[Report This]Date: January 24 2023 12:33 AM Title: Yuna
OMG So fucking hot!!!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2023 5:17 AM Title: Yuna
Will this story ever be revived? I love it so much and hate to see it end abruptly. But I hope wherever you are Max333 that you're doing well. Thank you for such an exciting time with Yuna, Faith and James :)
[Report This]Date: December 14 2021 6:21 AM Title: Yuna
Hey you still around?
Date: May 24 2020 4:42 PM Title: Bike ride
dont let it die T_T
[Report This]Date: October 01 2018 5:24 PM Title: Bike ride
I'm glad that one of the big ones around here has come back to write a bit!
I really hope Faith gives his poor little brother some "fresh air" to keep him alive..
Being saved by a fart.. Damm! That's really humiliating *_*
[Report This]Date: October 01 2018 3:27 PM Title: Yuna
Damn man I was thrilled to see this story pop back up in my list, a lot of great stories get left for dead and I had chalked this one up to that. Good luck with your patreon and such, I could chip in a few bucks monthly, but I wouldn't expect too much since you aren't that famous...but best of luck man you have the skills to make it.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2018 2:25 PM Title: Bike ride
Thank you for adding another chapter. I recently thought about leaving a review asking for an update, because I remembered liking the story 2 years ago. Im still hoping this story would end kind of well for our protagonist and Yuna.
Date: September 29 2018 10:34 AM Title: Yuna
Veyr Very happy to see u back, looking forward to reading the new one. I'll definitly be waiting for more, also following the tumblr now. From what I remember I do love your writing, so if u ever do consider it I bet some people would commission u
[Report This]Date: August 17 2018 9:24 PM Title: Yuna
Wish the butt made its appearance before your motivation ran out, but hey I'll take 12 extremely hot chapters of smut when I can get them. FYI if you had a btc wallet or something I'd be down to pay you to continue.
Date: December 17 2017 9:46 AM Title: Yuna
I really love the story. I understand how it can be hard to keep the story going without taking the liberty in making Yuna especially more and more sadistic. It's sad that it seems you are no longer going to be continuing (unless you are just taking an extremely long hiatus). I was looking forward to see what happens next (what body parts and spells you would come up with). With his sister getting renewed resolve and Yuna pulling it off, there was a decent amount of content I think you could have went for. If you do happen to read this, know you still have some fans out there that are still wishing for more!
[Report This]Date: December 10 2017 5:55 AM Title: Back to Faith
I liked it a little but it was boring I mean feet!first you take all the fight out of him make him a coward that takes away anything interesting about him then at the end you take his humanity away so far every author have the same thyme plus feet I liked but when that's all there is,it gets boring fast
[Report This]Date: March 16 2017 8:11 PM Title: Yuna
I'm in the same boat as Kentaryu. I don't want to spam your reviews though so I'll try and make this my last one pleading for more. If you're done then thanks for this much at least it was a great story
Date: March 05 2017 4:19 PM Title: Back to Faith
Is there really no chance of a continuation? I liked where this chapter was going.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2016 3:23 AM Title: Yuna
I can only re-read this story so many times. I mean probably, it hasn't gotten old yet...but you should still continue it soon.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 7:50 PM Title: Back to Faith
I'm dying on chapter 13!!!
Date: October 19 2016 4:45 PM Title: Back to Faith
Great job can't wait for butt to come in
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 9:25 AM Title: Yuna
Yes another great addition to keep us wanting more!!!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2016 10:21 AM Title: Back to Faith
Your just teasing me aren't you? Great chapter though! I love the new spell and now my favorite stuff is coming. I also can't wait for the spell to wear off, this will be interesting!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2016 2:01 AM Title: Back to Faith
Just finished reading all the chapters. This is a really good story and I'm so happy to find lots of things that I really like such as armpit, odor, sweat and soon butt content. I'm particularly happy that the last one is happening with Faith too, as she's my favorite. Any hope for some armpit content with her in the future?
I feel quite bad for James and would be a lot better if he indeed enjoyed, hopefully he will get to make them understand his true feelings someday. Maybe he can get to enjoy it at some point or get to some agreement with them in the future ;)
Author's Response:
Hey there KentaRyu, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Yes, there's hope for armpit content with Faith, as she was given the idea by Yuna... Who knows when it might happen... :)
Hehe, if only I could please everyone, and write both a gentle & cruel relationship. I can't tell what's gonna happen though, but do know I take into account the opinions I receive. We'll see!
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review, have a great day!
Date: October 16 2016 11:56 AM Title: Yuna
Re: below:
No problem. Thanks for the response. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'll always answer any review I receive, I think that's the least I can do to thanks people who take their time to share their opinion and ideas with me!
I'll do my best, thanks!