Date: June 22 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I take back my previous comment. I guess we are just back to shrunken shit with no updates. Woe are we. It was a nice effort on your part if not.....small.
Author's Response:
Lol, I think the logistics around writing shrunken stories is perhaps a little easier to contain and keep low key as opposed to the whole world seeing a 100 foot tall woman. As I mentioned, I am currently developing a story featuring growth as opposed to shrink, though i just need to tidy up a few of my other stories before unleashing the first few chapters. There was a flicker of growth in another of my stories, though the breadthof the story was primarily a shrinker. I am also contemplating doing antoher story in this world featuring Dwight, but that one is still no more than a handful of lines in word at the moment.
As for growth, what is it you seek? give me some ideas how to tailor my giantess tale to capture some those elements. thanks!
Date: June 09 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
You write and update frequently. I have never been a fan of the shrunken side you tend to lean towards and to each their own. I wish as many of the great giantess authors would also but, shrunken seems to have the larger following. This seems to be an offshoot for you and its intriguing so thank you for writing. I guess they can't be reasoned with?
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving this one a go. I appreciate it. I have one story in the works that focuses on growing as to opposed to shrinking but am in the process of finishing a few of my current projects before posting new ones. Perhaps our paths shall cross again :)
[Report This]Date: June 09 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm at a loss of words. You finished it? Just like that? Did that one review about finishing stories got the best of you?
I hope it didn't because I liked it when I see multiple stories updated in a single day.
The end was,....solid. It was a hell an I'm sure that experience taught him a lesson.
I thought you were going for a long story this time. I guess not. (I think the stories with a family get more popular.)
What happened to the story called "Nick"? I was excited for Clarise and Tom and all this fun to come up. I hope you saved it as a draft or something.
Well, the good news is that maybe you can spend more time following those cliffhangers.
(I get dissapointed when you have a nice cliffhanger for one story, but then when you upload the next few updates on some stories, that story won't be one of the updated ones.)
Well, this was a good run. Never thought hell seemed so sexy. Well, I guess this is a hell for cheaters in relationships.
I can't wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
The only valid component of that distorted review was the fact that I do have too many unfinished projects on the go. I am confident in my writing ability and one review isn't going to change that. I removed Nick to focus on my remaining stories ( Anna will be the next to be finished...) I may follow this story up with another called Dwight's Tale or Fury 2. We'll see. As always Tom I very much appreciate all of your continued interest and support and for coming to my defence with that abysmal review.
When Anna is finished I'll bring Nick back :)
Date: June 08 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hate cliffhangers. :l
Author's Response:
No worries the next installment will be the balance of this story
[Report This]Date: June 07 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Give Ferrel to the giantess! All tied up like that! Maybe she will have some fun with him since he can't do anything but squirm. A giantess may like a squirmer.
I think that's the best idea for the next chapter. Then again, you are full of surpirses. I did not expect a rescue. I thought the giantess was going to pick him up and Daryl was going to talk to her.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I might sound like a broken record at this point, but I have to keep saying it: This is an excellent story :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I am going to be moving this story away from my usual style and tags. Hopefully you'll still feel the same when the dust settles...
[Report This]Date: June 05 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story just became 10x more awesome. This is the suspense I was waiting for!
Being trapped knowing that a giantess is going to get you is so sexy! If only this crate was a hole that Daryl slides into and lands on a pair of sticky panties. Then he is stuck there as a giantess approaches. (That should be in an another story.)
Also, the fact that Daryl is so terrified makes it so thrilling. Man, now imagine some naughty giantess is holding a tied up man above her panties ready to drop him in and there is nothing he could do about it. That is like the sexified version of this.
My top 3 stories on this site now are 1. Tom's story, 2. Shoebox, and now 3. Hell hath no fury.
Tom's story obviously is great because it has everything. Shoebox has so much potential and and I think I will have a new favorite giantess soon. This story has this survival aspect and the giantess's are scary and sexy. You feel scared but attracted to them.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Like you mentioned in an earlier review this story is a little bit different from the norm for me. Where I'm going with it may alter your opinion as it iis something new to my stories. We'll see...
Date: June 05 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Also, there was no mention of Dwight.
Date: June 05 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, it felt like a dream becuase you start one paragraph with "his sleep was fitful" or something like that.
Then there was this long paragraph where Daryl says "what is this place". So I thought that it was a random place in his dream. Never thought that he was actually just thinking that while laying down.
Haha, I thought my beer analogy was clever.
Can't wait from the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The beer analogy was pretty clever.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Still an excellent story :) (and I'll throw in with TomSpeedy on his theory about the beer, I at least think he probably brewed it using the piss somehow)
Author's Response:
Or it is really a can of beer...and this is not a dream
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Obviously this dream is important. I just don't know how important. This dude I bet is an illusion.
I bet the beer is actually some piss and Daryl just imagined it's beer. It only tastes good becuase he is thirsty.
Not sure how long this dream will be but I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
As a proud Canadian I would never meddle with the beer. Sacrilegious! BTW who said this was a dream?
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Duggernaut, u r the only author I know who is great at giantess threesomes. The way you describe giantesses sharing a guy just makes me want to be that guy so bad.
I bet if Dwight was watching these two be intimate behind a computer screen, I bet he would think it was hot too.
Good question, why are they all hot? Then again, everyone woman in your stories are hot. (Keep it this way.) I guess that's how Duggernaut's world is. Full of hot women. I wish I was there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, I love the idea of two giantesses sharing a ittle something to make them get off. All women are hot, a man just has to be able to see those things beyond the superficial and suddenly every woman can be a goddess in her own right. :)
Date: May 30 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
It certainly is an intriguing read. A little slow on answers but the plot is interesting. The was a story similar to this called, "The Incident at Forrest Lake" about a school being sent to another dimension but it had good giantess' in it as well as bad. It doesn't apear there will be any good ones in this story though lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts about this. I have tried to keep some things in the dark while pointing readers in the right direction. At the end of this all will be revealed as to what is happening...at least that's the plan
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Surprised the reviews are so slow in coming (by the standards of your other stories, anyway). Don't get discouraged, this is an excellent story :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nod. It's kind of funny stories I think meh should do okay sort of plod along and others I think won't catch do. I dunno... but again thanks for the read and review :)
[Report This]Date: May 28 2016 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
The 3 women Daryl screwed seemed like perfect 10 girls. I can't figure out how this new girl is that special.
These women are brutal. I was thinking that this girl will play with him first. I guess not. It is Helll out there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
If I was in this place, I would volunteer to be played with. At least have some fun instead of suffering out there.
Then again, my version of fun isn't the same as these guys.
When goddesses pee, the liquid must be holy. I'm kidding, is probably like some sort of deadly acid that these kids are used to.
Honestyl, I would guessed they eat their shit too. Haha! Now that would be fun to watch. A girl poops, and it's the jackpot.
Of all the crazy stories you created Duggernaut, this is by far the craziest. #1.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't say I expected this to be a mega+survival story.....I'm pleasantly surprised :)
Date: May 24 2016 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice chapter.
Forgive me if this seems out of place, but do you have plans on continuing Anna's Awakening? I loved where it was going.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the inquiry, yes I do have plans in the very near future to add to Anna’s Awakening plus I am also reworking Bang Your Head. I haven't abandoned the other stories though I sometimes get ahead of myself.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! I just realized that this was your story. Interesting to see a grow story rather than a shrink one from you.
I prefer shrink becuase I like it when the world has no idea that a person is hiding a shrunken person. However, I will still follow this story just like all of your stories becuase of your reputation as a writer.
I'm a little worried that with these new stories, Tom's story will be forgotten. If that is the case, then shoebox will be my new favorite to follow as the giantess and shinkees are interesting to root for.
As far as new stories, you do a great job writing stories with multiple characters in them. I was wondering if you considered having like only 2 characters in a short story and developing them over time. (Husband and wife. Boyfriend and girlfriend. Neighbors, classmates, coworkers.) I know you like to introduce new characters as a way of "keeping things interesting" but I'm wondering if you could keep things interesting with just 2 people. Might be a challenge but it's worth a shot. (You could have additional characters, just not like 10 more like your other stories.)
After reading all 3 chapters, I'm hooked. These girls want revenge on Daryl for being a greedy guy and for lying to them.
Will they have a giantess foursome? I saw giantess 3some's in your stories but never a 4some. Maybe this is it!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 22 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good three chapters of the story; you have really focused on showing daryl as a true scumbag and eliminating any sympathy we as the readers would have for him. This is really important since he is the one who will be tortured or harmed and there will be a good deal of justice and cathartic reactions. What a lot of destruction stories do that put's me off is that the wrong characters tend to suffer the most and it ends up being a torture porn for someone who does not deserve it. However, here, I find myself rooting against Daryl, which is good.
On that note, please make sure you also develop the girl's chracters as well; they don't seem like mindless eating machines of destruction, so make sure you don't reduce them to that. We know what motivates them to attack Daryl, but why terrorize that town? Why eat that one guy and then piss in the building? Those questions should be answered through character development. Additionally, I hope that the girl's personallities are different and having a variaty of personas and beliefs and motifs will really hook in and engage your audience more. Maybe one of them doesn't like harming the townsfolk? Maybe one of them will end up not wanting to be the steriotypical 'Vengful destroyer'? Or, what if they all just disagreed on what to do with Daryl? Considering any of these would make this story seriously stand out amongst the cliche ones on this site.
Overall, great start to the story; I can see a LOT of potential with this and am looking forward to how you will write this :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read the story and share an insightful review. I concur about establishing a character deserving of his fate. This story is about to take shift. I will try and develop distinct personalities for some of the females that appear. There will also be additional males to enhance tension and an attempt to broaden the reader's impression of Daryl. Hopefully you will continue to provide feedback on what you feel is working and what isn't. Thanks again.