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Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 7-15-16

Wow great imargery. I love when the sister puts him in her bra. Cant wait to see more



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments.  The bra part is fun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11 ... 7-15-16

WOW! You consolidated all the other chapters you couldn't find space for in the other compilation reprint? Innovative! As for Mike? Either he slept right through Monday, or his stepmom and Olivia are back early.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  It was a lot of consolidation, with all the chapters in a single post.

Mike went to sleep Sunday morning, waking Sunday evening.  He really hadn't much time for sleep with the stress of being shrunk.  Anyway, I wanted the reader to get back to the interesting stuff.  Thanks again.

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