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Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 3:45 PM Title: Japanese Tourist Trap

Pretty good story, but generally not my cup of tea. I like the longer, more developed stories, these quick, violent oneshots don't do it for me; it's well written though. I'd like to know more about Mitsumi and her tiny men collection but I'll just have to imagine it since the story just hints at these things.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked how it was written, even if it's not your thing.
Admittedly, I did wrestle over whether Mitsumi should kill Clyde, or if she should take him home with her, especially with him being one of the "rare ones". I also did think about doing a follow-up series focusing on her collection, but that would require me to do a lot of research about the Osaka area and Japanese culture and mannerisms in general. I'm not saying that I'm not willing to do it, but it'd be a bit of work to begin to fulfill.

I can understand wanting more developed stories, and I have written some of those as well. Lately, though, I have mostly been experimenting with different settings and scenarios as oneshots.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 9:30 PM Title: Japanese Tourist Trap

Bravo good sir.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

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