[Report This]Date: June 29 2016 1:40 PM Title: The Encounter that Will Change Everything
Jeez, that was awesome! I didn't expect the ending! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm certainly going to continue! :)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2016 8:03 PM Title: Life of a Princess
Loving this one once again! I thought you did a great job protecting Flavia as a sweet princess by showing how her servants decieved her into thinking humans could not talk. She is obviously a very deadly carnivore when it comes to smaller creatures than her, but if I was Ryan I would fall in love with her too. At first I thought Kyle was going to be the main guy, but I see that Ryan is undergoing more character grownth. Very interested to see where you go with this as I can see very tense situations coming if Flavia were ever reunited with her "Fiancee" and the people that made her think that humans were dumb animals. Also I'd like to see how deep Flavia's love for humans has gotten over the time she has spent with Kyle and Ryan. I'll bet if someone random human is rude to her she will not hesitate to eat them!!!
Author's Response:
Eheh, thank you for your kind words! While it's true Ryan has been having a bit of the spotlight, I tend on bringing more balance and develop Kyle a bit more.
I too think she wouldn't hesitate to eat a bold, irrespectul human! She's royal blood, after all ;)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2016 5:02 PM Title: Living in the Wild
Aww!
Wow, the emotions were written very well, I could actually connect with what Ryan was feeling!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the superb work!
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you could connect with at least one character! :P Too often, one of the great difficulties in gts writing is establishing a durable and plausible relationship between two kinds who are extremely different, plus having one praying on the other!
Thank you for your comment :)
Date: June 18 2016 7:26 PM Title: Life of a Princess
A cute story thus far! I'm already quite liking Flavia, despite her nature as a predator she seems like a very sweet and gentle person. I'll try to keep an eye on this one as it progresses!
Author's Response:
Oh, Flavia is most certainly dangerous. She has difficulties to control her predatory instinct towards such delicious looking tiny persons xD But out there, in the wild, not only will she control herself, but she'll also discover the true valor of friendship :) I'm really glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 7:26 AM Title: Life of a Princess
Well! This is a new scene. I look forward to the continuation. It's very rare that I get to read a brand new story before the writer has gotten very far into it. I am going to enjoy this one... though I probably won't comment after every chapter, I'll try to say something fairly frequently.
Author's Response:
Well thank you! :D The continuation should arrive very shortly, tomorrow or the day after. And if you feel like commenting, please don't refrain to do so, I don't receive much comments around here :P Anyways, I do really hope the story will please you :) see you again, hopefully!