Date: June 20 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this story is fascinating! It got my attention for the next chapters!
Date: June 20 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter for the amazing story. As always, I am really impressed with your ability to show the feeling of scale – this enormous difference of sizes between a boy and his tiny victims. The change of point of view at the beginning added to the overall quality of this chapter and increased the insignificance of tiny city.
I really liked the details you added – every action from the main character, every word he says, every body movement – everything affects the city in some way. Even the way, he deals with one of the cities, by merely stepping on it, described perfectly, starting from the great description of every leg and foot movement and ending with the destruction caused by impact and by his foot, quickly changing environment around.
Once again, really enjoyed everything in this chapter, as always – excellent quality.
Date: June 17 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
What an amazing story, with a great character introduction and detailed description and very impressive plot development, which makes this story very intriguing. You showed a great example of how character should be introduced in order to show their full power over his tiny subjects – the scale and the ease of transporting cities into the room just shows how insignificant these cities are compared to their ruler.
You are the author that always bring high quality content and I am sure that this story won’t be an exception. Really waiting for the next chapters with a hope that main character will come up with something interesting to punish these cities, which dared to disobey. ;)