Date: April 17 2021 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great, won't you write again? We need to continue with the story is very good, please don't leave us like this
[Report This]Date: February 24 2019 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a really good vore story, and in the perfect size to read it completely while taking a little break at work... as for the story itself, I'm surprised how Naomi gained the ability to control this guy's size and mind... Numbing his mind so he could comfortably die digested inside her stomach was a very noble act of hers (and of your creativity) - she really deserves all the little man she can eat!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great build up. You do an excellent slow buen.
Date: June 01 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
i always follow your stories.. i read this one many years ago.. some time i read again.. and again.. willing prey is may favorite..
i hope you write more... i always wait..
thanks for share..
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading (again). Yes, it blows my mind that I submitted this one 11 years ago. I looked at it last night, and felt the editing was really rough. So, I went back, split it into three chapters, and fixed the paragraph code, some punctuation, quotes and some other minor language things. I also love semi-willing vore (the prey is afraid of death, but still compelled to obey and/or overawed by pred.) Unfortunately, this site does not have a forum, but I participate at Eka's Portal (https://aryion.com/#show-forum-tree).
Date: January 06 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
This takes the concept of this forum to a far more interesting level than the average yarn. Good story!
I tried the same a while back with my Miss Beautivore 2009 story.
Author's Response: Thank you timescribe. I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my story.
Date: February 06 2009 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
nice story read this a while back really hit the mark,sexy benevolent a real turn on look forward to reading more of your work.
Date: March 13 2008 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good well-written story. Always erotic reading about a shrunken chap being swallowed by a beautiful female; but one thing missing here, and that is sex. It's the foundation...bricks and mortar of an erotic tale, and if the intended victim is aware of his fate while being introduced to the various sexy places of a female...it excites both the victim and the reader.
Hope you dodn't mind my comments...they could help you for your future tales.
Author's Response: Hi Banfield,rnrnThank you for your review; I appreciate your comments very much. rnrnAs to sex, you may be right. For my own self, however, the sex in the stories, be it either insertion, pre-shrinking sex, or some other form, has never been much of a turn-on in the stories themselves. I like the subjection and the swallowing. rnYou will note, I hope, that my other story, 'Louise' does have sex in it, so I am certainly not planning to be a purist on this.rnAs to future stories, I will certainly take your recommendation into account. While writing these stories is about self-gratification to a degree, putting them onto a forum like this one (finally) is also about sharing and that means taking other people's desires into account.rnCheers,rnScrumptious.rnP.S. Thank you for all of the stories that you have written and that I have read over the years.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2007 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't believe this story got no reviews. This is a worthy story; I thought so the first time I read it a while back, and I still think so. Bravo and please point me to more of your vore writings. ladyprey