[Report This]Date: June 22 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Lab Accident
A strange turn of events, indeed!
I like to think that Jessica didn't do it out of cowardice, so much as genuine concern for Little D's safety. I mean, look at all the sinister alliances that could be formed against them! For example; Mrs. O'Ryan appealing the first judge's decision with the aid of...Dr. Nebulous' lawyer.
EWWWWWW! (Insert shudder of revulsion, here.)
Yet, even though I have no doubt that Jessica and Little D still love each other, as Amber becomes a teenager, herself, she might begin to regard him as _more_ than a pet or a toy. Quite the interesting romantic triangle that would make, eh?
A sequel like that would probably have to be posted under your PG persona, however. ;-)
Date: June 21 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: Amber's Prisoner
Too bad about the original chapter 12. :-(
Maybe you could do a new one. Like, maybe, he has a post-traumatic nightmare about his time with Amber. For example; after tying those six additional knots around his upper torso, Amber lifted him up to her wide-open mouth. Only to instantly transform into Dr. N's Goth daughter! She then lets go of her end of the string...
...and Little Deuce wakes up in a sweat; screaming.
Just a thought! :-)
Author's Response:
If you Google "The 6 Millimeter Man" Shrinkingman's site comes up with a version of the story I posted there in 2006, I'm having issue with posting chapter 12 that I copied from Shrinkingman's site to here, there's something wrong with the software here at Giantess World and I've sent a mesage to the mods here about it. If you read chapter 12, please let me know what you think here, it's a really short chapter that ties everything together.
Date: June 20 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4: Amber's Prisoner
Well, okay, one other thing. I think that, technically, this story should be "nano" category. As six mm equals roughly 0.24% of an inch (which is considerably less than half).
Author's Response:
I changed it according to your request, but I think I forgot to add the 12th chapter, and I deleted the original at Writing.com! That sucks!
Date: June 20 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Car Accident
One more thing: it's a good thing he chose to escape from Amber and her mom after the near-accident. That heat lamp would've melted his clay hut! Covering him like a soon-to-be baked trout.
Date: June 20 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Lab Accident
My bad! That should've read "...all the same."
[Report This]Date: June 19 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 11: My Mom Tries To Get Custody
Hey! Nice to see you back here. I thought this story title sounded familiar. But, you obviously revised your screen name, so I re-read it, regardless. A good thing, too! You seemed to have made Amber's mother a little less altruistic than in the original story. A hunch I'm unable to confirm _or_ deny, however, as the original version seems to have been erased from the Old Archive.
Also, you seem to seriously intend writing a sequel to this classic, as I don't remember a Dr. Nebulous from the ending of the original version. But, again, I can't prove or disprove that belief due to the absence of the latter.
Rest assured, though, I did enjoy reading this version, all the time. So, welcome home. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic! I am also known as Ace Corona, but I use the Deuce Micro name for my underage stuff.