Date: August 05 2016 5:06 PM Title: Me, A Model?
Wow, Jessica as a giant model. That's a pretty cool idea. And it would certainly solve their income problems. I sure hope Ms. Schneider has the funds to cover this sort of venture. It would take an awful lot of material to cover those giant curves.
Author's Response:
I don't know if their income problem could even be called a problem ,Jack is after all, filthy rich. He can afford to do it but Caitlin has been on his ass over Jessica's expense costing a bomb. Yeah but if Jessica did swimsuits or lingerie then I think they could save money on that, until she can find a way to get Jessica into something that covers more. Thanks for the review!
Date: August 05 2016 10:17 AM Title: Me, A Model?
Very happy to see this chapter fully edited and posted- excellent stuff. Again, Caitlin does have a point- Jessica is not exactly in a position to argue- not when she consumes so much more resources that others. Still- modeling would beat out the other suggestions we discussed via email (though, it would be kinda hot to see Jessica let loose and plow through a condemned building for demolition). Lastly, there's something very captivating about this chapter- it's a rising action, it feels like all the build up prior to this is coming to a logical conclusion. I hope Jessica continues to learn more about herself and her abilities- and if she decides to do modeling, I think she'll be great at it. Also, super cute the way Jack carried on about Jessica. :)
Author's Response:
I hadn't noticed it until you pointed it out but what I've released so far has built up into this moment, an entire arc of the story. After this, it would be something else entirely as she jumps into all this. I would not mind seeing Jessica use building demolition as a way of venting, punching entire blocks down because she needs to release that stress in a healthy way.
Thanks for the review and all the help you've given so far!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2016 9:48 AM Title: Its Only A Model
Jessica underestimates the value she could provide in a job. There are plenty of fields where her unique talents would come in handy. Excavation, construction, and demolition are just a few that come to mind. Given that she'd be replacing many men and machines in those areas, she could easily earn enough to feed herself. You read about such giant machines like the Bagger 288. It cost 100 million to build and 10 million every time they want to move it to another location. She could save those companies loads of money.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the review! I think that's a very good point, her hands could easily move the earth with more precision than some of the machines currently used she could negotiate for a high salary given the manpower saved and other costs like moving it. Its one way she could earn it, I've thought of a few more where her talents could be put to good use. Right now she'd underestimate herself because she's now forced to survive in the outside world where the average person is smaller than her finger, she's still finding her feet at the moment.
Date: July 30 2016 10:08 PM Title: Its Only A Model
Hmm... I'm kind of bored with Jessica soooo, if you can, make a different series like a evil giantess destroying the world or something else. Danke.
Author's Response:
I've thought of doing a story like that, try something different but my writing schedule is just packed; after I finish these two stories, its another story for Intersizables, this series and BFG. Maybe if I ever find myself with some time between stories.
Date: July 30 2016 11:39 AM Title: Its Only A Model
Haven't had a chance to comment yet but I've been enjoying this story. I love the idea of a giantess trying her best to live among normal people, with all the challenges, prejudices, and awkward situations that entails. I'm curious what sort of job Jessica will apply for and how she will try to fit in society.
Author's Response:
Oh wow, its an honour to have you review this story! Thanks for it! That's the gist of this story and any sequels to it, Jessica trying to live her life as a giant among men. Oh you'll see that soon...even a giantess must work to put food on the table. I love writing all this, thinking how would being a giant affect a person's life, all the changes one would need to make to live a normal life.
Date: July 29 2016 8:03 PM Title: Its Only A Model
I love this chapter- its so revealing on both sides of the aisle and it reveals more and more about Jessica and Caitlin (tho i still think Caitlin ought to be squished).
Excellent stuff, Nostory!
Author's Response:
All it takes is once little accident, Jessica shifting her butt when Caitlin gets too close and she'll be a stain while Jessica gets herself a little man all to herself :D
I kid, I don't think Jessica would ever do that sort of thing. Thanks for all the help !
[Report This]Date: July 29 2016 12:37 PM Title: Its Only A Model
Was nice to see Jessica and Caitlin interacting like that, it was surprisingly civil, all things considered. And again, while I like Jess, Caitlin brought up some good points: if she eats enough to feed a city that's costing Jack and his family a fortune! She can't really afford to just sit around. Even if she gets a job that pays very little, at least she can feel good that she's trying to be independent! Another good chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Good points but Caitlin may not be accurate in all her fact reporting but the figure she uses is somewhere in that ballpark. I like the idea of Jessica working, it would help to reduce net spending and that's only for food! Thanks for the review!
Date: July 22 2016 11:56 AM Title: And The Whole Town Was There Too!
Man, Harold sure is a butthead. I kinda wish Jessica and her little boating accident would've put him out of the picture. And would someone please just squish Caitlin already?!?! Good to see this story rolling along. Great stuff as always!
Author's Response:
Jessica could crush his boat under her boobs if she wanted, use those twin tidebreakers and stop that boat in its path. Aw, I think Caitlin has some redeeming points. I'm still trying to find those points but you know, they have to be there somewhere....
[Report This]Date: July 22 2016 10:48 AM Title: And The Whole Town Was There Too!
That was awkward as heck! Anyway, like I said before as much of a prick as Harold is, I do think he brought up some good points and deserved an apology. Jess probably deserved an apology too for some things Harold did, but we all know Harold ain't apologizing. Also, Jessica REALLY doesn't like apologizing does she? That was the most forced, ungeniune apology ever, lol!
Author's Response:
Well I wouldn't judge her on this one, Harold is a real prick and she knows its really for show because Harold is not going to change is he? He would take the apology as a sign of he is on the right path.At least that is what I think, he would be the type of bully who thinks because the victim was made to say sorry, he would use it as a mandate to go further in his bullying.
Date: July 14 2016 11:40 AM Title: Second Perspectives
Confession time- I didn't think George Clooney was a terrible batman.
Anyhow, excellent chapter! Jessica is DEFINITELY someone i wouldn't mind seeing Ina Victoria's Secret mag :) :) :) :)
Author's Response:
George did a fine job, the movie's problems weren't the actors who were acting in the style asked of them. At least the movie got us The Dark Knight Trilogy.
Jessica could easily be the cover on a Victoria's Secret mag!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2016 10:16 AM Title: Second Perspectives
Nice update. It is sad. Jessica is almost alone. They should build more facilities for her.
Author's Response:
Currently its just Jack who could build stuff for her, the government won't do it at the moment and its all very expensive, even for a billionaire.
Date: July 08 2016 3:34 PM Title: Jess A Mess
Great chapter! As much as I dislike Harold, he made se valid points, it wasn't like he had bad intentions by fishing at the lake, it was just a grumpy old man having some alone time on his boat. Jessica is a guest there and was pretty patronizing. If I wasn't attracted to her and she came to my neck of the woods with that attitude I'd be pretty pissed myself. I'm a guy that can appreciate some peace and quiet...
Author's Response:
Harold's a grumpy young man, there will likely be some grumpy old men. So far it seems people still think Harold and Caitlin have valid concerns, fair enough. They do,for now....
[Report This]Date: July 08 2016 2:22 PM Title: Jess A Mess
Pusssaaaaaah. Love it! Well done, nostory. I really love the way you describe Jessica's body and her actions in this Lilliputian world. Tenouttaten.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: July 05 2016 12:03 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I'm wondering if Caitlin is lying trying to get Jack to hate Jessica.
Author's Response:
She has the motive to do it, that's a given. Jessica is this giant problem that wandered into her life. She's also not too shabby on the eyes, causes mayhem wherever she goes and Jack so far is defending her. It would be in her best interest to get Jack to remove Jessica from their lives asap. Good theory!
Date: July 05 2016 9:42 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Caitlin's gonna have some near death experience and Jessica's gonna save her, I'm calling it right now.
Author's Response:
Oh , she is? *looks ahead* Maybe.....* nudge nudge wink wink*
[Report This]Date: July 03 2016 1:16 AM Title: Teething Problems
As always, Harold is extremely punchable.
Great stuff, nostory!
Author's Response:
He has a face like a boot: Everyone wants to put their foot in it.
Date: July 02 2016 2:56 PM Title: Teething Problems
I found the timeskip between this chapter and the last one a bit jarring. As for Caitlin, I can see why she'd be angry, Jessica is beautiful and can't exactly be modest with her clothing. Harold seems like a prick but Jessica is kinda douchy in this story too, not a violent GTS but kind of abit of a douche sometimes, so I wouldn't put it past her to step on a car or something if someone ticks her off (which isn't hard). Anyway, this story doesn't get updated too often so I wont hold my breath for an update anytime soon, but Im glad you're continuing it!
Author's Response:
Oh, I guess I didn't put enough thought into the transition. Its a bit harsh for Caitlin to pick on Jessica's lack of modesty seeing as stores don't stock her clothes. Hmm...would Jessica step on a car? Possibly but it may be deliberate. I'll actually update this weekly for the next month or so because I've written up to chapter 5 so you'll see that! Thanks for the review!
Date: June 05 2016 11:47 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I like it, good job.
Author's Response:
Why thanks, so great to see a review from you!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2016 10:07 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I'm with versusterminus7. I've seen so many versions of this, so many different trials, not to mention I saw the original draft months ago it feels. Those were excellent as usual from you, don't get me wrong, but this seemed... more refined? Kind of like the difference in sweetness between sugarcane and the refined powder. Equally sweet, but one is more pleasing to the palette.
I look forward to future chapters!
Seeing as how you've finally submitted this, I suppose it's about time for me to post something...
Author's Response:
Yeah you have, you saw version 1 when she was more of a dick, you've seen into the future of this series. Thanks for the help with this prologue and of course the fact checking about American things. Its partly because of you that this is more refined.
You could post something related to Intersizables, that would help ;)
Date: June 04 2016 2:16 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
and it continues! Glad to see this up and honored to have contribute a couple of lines!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!