Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

Loving the story, this was best chapter yet, lived the pace and the ending was fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes. Would love to see a spin off with mother and shrunken son, maybe with bbw grandma as occasional baby sitter.

Reviewer: gtsbooonda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

This story has some hot scenes, especially the hard core butt stuff. love that!  I hope you write more, would love to see Lucy's dark side, getting her own tiny man and introducing him to her giant Irish ass! Along the lines of Beth's treatment of Brian!

good story!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Moving Out

He should practice what he preaches. Wait till the next night to ask her opinion, first. Just the way he wanted Ella to ask _his_ opinion, beforehand!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Very nice addition to the story. It brightens my day when I see an update to this story.

It seems like Susanne is hitting a bad streak of luck. Poor her.

She was kinda mean, but now that she is small this will probably change.

It seems everyone except Ella is really mean to tinies, and they only realize they are so mean when it's too late and they are becoming tiny themselves.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning

P.S.---Welcome back. Because, if nothing else, your work seems to have inspired Happy's KIMBERLY.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Church

I like Ella. Awesome character.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ella

Cool, loved the cigarette scene.
Awesome,
Diesel

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Ella really looks like seeking perfection in every way possible. It's even outright intimidating to think, at this young age, how 'superior' she is compared to common people and citizens. Not to mention Andrew now a this size, no wonder he keeps having these urges to see her as a Goddess.

I keep wondering how far Ella's obsession with her father truly go in her mind. Over all these years. She seems to see him above all others and everything else. Maybe all this thing about seeking perfection in every way, the awards, and such; may just be a way she thought to provide every need Andrew may need, even sexual. Not not let him go away from her life again, she feel this urge to give him everything, in a way he could be with her forever.

And now at this size, she may truly have what she wished all along, in a way he is already starting to see her as a Goddess, and maybe soon wouldn't be able to live without her. His mind won't be able to resist much longer if he keeps depending more and more on his perfect sexy daughter, and she takes more and more control of his life.

Just my thoughts.

Author's Response:

Amazing review! Thank you much for your thought provoking feedback. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

Man! It sounds like this shrinking disease is quietly getting worse.

I just wish it would hit Susanne.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Uhm! I think Ella meant to say "I'm NOT going to lose you again." A little unintended foreshadowing, perhaps?