[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 6:18 AM Title: The Block Error
Fantastic story. Very well written. I cannot wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response:
I'm very pleased you're enjoying it. It's a lot of fun to write, I feel bad I let it go unattended for so long. Stay tuned.
Date: October 18 2016 3:28 AM Title: The Block Error
Will the teacher come back there and take him away?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
It seems like a super irresponsible teacher, doesn't it, to just leave some obvious troublemakers to their own designs. Where's the chaperone? Doesn't the bus driver have a vested interest? It's almost like there aren't any reasonable authority figures...
Date: October 18 2016 3:22 AM Title: Tryouts
Great chapter. Loved her undressing him and her lack of concern over his feelings. You write really well.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm trying to picture the scenes very clearly and express them completely. I can't know for sure what's going through a young woman's mind, but I hope I'm not too far off.
Date: October 18 2016 3:11 AM Title: Highway Robbery
Cool first chapter. What's up with the older lady? Will we see her again?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. I think it's a pretty safe bet the little guy's wife will come looking for him. But will she find him in time? If only there were some way to know for sure...
Date: October 15 2016 12:16 PM Title: Highway Robbery
Really wish you would continue this story. Love it.
Author's Response:
I'm working on Ch. 3 right this very minute. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2016 1:32 AM Title: Tryouts
Hey, where's the rest of this story? I'm thinking that Frances is going to cause some trouble. Anyway, while these events, as you relate them, cause some trepidation as I start to feel bad for the little guy, I can't help but think it's impossible to hold a shrunken man in the palm of your hand, and resist the urge to explore. After all, in my world, shrunken men are stolen all the time, and all manner of non fatal things happen to them at the hands of their curious thieves.
Please continue!
Author's Response:
I promise you, heavy drinking and much downtempo-listening are happening right this red hot second, and Ch. 3 will be up and online before I go to bed tonight. I'm very pleased you're enjoying this. With a little motivation, the following chapters should come more rapidly.
Date: August 27 2016 10:15 PM Title: Tryouts
Just awesome! Please keep writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I do plan to keep adding to it incrementally, just a matter of free time and discipline... but I will finish this one.
Date: August 25 2016 6:12 PM Title: Tryouts
Very interested to see what happens to this little guy. I hope it lasts a while before the final spike.
Rachael might not think she's one of the bad girls, but she's pretty clearly a predator. She's shy and so uncomfortable with sexual exploration that she's never looked at Internet porn, but she doesn't think twice about kidnapping someone and molesting them in public.
I'm also the kind of perv who's at least as interested in the middle-aged couple's married life. If the husband survives and they're reunited, I'd expect her to tease him about it for the rest of his days.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your response! Actually, the couple does have their own story. It could be as generic as them having survived any other shrink story with a happy ending, or I could write their prequel.
I was afraid it would sound unbelievable that a young woman would try to satisfy her curiosity with a tiny little man... but I knew someone like this, and that's how she did it.