Date: July 24 2016 1:44 PM Title: Neighbours
A Really like playful yet gentle giantess's so this story was a really nice read, I encourage you to do more stories like this, and my only problem with the story is that the ending felt a bit rushed, you could've added them going home, watching a sunset, then confessing their love
Other then that, great read
Author's Response:
I agree the ending can feel a bit rushed. I had a nice picture in my mind, but it seems I was too much in a hurry to really set the mood for it to be right. Still, I wanted to end on that note instead of that sunset you talk about, it would have been too cliché for me :P
And thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2016 9:29 AM Title: Neighbours
This is one of the best stories ever written here in this site. I loved it! Simply a beautiful story talking about love... It's really peaceful! Also, the way you've narrated it makes everything get even more comfortable, and honestly, I've been reading lots of stories here for a long time, but when I read yours, I had to create an account just to comment about it. I should congratulate your for this fiction, but I'll just say 'thanks, you nailed it!' :D
Please, keep going with these pacific stories... They are lovely! o/
(English is not my first language as well, so I'm sorry for the possible misspelling here in this review)
Author's Response:
Eheh you're gonna make me blush now ^^ I mean, really xD Wow, thank you so much for such kindness, I dont receive that everyday. It's... it's really heartwarming :) The fact that you actually created an account just to comment on my story is an honor I will remember for a long time. It's amazing to see how a lil story lost in the depths of the internet can have such an impact on someone, and I'm glad it's still possible!
You're right when you point this story has a pacific tone. It's kinda rare in the gts world where most tinies end up being vored or crushed under a foot. Which leads me towards saying it's more than the big boobs and unbirth, it's all about the connection between the micro and the macro. If theres no connection at all, if it's only for the fetish, something will be missing - a touch of authenticity, to put it like that. It's very important to me.
Well now that my face isnt red anymore, I wanna thank you again for this very kind comment :) It really helps me. And stay tuned if you liked stories like that, I have 4 new arrivals that are coming here. They will be very similar in tone to the one you just read. And don't worry my friend, your english is as fine as mine ;)
Date: June 05 2016 5:41 AM Title: Neighbours
What a cute story! Yes, there's some mistakes in the syntax and pacing, but none of it is terribly important; the story itself is still perfectly fine, and I enjoyed reading it. The relationship between them is cute, and Marissa's gentleness and protectiveness is very sweet!
Author's Response:
Hey thank you very much :D It's an honor to receive a comment for you, as I've been following you for quite a few years on deviantart. I really enjoy your work and all those long-tongued girls you present us :P It's something that influenced me a lot in my writing, and it shows greatly in the other story I've posted here, if you're curious :) And I'm glad the story still works fine xD It's something that weighs heavily on my mind, not being able to render a story I mean. I will also intertwine two websites together and deeply thank you for the favorites on dA ;P I hope you enjoyed them just as much as this one :)
Thanks again, and take care of you! :D Hope to see you soon!