Reviewer: Jx59 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

First, the formatting is a pain in the ass. I'm not sure if it's on my end or something, but yea. As for the content, everyone likes to see Hermione exulting in her newfound power, stature and glory! Personally, I'm interested in seeing where you take her. You've made her much more cruel, selfish and vain than I had anticipated, but it suits her at the moment. I'm not sure if I'd prefer to see her nicer traits resurface or for her to to grow even more nasty and bullying as she gets larger. 

I definitely want that though, more size and power for Hermione! :D

Hermione always did have that self-righteous, dogmatic tendency about her political opinions, ;D

 

Author's Response:

Hey  :)

Thanks for the feedback, I really do appreciate it. Especially considering its my first time writing a gts fic haha.

Yeah, I have no idea what"s up with the formatting, cause I did have spacing and that, but it seems to make no difference at all...I'll try and sort that out at some point.

I'm not even sure myself where I'm gonna go with this, like whenever I have free time I just add to it. I'm also not too sure if I'm gonna have Hermione be completely cruel or be a tyrant. The second sounds way hotter though haha.

Once again I really appreciate the review and if you have any suggestions or ideas, feel free to tell me :)

Reviewer: HJS Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2016 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great, continuous history and quiet, most read offline, don't worry if you don't see many reviews!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the reassurance :)

I do have a good background knowledge of the HP world in general, so that should help