Reviews For Escape Attempt
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cool story. I hope you do another one that is similar. In the future it would be nice to know what clothes and shoes or boots does Katrina wear. Maybe another story of Katrinaa d her lab. Maybe her niece visits again.
Great story,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I will edit it and try to describe the appearance of the two female characters, as for a second chapter, I plan on writing it eventually.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.



Author's Response:

Thanks bro!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'd do anything for this to get a continuation.



Author's Response:

I plan on turning this into a comic book, after I do I might make a sequel to this, and this version of the story will be chapter one. I'll post it at deviantART

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