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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2026 1:07 AM Title: The Cinema

Nice. So Parvian's are trained in what to do if they fall in Magnian food...I wonder if they are trained in what to do if they are swallowed all the way without the Magnian noticing. Or if they are trained in what to do if they fall between two magnian's having sex.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 3:10 PM Title: The University

Yay! You're back! I love the details of the world you created for this story - the walkways, the monorail, the little alcove above the tables, the social mores. Great stuff!

Not gonna lie, with how hungry Ashley was, I was kind if hoping for an almost-vore moment. But regardless, this was a good read. The sizeism and prejudice theme is very timely at the moment (unfortunately).



Author's Response:

To be honest, I was very tempted to go the vore/mouthplay route as that's my favorite scenario, but decided to restrain myself this time and focus more on world and character development.  (I even had one written for the end in my first draft.)  Never fear, I'll be back with more!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2016 2:05 AM Title: The Roommate

Always great to see a new chapter of this story. I was very excited that it was a mouth focused one as well. A very perilous and sexy operation. I know these are one-shots but a Parvian rooming with three giant women sounds like it has potential for all sorts of scenarios.

(FYI, I think you called Daisy Kate at one point towards the end when she's eating the ice cream.)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've found that it's a lot easier to write these short episodes rather than a big long epic like the Cairnbridge stories.  (I'm going to finish The Manor one of these days, or I'll change my name to George R.R. Martin...)  I've definitely considered following up on the chapters I've published and the ones I'm working on.  I've tried to finish them in ways that allow me to revisit the charaters.

Good catch on the name mix up.  I had hastily finished the story yesterday after sitting on it for a month.

Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Cinema

I hope they didn't go see episode VII because that was definitely not a good movie.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 4:38 PM Title: The Cinema

Fun story. It was pretty obvious where they were going to land but I enjoyed it anyway. I was actually hoping they'd wind up in her mouth and have to make a daring escape but this was exciting too. I loved the Death Star exhaust port analogy. Very funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pixis!  I had considered going further with the mouth escapade, but decided to go with the Death Star analogy, as well as to show that Parvians weren't completely helpless in situations like this.  But that isn't to say that it will always work out for them...stay tuned!

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