Date: July 11 2016 2:26 PM Title: A star is born
Cool concept and good writing. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the kind words! I'm excited to flesh out the finer details of the plot..
Date: July 11 2016 11:50 AM Title: A star is born
That was fantastic! Really liking the premise and the unaware element there. You're writing style is brilliant too.
Please continue this, and writing in general.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the kind words! I'm still very new to writing but I'm hoping to improve!
Date: July 11 2016 9:16 AM Title: A star is born
Solid story. I would love to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the kind words!
Date: July 11 2016 6:50 AM Title: A star is born
Wonderful start, I love the Secretary.
You had me at Buttcrush. :)
Thornton.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and the kind words! I might just have something planned for the secretary..
Date: July 11 2016 4:48 AM Title: A star is born
Very strong intro. I did not see the twist coming whatsoever, which is always a plus in my book.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and the kind words!