will she shrink him for his pleasure in mind, or her own?

Great chapter. And quite funny the references to this very website.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I think Addie will factor in James' fetish into her desire to shrink him.  So it could be a combination of the two.

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great writing. Everything is set up, I'm so impatiently eager for the next chapter.

>:) 



Author's Response:

I'm happy there's an element of anticipation.  Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

"but Adelaide’s view of me is not substantial."

Lol. Wait!!? Is she on here right now!!? Is she reading this!!?

Good chapter. I like the pace so far. I supposed we should all don face-shields and raincoats now as you turn on the excement covered fans. Because in this age of online-capable device saturation, all Addy needed was what had seen; the address of the website. *grin*



Author's Response:

I don't know if Adelaide is reading this.  Thanks for your interest and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16

Frankly, it's 50/50, at best, that she's telling the truth. I mean, on the one hand, Addie _did_ lie about going to the local mall. On the other hand, Brian might be reaching the age where he's starting to notice that not _all_ older girls are as icky as his sister. So, in his opinion, it's time to start surfing the forbidden zones of the Internet!*

*The ones that require a credit-card holder over 18 years-old.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I’d give the same odds as you… 50/50.  And Brian could be the one, too.

Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 9-8-16

That was an awesome chapter. Cant wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm happy you thought that was an awesome chapter.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say I agree with others who say this has been the best story you have written thus far. The development of characters and the slower pace aren't a bad thing and a decent release of chapters is awesome. Don't lose your groove on this one and good luck!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for commenting.  I'll try to keep a stream of chapters going while I can.  Thanks again, and glad the story is fun so far.

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