Date: April 28 2020 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope some they you'll come back to these characters.
Author's Response:
I've written some miscellaneous scenes with these characters, though it's paid content. Not saying something couldn't still appear here on the site someday, though.
Date: October 04 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
This story is REALLY good.Judy and Becky are so gentle,but wery dominating to mark.would reaaly like to see more practices and mark being weared in shoe and mark licking his mother and sisters feet.please continue writing i really like your stories,and this one is one of the best of all stories on this site.and can you tell me when you are gonna continue?
Author's Response:
I am open to doing another story with these characters sometime, but it's not currently being worked on. Glad you liked this one
Date: July 04 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
The best story ever this one and the one before. I JUST LOVE IT, those connections between mother and daughter. I love when mother finds reasons to "test" him its so oryginal, i can only say one thing.... PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS, MUCH MORE! thanks and wow..
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I'm glad you've enjoyed this series. I would like to continue writing these characters someday.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nice ending! I can't wait for the next story, if you continue it! If you weren't already on my favorite authors list, you are now!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: June 17 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great ending to a great story. Again I saw no spelling/grammar mistakes and I loved the character development. I hope this is not the last we see of them.
Author's Response:
This is definitely not the last of them. Thanks for reading!
Date: June 17 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, i'm a fan of this story and the oversight universe. It was a pleasure to read it!
Date: June 17 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Much, much needed!
Since your stories tend to have a little bit more plot & defined characters than the average giantess stories, anytime I read about a tiny's family treating him, err, like in a story by Jacksmith, a part of me went "no! that's not how it works, what's so terribly wrong with them?".
Author's Response:
Hehe. Glad to hear it.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another great story featuring Mark, Joy and Becky. I really like that Joy and Becky are kind to Mark and that they actually get along.
Though for the next story with these characters, i hope we have more interactions between Joy and Mark, since it's usually mostly Mark and Becky. Maybe even have her bring up the topic of his crush on Melissa.
Author's Response:
These first two stories were more or less meant to showcase Becky training with Mark while Joy instructs in safety, but you're right that it would be good to show a little more between Joy and Mark in the next story; I definitely plan to. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Lovely ending! Well, compared to the other series Mark was pretty lucky. The guy wouldn't complain if he knew that could be much worse! I really like Becky, she is adorable. And the mom is scary and loving at same time, like almost all mothers... Thank you for this story.
Author's Response:
Mark would definitely be counting his blessings if he was in a different story. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
It is a big universe, not everyone is going to be like Judy or the others. I would expect a small pocket of resistence to the prd's to start popping up since it happens with pretty much everything in real life.
Author's Response:
There are indeed those who oppose the PMRD. I've hinted at them before but I may have to show more of them sometime. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome story. There were no spelling/grammar mistakes. I also do not mind a slow build up, it adds depth and flavor to a story. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks much.
Date: June 14 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I thought that the worst that could possibly happen would be her mom making educational videos so that other families don't blah blah blah, but no, he just *had* to bite...
Author's Response:
Hehe. He was ready to get the heck out of there.
Date: June 08 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this. I'd be interested to know how small he can be made.
Author's Response:
Thanks! He can go down to one inch.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was never aware such testing existed, I now wonder why none of your other characters were afforded such things...you may be liable for injuries sustained.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately for some of my other characters, this story is placed a bit later in the timeline.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great story Jack. I haven't been around for a while but your work still amazes me. Your depth of writing, the way you create your character and tell your story. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Yeah, haven't seen your name around in a while. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 04 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love your work, will Timeout be making a comeback any time soon?
Author's Response:
I would like to put out a new Timeout soon, yes.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I feel bad for Becky, she was obviously worried about her brother. I also wonder if you figured out her son has a crush on Melissa.
Author's Response: Joy may be aware that her son has a crush on Melissa, though to her the reasoning for why he didn't come out the shoe is irrelevant; they just have to do something about it now.
Date: May 29 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope her plan is based on repeating the drill in the 1st story much more often.
I hope for him, I mean, because I can't think of an alternative plan to make it never happen again that's not significantly worse than that (be 24/7 with one of them, be locked somewhere, ...).
Too bad he doesn't seem to realize he's the 2nd luckiest shrunken boy under the Shrinking Act :)
Author's Response: Hehe. It's actually a little more complicated than the drill in the first story, but hopefully as fun to read. And I'm pretty sure Scott would give a couple limbs in order to switch places with this guy.
Date: May 29 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting so now he is a foot tall. Love the descriptions of Joy and Becky each handling him. I can hardly wait for Joys rules. Well done.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response: Thanks! We'll get to hear and see Joy's plan next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
The kindness, the caring...it's making me think the real Jacksmith is tied up somewhere in need of help and possibly late for something.
Good read though.
Author's Response: I figure by writing stories like this sometimes, it reminds everyone that my characters like Carly really are in a league of their own, personality-wise.