Date: May 26 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
You describe what it's actually like to be in her shoe so well. I was thinking he might get out and Melissa would secretly see him and casually keep him for herself. Maybe next time.
Great story,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it was convincing. Luckily for Mark, Melissa's actually not a psychopath like many of my giantess characters.
Date: May 26 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 1, enjoyed it very much. Well written. Nice set up. You actually can imagine yourself as Mark. Well done,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks much!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Did she scream simply because she was surprised to see her brother?
Author's Response:
It was because she realized he'd been inside her shoe the whole time.
[Report This]Date: May 25 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
If you keep writing about nice siblings, Carly is gonna get you.
Author's Response:
Implying Carly is NOT nice? I think she'd call herself 'tough but fair.'
[Report This]Date: May 22 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes! It's why i like "Like Mother, Like Daughter" and Roxy's weekend home. I love it when they have fun with shrinking.
Author's Response:
I like that too. I'm planning to write another Roxy story sometime, just not sure when.
Date: May 22 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very promising Start. I'm happy you continued The Story. I Hope it'll be a Little bit longer than the first Part. Very good
Author's Response:
Yes, I expect this one will be a few chapters longer. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Becky being nice to her tiny...what madness is this? ;)
Another great JS tale.
Author's Response:
I figured people could use a break after ALB5's raunchy mess.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter and i'm glad to see another Mark story. I also like that he doesn't mind helping around the house at that size.
Author's Response:
Thanks man. I thought I'd try to show that not everyone is being tormented while shrunken in this world.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I always wondered how often scenarios like this might happen in this Shrink-Act universe.
Author's Response:
Still running statistics, but the predicted answer is: at least semi-often.
Date: May 21 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
i dont want to seem like an asshole but can you update the freshman already? i cant handle this lack of closure
as for this story, its an interesting start and im excited to see these characters again
peace...or whaterver
Author's Response:
I actually do plan to update Freshman sometime soon. Thanks for reviewing.