Date: December 27 2022 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mess
~God, I loved this chapter. Especially the situation with the mite sized ebony woman in the toilet. I really enjoyed reading the reason for how she ended up trapped in there. To mistake her shrinking cramps for diarrhea as she took a shit before instantly shrinking so tiny and falling into the toilet bowl right behind it is such a hot concept.
My favorite part was Estelle the obese Ebony woman who was convinced she ate something really bad and had explosive diarrhea on the microscopic ebony woman in the toilet completely unaware of her.
I love love loved reading the detailed descriptions too. Just the visual POV of that obese giantess hovering her chocolate planet sized ass over the toilet bowl as she rips down her pants and panties/thong from the view of a centimeter small woman trapped in the toilet bowl below. To wave and scream up at the obese giantess at her very tiny size, only to be completely ignored not paying attention let alone hear or see her is my favorite response.
To hear the loud warning guttural sounds of the obese woman’s stomach and straining pushing grunts that drown out the tiny woman’s screams, followed by a sudden torrent hail storm getting blasted by flying meteor chunks of Estelle’s shit. Amazing! Being dragged underneath the filthy brown sea by a giant piece of shit the size of a car to her. Awesome! The massive mudslide of thick brown sludge pouring out of the obese giantess’s asshole like a nice thick gravy threatening to bury the speck in an overwhelming amount of creamy shit stew all while Estelle remains completely oblivious of what she’s doing to the tiny… Best giantess toilet scenario I’ve ever read!
I only wish the scenario lasted longer. I also wish the tiny ebony woman survived too. I would’ve loved the idea of her climbing onto Estelle’s huge log of shit, only for her to shrink even tinier suddenly. Now she’s almost nano sized and is now lost and stranded on top of Estelle’s island sized turd log in a toilet. The tiny jumps and cries out to her, but is again ignored not seeing or hearing her as she went to flush the toilet only for it to not function and decided to just drop the toilet lid down and unknowingly sealing the poor tiny in complete darkness. Until the next shit piss assault.
Would love to see a whole story of Estelle unknowingly put microscopic people in this situation. Overall, awesome story! ^^
Date: July 15 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
I absolutely love your story!! You are a fantastic author!! Please make more!
Date: January 19 2020 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
Ugh what a great story and an even greater writer! I really hope we can revisit these characters in a sequel because I’m so interested in where this could go! Like will Ella and Andrew ever come clean with each other? How will they live with themselves? What WILL happen after the summer ends?? I also wonder if the Hastings will help Ella and Andrew out as they leave home? And last but not least, what will happen to Susanne?? Because I'd love to see what Ella would do if she found her now… <.<‘
Anyways, thank you for this masterpiece of a story AND universe! So much fun to read (and so HOT)! lol
Date: January 17 2020 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Moving Out
HOLY SHIT! Things are about to get real steamy in there… <.<‘ lol
And I really hope Ella finds Susanne just so she can get her well-earned revenge… ;)
Date: January 15 2020 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning
Ugh, Andrew is one Lucky bastard!
Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation
I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-
Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation
I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation
I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation
I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-
Date: January 13 2020 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Clean Up
Ella's gonna be PISSED when she finds out what happened to Andrew... o_o
Also, poor little Raymonds ;-;
Date: January 13 2020 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mess
"Ella”? More like “Cinderella”! Poor girl ;-; lol
Also, RIP Brian
Date: January 13 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Beth
Conspiracy Theory: The military/government accidentally created the “shrinking disease” when trying to create this super-spy pill. The pill was eventually successful, but with the “shrinking diseases” now going viral throughout the world, they can’t release the pill to the general public in order to save lives because they would also have to admit guilt for creating the disease in the first place… <.<
Date: January 12 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery
Wow I think I officially fucking love Ella! @,@ lol
Date: January 12 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Andrew
HO LY SHIT O_O
Date: January 12 2020 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Plan
Is Ella some kind of witch? Because it seams like she’s got this whole town under her hypnotic spell… <.<‘ lol
Date: January 12 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Church
Jody is one scary little girl... o_o
Date: January 12 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jody
Definitely didn’t see that coming… Elaine might actually be luckier than Kevin 👀 lol
Date: January 12 2020 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ella
RIP Kevin ;-;
Date: September 22 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party
Hey, man! I just read two of your stories (momma's boy and this) and I love your writing style I hope you release the sequel one day.
All the best! :)
Date: August 29 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax
I have greatly enjoyed this story. Well written with reminders of who everyone is. Ella is super awesome . Susanne was a cool story.
Loved it all,
Diesel