Date: June 14 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
I very much enjoy the way you've constructed the story thus far. Nicely done
Author's Response:
Dude, that means so much coming from you. Thank you so much.
Date: June 14 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: Six Figure
Good chapter once again, even if I already know where its going. I think I may have misread Andrew , there's still something I did not consider until now.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I hope it continues to be enjoyable!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
This is a very good start! Nice pacing, not getting caught up in unnecessary detail, but still keeping it interesting. The two main characters seem to have personality, which is great, and I'm looking forward to reading about what darker thoughts lurk beneath the surface of Darcy's conscious mind :)
Author's Response: Well thank you, man! This story I really tried to stretch myself in writing and I'm finding that it's super fun to do. I love writing these two characters, and it's been very fulfilling and satisfying to have Darcy and Andrew interact the way they do. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Date: June 11 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
Oh I am not referring to Darcy eating Andrew, I'm referring to Andrew wanting to move out .
Author's Response:
oooooooh. well. both might happen. maybe neither. MYSTERY!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
The story is pretty solid. You've got good description and introspection.
My only slight critiques are that you're overusing the term 'dwarfing', and the pace could pick up just a bit.
As someone who does like Vore, I hope you change your mind about Darcy never intentionally eating him though. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
Dwarfing I can fix. The pace... eh. The story is 90%ish written, and unfortunately it may stay a slower pace... for now. My hope is that the second half of the story will make up for the pace in the first half (which lasts for about 2 more chapters).
Anyhow, as to the vore... who knows ;) something may still be on the... 'menu' for Darcy. ;)
Date: June 11 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
Just when I thought this would be a light story, you threw that little curve ball right at the end there.
Author's Response: Lol, I don't think Darcy would ever eat Andrew. Not intentionally, anyhow.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
Solid. It's been a while since I've seen any good gentle giantess stories.
Of course, I am eagerly awaiting some scenes with more giantess action.
Author's Response: Dude, I'm so happy you like it! This story has been in my head for a while so it feels great to finally get it out into the world. As far as gts action, this one starts out slow- there're little tidbits here and there to keep things interesting, but there is moooost deeeefinitely some heavy gts action here near the ending of the story (the second half, actually.) In fact, I may just release the third and fourth chapters together, just to get the show on the road. Who knows, though? What do you think?
[Report This]Date: June 08 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
Can't wait to see where this story goes!!
Author's Response: Dude, me too!!! *frantcally scribbles outlines and plots* Just kidding- the story is 90% written, and I truly hope you folks like where it goes! Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
I'm really liking this. I hope you continue it.
aaron
Author's Response: I'm vey glad you're liking it! Most of it is written so yes, most definitely plan on continuing this story :) thank you for reading!
Date: June 07 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon
I enjoyed reading this and giving feedback , its really fun. I haven't seen everything so it will be something completely new for me.
Darcy and Andrew are so likable, you just want to know how their story unfolds, how things will go for Andrew especially, since his whole life has been flipped upside down.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, Nostory! Yes, a lot I hope will be new for you and other readers. Turns out I'm actually tacking on a couple of chapters, so it may take even longer than expected. Oh well. It certainly wont be on the scale of how long the Virgin took, but a shorter time. Thanks again!