Date: October 07 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. Especially the dynamic between the mother and daughter, I'd love to see some unaware interactions between her and her husband! Like if Ade were to sneak him somewhere on her body while she was sleeping for example. I'm only suggesting this if you're making it up as you go.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for commenting. I replied further to the review below. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Imagine if he did fall through. Down her shirt, while she's starting to sit with her pants down... oh a panty pervert too?
Amazing thus far. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
All fun ideas. Thanks a lot for commenting.
Date: October 07 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Incredible!
Hope he'll revisit her mouth from his point of view :)
Author's Response:
That idea sounds tempting. The original mouthplay was just part of moving the story along. Thanks a lot for your comments.
Date: October 07 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. Especially the dynamic between the mother and daughter, I'd love to see some unaware interactions between her and her husband! Like if Ade were to sneak him somewhere on her body while she was sleeping for example. I'm only suggesting this if you're making it up as you go.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad the mother-daughter dynamic is good so far. Thanks for the suggestions. It's always good to have as many options as possible.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Best part of this chapter is Addie saying she REALLY NEEDED to feel James between her big breasts. We now know a little more about her hidden desires and vulnerabilities.
Author's Response:
Yes, I like that line of dialogue, too. Thanks a lot for commenting.
Date: October 06 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you "mapped" the gigantic physicality and it's effects on Jim. That was crafted quite well and I'm happy. Now, finally I will grab this and save it. Cuz it will morph into something interesting no matter what direction you take it. Interesting that she has stated a time limit of Jim popping up much later in the evening. Cool, good job!
Author's Response:
It was fun to describe Addie's size relative to James. Thanks a lot for the review.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Been hoping for some mouthplay. The wait paid off. Great buildup to the first action. Great stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your comments. I like mouthplay a lot. Maybe I could return to that eventually.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I Love this story Jedi! I hope we get at least one chapter where Little Jim is trapped "underfoot". Maybe in Karen's sock, and shes unaware hes there because adelaide shrunk him even smaller so she can't feel him and he almost drowns in foot sweat, or just maybe at adelaides feet!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your nice comments. There's not that much feet in this story, but I'll keep your ideas in mind. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
My mom once told me about this thing called "the pencil test." Where the teenage girls of her generation would test their chest size by seeing whether or not a pencil would fall straight down through!
Well, I can't decide whether or not I want Jim to have that mixed blessing in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I've previously given this one some thought, and I'd say the bra is tight enough and the boobs big enough that he's 'relatively safe' from falling. Thanks a lot for commenting.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Oh my dear god. Tiny Jedi, this chapter was fantastic. I love how teasing and clearly into it that Addie is, power and domination seem to come extremely naturally to her. You are doing a stupendous job, keep it up man! This story is easily one of my favorites on this website.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your nice comments. Addie loves her power... and what she can do with it.
Date: October 05 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just a quick comment to say that I have found that I keep coming back to the site almost every day, just checking to see if the next chapter of this story is out. Keep going, your sense of building tension is absolutely incredible!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments. I've been posting Thursdays of late.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
Hey, I've been lurking this story for a while and I thought now's as good a time as any to say that I really love what you've got going here! I enjoy giantess stories for their storytelling as much as I do for their erotic content, and the depth of your writing is some of the best I've seen on here in a long time. Even though James has only shrunk just now, the tension building between him and Adelaide has been thrilling and darkly sensual, and the descriptions really paint vivid pictures in the readers' minds. It's rare to see a perfect balance of seductive and impish, as exhibited by Adelaide. I'm excited to see how some of the tags are utilized in this story (I do confess to being a sucker for stories with the Breast tag), but I'm also really looking forward to seeing what else you have in store for both your readers and your characters!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your kind words. I try to focus on both the storytelling and the eroticism... it's a balance, as you said. I, too, think having breasts as a part of the story also makes it that much more enjoyable.
Date: September 29 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
Finally!!! Not to sound like a loser, but this story is almost always the highlight of my Thursdays. I'm glad to see that we're finally going to get some size interaction, I am so giddy that I cannot wait! I have never been this excited for a story, kudos to you; Tiny Jedi! Keep up the amazing work.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your nice comments. The story should get interesting.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
I hope Addie is smart enough to re-enlarge James when she hears her mother getting back. Otherwise, I fear a Magicka duel between these two women. With Addie over-confidently shouting something like: "You want my respect, Mom? You'll have to _earn_ it, just like everyone else does!"
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. I like that line... Addie having people 'earn' her respect.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
Im really loving this story. This was a great chapter. Cant wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for reading/commenting. The next chapter should be fun.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
Always such a tease xD need Moar!
Author's Response:
More sounds good. Thanks for reading/commenting.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
YEAHHHHHHH *_*
Author's Response:
More to come. Thanks for leaving a comment. :)
Date: September 29 2016 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
Your cliffhangers are legend, my friend. Wonder what Addie will do with him first, mouth or breasts?
Author's Response:
That's nice of you to say. As to what Addie will do first? The next chapter will be up in a few days. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16
So excited. Keep up the excellent work! Excited to see some of your other story tags used! ;)
Author's Response:
I have some fun ideas planned. Thanks for reading/commenting.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just found this story and the way it ended was such a tease lol. Absolutely dying to see the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a comment. Glad you like it so far.